oozaru2023
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Thanks, I had actually added some dialogues and situations where her classmates find out that she cheated on Kirito with an old man and her friends Liz, Lisbeth, and Klein turned their backs on her, even Kirito arrived at her house. Suguha consoles him by saying that she will be with him. She always does, even Yui asks Kirito now who my mom will be, I even thought about adding an argument between Suguha and Asuna with a slap included at the end, it seemed redundant to me so I left it thereI actually wrote about it back in Pixiv after the ending of Part 1 before the China issues started, seems his model had 'issues' actually when using the blue color for the eyes or something? Didn't quite understood the answer, but it was basically that he wasn't changing it because of that.
Yeah, Asuna was written extra-retarded in this one, even if we tried to blame the Hypno App messing with her brain at first, afterwards she either went full retard or the app just plain out fried her common sense, having basically no reaction to Nishida confessing all the reasons she left Kirito were completely made up is dumb XP
I remember reading your end, really liked it, is a lot more 'karmic' compared to the 'kinda happy' one it the actual story went for even if it was still kinda satisfying for me (I prefer yours being more of a 'Suguha wins by being herself' over the 'Suguha won because it was her plan all along', but that's more for me being a fan of her actual character, I don't mind it being a Reverse NTR scheme of hers much)...but yeah, Asuna calling her daughter with Nishida Yui felt like the ultimate disrespect, honestly if the actual AI Yui had any shred of dignity left she should have immediately stolen all the money Nishida got from his ex-wife with the hypno app as revenge for it XD
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