RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [Part 2 v0.80] [Fujino]

[mos555]

for anyone who doesn't get why this ending matters so much, just watch this (spoilers ahead). suguha really deserves this ending for the closure she never got in s1/canon story t-t

 

[seifukulover]

lock him inside in a perpetual ogre ass raping routine crancking up the pain to the max with no possiblity of escape, IRL while he's locked up there chemically castrate him and left him in a vegetative state for the rest of his life.

Now we're talking! Make me hate the villain, then let me see him utterly defeated by the end; that's what makes a satisfying ending.

 

[Infeno2.0]

It's cruel, of course, but I can't find the strength to say it's wrong. The players in this game are divided into two categories - those who play just to jerk off and those who want Inoda to fucking die. So, brother, this is a great idea.

It's not cruel also it's not suposed to be just or fair, it's only unadulterated brutal cathartic revenge.
The players want to kill Inoda/Asuna and the others that's easy the real thing let them alive to make them suffer be ashamed
But this is not allowed for some fucked up reason, but i would say there's a market and money to be made in Revenge NTR the only thing missing are developers and authors with balls to do it.

for anyone who doesn't get why this ending matters so much, just watch this (spoilers ahead). suguha really deserves this ending for the closure she never got in s1/canon story t-t

Oranges and Apples, the canon Sugu maybe deserve better luck, Fujno verse one don't.

 

[nhami]

Based on the story in part 2. We will probably have a

Here we go again with another perk list compendium, great work by the way thanks to the author, but it's kinda funny every time Fujino take a break in his 30 days schedule someone bring it back.

[Surrogacy Deal]【Mindset】 “I just need to help him conceive a child, and then I can... return to a normal life with Kirito...”

Asuna agreed to Inoda's request, promising to help him become a surrogate mother. But is this really to help Inoda, or is it just a convenient excuse to engage in unprotected intimacy with him? It doesn't matter anymore. After becoming pregnant, this twisted relationship will come to an end.

This perk in particular give the impression in this phase Asuna is having constant sex with Inoda, but still want to break things off to go back with Kirito?
Obviously this is Inoda manipulation, but let's take as face value how she getting pregnant by Inoda would help her to go back to Kirito? A Surrogacy Deal implies she will have to give the baby away to Inoda how she hopes to explain that to Kirito?
That makes zero sense.
The way the perk is framed "I can... return to a normal life with Kirito..." and "After becoming pregnant, this twisted relationship will come to an end. " give 2 vibes at same time, that she is going to do that behind Kirito's back knowing this is just Inoda's impregnation fetish and passing the baby as kirito's.
And at same time that she's being forced to do that for "this twisted relationship will come to an end." implying that Kirito maybe know what's going on and for some reason can't do nohting to interfere.

Maybe the twist that Fujino is hinting could be this, Inoda will receive some sort of power from the Admin/council as usual, but this time IRL, Mind Control and all that, what he will use to control everyone beside Asuna and Kirito because he wants to break her and just humiliate kirito showing Asuna choosing him, more or less in a hostage situation, well that would be fucked up
The Admin once said that to Kirito "since you is doing nothing, I should pick the other as my choosen one" maybe she already did that because the ritual since he is her/Yui real father

Based on the story of part 2. We will probably have a cliché staple NTR plot for the Surrogacy Deal perk. Inoda plays the victim and say he never had a family ask Asuna to help him have a family. Asuna Motherly Instinct perk activates and she accept to conceive from Inoda. Asuna have sex once with Kirito just so Kirito think the baby belong to him. Asuna conceives Inoda baby while Kirito remain oblivious. The story ends with Inoda living close to Asuna and Kirito house or even on the same house as Kirito and Asuna with Inoda having daily sex with Asuna.

The only intriguing part of the story left is Suguha and Sinon character arcs and maybe the council and the administrator descent into the real world plot.

I think the council and the administrator plotline will be also done by the book. Administrator will go to the real world but Kirito will save the day. The most that could happen is the Administrator casting a increase libido spell on either FOG or the real world when she descends.

The most interesting thing that could happen is Suguha and Sinon becomng sex friend with Kirito. Suguha gets a happy ending where Suguha gets Kirito that the canon story robbed of her.

Asuna father will probably appear in the end of the story to explain what happened between Asuna and Sugou probably explaining Asuna susceptibility to fall into corruption.

 

[Aniky Light]

Now we're talking! Make me hate the villain, then let me see him utterly defeated by the end; that's what makes a satisfying ending.

just thinking about an ending like that makes my nerves relax, it would be really satisfying

 

[mos555]

Now we're talking! Make me hate the villain, then let me see him utterly defeated by the end; that's what makes a satisfying ending.

But this is not allowed for some fucked up reason, but i would say there's a market and money to be made in Revenge NTR the only thing missing are developers and authors with balls to do it.

The question is, does Fujino have a goal to make the ending "satisfying"? Perhaps Fujino's goal is maximum discomfort?

Fujino -
"I will make an ending in which a good hero wins and you will forget this game in a week or I will make an ending that will make you suffer, feel discomfort and anger from injustice. And you will remember this game FOREVER!"

 

[mos555]

just thinking about an ending like that makes my nerves relax, it would be really satisfying

Ahaha! I think Fujino is sitting and waiting for everyone to relax! Suguha is strong, she will help Kirito and he will win! Sinon knows everything, she will defeat the council and destroy Inoda.

Fujino sits and laughs -
"You don't even know what kind of pain awaits you ahead!"

 

[Aniky Light]

The question is, does Fujino have a goal to make the ending "satisfying"? Perhaps Fujino's goal is maximum discomfort?

Fujino -
"I will make an ending in which a good hero wins and you will forget this game in a week or I will make an ending that will make you suffer, feel discomfort and anger from injustice. And you will remember this game FOREVER!"

No one will forget the inconvenience he caused, all those fights, either Fujino will satisfy us all or we will take hostage his beloved Inoda and then blackmail him

 

[Aniky Light]

Ahaha! I think Fujino is sitting and waiting for everyone to relax! Suguha is strong, she will help Kirito and he will win! Sinon knows everything, she will defeat the council and destroy Inoda.

Fujino sits and laughs -
"You don't even know what kind of pain awaits you ahead!"

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anyway a Kirito x Suguha ending is quite plausible for me, as long as Suguha convinces Kirito to fuck, like Inoda did with Asuna and slowly Kirito will forget about Asuna and fuck cheerfully with her cousin

with all that accumulated stress, I don't think Fujino has the courage to laugh xD

 

[Infeno2.0]

The question is, does Fujino have a goal to make the ending "satisfying"? Perhaps Fujino's goal is maximum discomfort?

Fujino -
"I will make an ending in which a good hero wins and you will forget this game in a week or I will make an ending that will make you suffer, feel discomfort and anger from injustice. And you will remember this game FOREVER!"

Actually that is basicaly the same cookie cutter ending as any other NTR story we have around nothing to be remember for.
Now if Fujino did something in the lines of a brutal revenge his game would be remember as somenthing different.
But this never going to happen, have you read about a game called "no mercy" then look into the shit show that happen to the game and it's developer.

 

[Infeno2.0]

Asuna father will probably appear in the end of the story to explain what happened between Asuna and Sugou probably explaining Asuna susceptibility to fall into corruption.

Even that Fujino left behind to excuse Asuna bad behavior, why is always the same thing everyone need to justify or rationalize women being a piece of shit and whore, because in the end it's just that, she's a whore no excuse needed

 

[mos555]

Actually that is basicaly the same cookie cutter ending as any other NTR story we have around nothing to be remember for.
Now if Fujino did something in the lines of a brutal revenge his game would be remember as somenthing different.
But this never going to happen, have you read about a game called "no mercy" then look into the shit show that happen to the game and it's developer.

Yes, I've heard about it. But the undoubted advantage of the Asian region, and especially Japan, is that they didn't give a damn about all these Western problems with women's organizations. The Japanese made games with guro, violence and pedophilia, and they will continue to do so. The only thing Fujino could face is a lawsuit from Kawahara Reki for the misuse of intellectual property. And if it would be difficult to reach Fujino in China, then after he moved to Japan, he may well fall under the hammer of justice.

As for the memorability of the endings, I totally agree. As an ordinary person with a certain level of empathy, I see Kirito's rather unfair suffering while playing this game, and if I see the ending of revenge, I'm sure I'll remember it for a long time and the game will end up in the repository of my personal top games. If everything ends up in more suffering, then I'll probably just delete this game, like the rest of the NTR games, in which the player has absolutely no choice to decide the fate of the character, and try to forget about this game. I'll pour myself a coffee, grab a blanket and go review SAO, starting with the first season.

The only things that will make this game stay in your memory are a bunch of top-notch porn scenes and an ending that will blow your mind.

 

[seifukulover]

If Fujino wanted to really make this into the ultimate NTR game...

Spoiler: ultimate NTR

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[Aniky Light]

once the game is over, can we talk about whatever we want here or do we have to follow some grotesque rules even after the game is over? xD

 

[Luc77]

this game is no NTR. Asuna is not in a relationship with Kirito, and if she is in a relationship with someone, it's with Inoda. Who does everything he can to get Asuna, and Kirito would just play his games.

Salut Inoda.

 

[Aniky Light]

this game is no NTR. Asuna is not in a relationship with Kirito, and if she is in a relationship with someone, it's with Inoda. Who does everything he can to get Asuna, and Kirito would just play his games.

Salut Inoda.

at this point it seems to me that it's Asuna who wants to conquer Inoda xD

 

[mos555]

once the game is over, can we talk about whatever we want here or do we have to follow some grotesque rules even after the game is over? xD

I think this forum thread will just go quiet and from time to time people will just ask technical questions. Then a new Fujino game will appear and everyone will go there. Well, or we can, as a friendly team, choose a game and go there to raise the number of discussion pages to 1000.

this game is no NTR. Asuna is not in a relationship with Kirito, and if she is in a relationship with someone, it's with Inoda. Who does everything he can to get Asuna, and Kirito would just play his games.

Salut Inoda.

I have already said many times that there is no more NTR in the game. Asuna does everything voluntarily and there is practically no love relationship between her and Kirito. But no one cares, it's enough for people that Fujino said they were still dating and didn't have to do anything to show it. Even the "cheating" tag doesn't work well because Asuna and Kirito look more like friends than lovers.

But if you look at it from a broader perspective, then if there is no NTR, then there is no point in Kirito suffering more than he does now. Asuna's infatuation with Inoda and detachment from Kirito provides a field for maneuver that will allow for any ending and it will not be far-fetched.

 

[Aniky Light]

I think this forum thread will just go quiet and from time to time people will just ask technical questions. Then a new Fujino game will appear and everyone will go there. Well, or we can, as a friendly team, choose a game and go there to raise the number of discussion pages to 1000.

until we reach 2000, this thread will not close

 

[Infeno2.0]

I think this forum thread will just go quiet and from time to time people will just ask technical questions. Then a new Fujino game will appear and everyone will go there. Well, or we can, as a friendly team, choose a game and go there to raise the number of discussion pages to 1000.


I have already said many times that there is no more NTR in the game. Asuna does everything voluntarily and there is practically no love relationship between her and Kirito. But no one cares, it's enough for people that Fujino said they were still dating and didn't have to do anything to show it. Even the "cheating" tag doesn't work well because Asuna and Kirito look more like friends than lovers.

The thread will eventually die off when the game is finished (whenever or if this actually happen), then we will go to new fujino game.

The game still is about NTR, but the parts of guilted whore and stealing the whore, already came to fruition now what remains is the confrontation.
Fujino is still trying to stretch the guilted whore phase but nobody is buying anymore, his mistake was in spliting them apart
Asuna/Kirito IRL and confining Asuna/Inoda togheter that was too easy and bland in my opnion wasn't any risk or tension involved, that kind kill the NTR vibes and his excessive focus on FOG where nothing is real or cheating for any character.
And because of that we getting dangerously close to a NTS (cuck fetish) plot moving foward, to avoid that Fujino should make Kirito more aware and confrontational toward Asuna, she is way too confortable in the story, but we already can tell this is not happening just look how bad was his attempt with the monitor device.

 

[a72q]

Read the past few pages and the thought of a revenge ending excites me. It would definitely make this game memorable. Also, a Suguha x Kirito ending would also be nice to see. I have always asked myself that question while watching-reading canon SAO.