Gentlemen, I was walking today and it occurred to me how I would like to see this update.
On Monday, Kirito goes up to the top floor and goes to Kyoko's office. She asks Asuna to come out to discuss something with Kirito. Asuna comes out and Inoda pulls her into his back room and there is an IRL scene.(on your imagination - for example, the friction of a penis between thighs in tights.)You can split the screen in the game at this point and we would see Kirito and Kyoko talking in the office, and Asuna and Inoda in the back room.
I think that blowjob and sex with Asuna are not necessary at all, so I see it this way.
Kirito and Asuna meet near Kirito's house and go on a date. After returning home, they have lunch, chat, then lie down on the bed and Asuna offers sex, but Kirito says that he does not feel very well and is very tired. Asuna is slightly displeased, but agrees. Then the same events happen - a call and Kirito asks Asuna to leave.
The action continues as in the current update, but instead of the hotel, Asuna and Inoda go to the base. Kirito leaves the brothel and Asuna calls him (the same conversation, of course Alice and Klein are not around, so Asuna finds it suspicious that Kirito thinks for a long time.) Kirito then goes upstairs from the underground . On the way, he meets Liz and they go to the base together.
At this time, you realize what is starting to happen. Asuna's status has been updated, and the scenes in the menu are changing. Blah blah blah. On the way to the base, Kirito and Asuna meet Klein, who has escaped from the Guild. He asks what happened last night, Kirito says that we need to discuss everything later. They move on (Asuna's status has been updated). They meet Alice, who is walking from her building, she also asks about the night and the brothel. Kirito says that we should get together at Klein's and discuss everything.(Liz looks at Kirito strangely after hearing about the brothel.) (Asuna's status has been updated)
Kirito and Liz move on and she breaks down, asking Kirito about the brothel. There is a little conversation going on.(Asuna's status has been updated). Soon, they arrive at the base. Liz goes to the kitchen, and Kirito finds Asuna in the pool.(She is sitting on the penis of the invisible Inoda). He then undresses, goes into the pool. He sits down next to Asuna and tries to hug her, but she pushes him away because there is an invisible Inoda nearby. Kirito does not understand what is wrong, and Asuna, inflamed by a feeling of jealousy and a member inside, angrily asks what he was doing at night in a brothel.
Kirito sighs and begins to explain - something strange is happening, and he discovered a memory node in a brothel. Realizing that she may not believe it (Kirito is not really mentally retarded), he says that he saw in the memory maze how Oberon "tortured" her. But he doesn't blame Asuna for anything, because she was in captivity, and this is just a game.
Kirito gets up and leaves the pool. Inoda starts fucking Asuna underwater. Asuna's thoughts are, "She doesn't understand what was going on in the brothel if she didn't see Kirito. She tends to believe Kirito since no one knew about Oberon. She feels ashamed that Kirito saw the scenes with Oberon. Then Asuna becomes even more ashamed that she took revenge on Kirito out of anger by having sex with Inoda on their shared bed on the second floor of the base. Then an orgasm comes and she feels good, ashamed at the same time, and she remembers that Kirito said he didn't blame her and it was JUST a GAME (Asuna's status has been updated) , and her mind breaks down against the background of strong shame and guilt (and a strong orgasm). She really FELL, not "Inoda's dick Inoda's dick, oh what a whore I am"
Then Asuna comes out of the pool. Liz made lunch. During lunch, Asuna's thoughts are that something strange is happening in the game and Kirito is trying to figure it out. She should help and support him and in no case put pressure on nedo. Asuna remembers that Kirito refused to have sex in the morning and thinks that he is too tired of his investigation in the game. And since Kirito says that it doesn't matter what happens in the game (Asuna's status has been updated), then she has enough Inodes for sex in the game, and Kirito needs support and love.
I don't pretend that my script is better, during the walk, these thoughts came to my mind very obsessively.
Thank you for reading it, I hope you found it not bad.