RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

[LadyRoth]

In part two, what exactly is 'Frig' supposed to mean in Asuna's status panel?

Edit: Nvm, I think it's masturbation

 

[Infeno2.0]

P.s If there was a real chance for a good ending (relatively good), it would be worth doing it now.

Something like an early ending-

Asuna realizes that something is wrong with her memory and she starts pulling out memories. Suddenly, Asuna realizes that she has two sets of memories, but Asuna herself understands perfectly well which are real, and which with Inoda seem to have been forcibly inserted into her head. Asuna gets scared of this and expels Inoda, because don't understand how Inoda managed to pull it off and now she's just afraid to communicate with him. Suddenly, the Inoda can replace everything or erase? Asuna returns to Kirito, but because of the fear she has experienced, she is afraid to communicate with those she does not trust. That could be the ending. She would fit into the current situation quite normally.(well, except that the other characters just disappeared)

A good idea for ending, but very rarely a NTR based story have a happy ending for the MC, more rare yet is the whore or bull getting fucked there's always a cope out, specially for the whore, God forbid a woman facing the consequences of her actions.

About the memory manipulation, Fujino is already backtracking for one, his fans went bananas with his idea, for second the plot would be a nightmare to write moving foward, because the past don't agree with the present in Asuna's dialogues in regards to Inoda, how this is supose to work Fujino will have clean all the dialogues moving foward to make Asuna never speak again about Inoda with kirito, with Inoda standing in the middle of the room, imagine a dialogue about the first time they meet inoda and she saying when they found Inoda in their stairs in SAO, how they lived togheter with him, that would not be possible because the lack of plot consistence.

Probably Asuna will have doubts but Fujino will not mention anything about this memory manipulation in this sense, what he is going to do is to use that to create excuses for new sex scenes with Asuna being more open to the new ideas, because in her mind she's Inoda secret wife.

 

[Infeno2.0]

If Fujino made the endings for Asuna, what would they be? Asuna the consenting slut or Asuna who doesn't know she's a slut

She's already a consenting slut, so this is not ending yet, i think her ending will be trying to keep her facade of a perfect fiance/wife with Kirito but getting off in being a secret whore.

 

[Tyyyr]

She will become like her mother.
Happens all the time.

 

[mos555]

A good idea for ending, but very rarely a NTR based story have a happy ending for the MC, more rare yet is the whore or bull getting fucked there's always a cope out, specially for the whore, God forbid a woman facing the consequences of her actions.

Well, it's not a happy ending. Asuna has already cheated, Kirito doesn't know anything, and Asuna herself has acquired mental instability and paranoia due to this memory change.

Perhaps there will be a scene in this ending in which Kirito comes to Asuna in the hospital, and she sits in the corner and whispers.

Asuna - "I remember, I remember everything, I remember everything for sure."
Kirito - "Asuna, it's me."
Asuna - "Kirito, it's you, Kirito. Do you remember? We were in Aincrad, weren't we? I remember we were together!"
Kirito - "Oh... Asuna..."

In short, this is the ending in which Asuna goes a little crazy, Kirito is essentially left alone with a sick girl in his care, Suguha leaves Kirito, since he stayed with Asuna. In short, a minor depressive ending.

About the memory manipulation, Fujino is already backtracking for one, his fans went bananas with his idea, for second the plot would be a nightmare to write moving foward, because the past don't agree with the present in Asuna's dialogues in regards to Inoda, how this is supose to work Fujino will have clean all the dialogues moving foward to make Asuna never speak again about Inoda with kirito, with Inoda standing in the middle of the room, imagine a dialogue about the first time they meet inoda and she saying when they found Inoda in their stairs in SAO, how they lived togheter with him, that would not be possible because the lack of plot consistence.

Probably Asuna will have doubts but Fujino will not mention anything about this memory manipulation in this sense, what he is going to do is to use that to create excuses for new sex scenes with Asuna being more open to the new ideas, because in her mind she's Inoda secret wife.

It's the same situation as in quarantine. Inoda never calls Asuna by name when Kirito is watching over them. And it seems to be a small thing, but, nevertheless, it feels strange. But at the first meeting, Inoda said that he was also in Aincrad, hiding on the 1st floor. So Asuna can basically mention that she suddenly remembered that she met Inoda on the first floor of the Aincrad.

Asuna -"Oh... um... Well, you weren't there then, Kirito, you were in the dungeon. And I went down to the first floor... um.... on business, I met Inoda there. I just remembered that now... ahah... How unexpected"
Kirito - "Ah, then it's understandable, I forgot that Inoda was also in Aincrad."

Fujino has brought Kirito to such a level of stupidity that he has problems with critical thinking, and he is unlikely to notice the catch. The only strange thing about this is that Inoda himself does not realize that he has changed Asuna memory by his actions. Inoda knows that he was in his memories, but if Asuna starts talking about it as if it happened in reality, Inoda will probably wonder if Asuna has gone crazy too. The simplest, but of course the laziest way is that Asuna will no longer mention Inoda in any memories in the future.

 

[Aniky Light]

She will become like her mother.
Happens all the time.

like mother, like daughter

 

[Aniky Light]

Inoda never calls Asuna by name when Kirito is watching over them

How does Inoda know that Kirito is watching him? Does he have some device or does a red light come on or something or whatever?

 

[mos555]

How does Inoda know that Kirito is watching him? Does he have some device or does a red light come on or something or whatever?

He doesn't even know Kirito is watching. It's just that Fujino eliminated any possibility of their disclosure, disguising it as Inoda's luck.

 

[Aniky Light]

He doesn't even know Kirito is watching. It's just that Fujino eliminated any possibility of their disclosure, disguising it as Inoda's luck.

I would love it if Inoda would let the name Asuna slip while Kirito was watching over him, but unfortunately Kirito is stupid and would say: Wow, I didn't think Inoda's cousin is also called Asuna, it must be a common name

 

[mos555]

I would love it if Inoda would let the name Asuna slip while Kirito was watching over him, but unfortunately Kirito is stupid and would say: Wow, I didn't think Inoda's cousin is also called Asuna, it must be a common name

What if when Kirito was making a video call to Asuna, Inoda would have shouted from another room - "Asuna, where are my panties? I can't find them."

There are a lot of lucky moments(for Inoda), Asuna either has her back to the camera, or the back of the chair covers her face, or the camera is looking down and her head is not visible.

 

[Aniky Light]

What if when Kirito was making a video call to Asuna, Inoda would have shouted from another room - "Asuna, where are my panties? I can't find them."

*in Asuna's mind* we're fucked

 

[EdenGenesis]

I'm 99% sure that Asuna will stay with Inoda,
BUT WHY does Fujino use the word LIKELY, well maybe he's just trolling.
earlier in QA he also wrote similar formulations and now Suguha will be under some kind of threat.
so maybe he will surprise everyone and Asuna will not stay with Inoda (but I highly doubt it myself)

That ain’t a plot twist, that’s Fujino playing peekaboo with his pants down. “Likely” my ass — the writing’s clearer than a cheap motel mirror after a quickie. Asuna clinging to Inoda is about as shocking as morning wood. Only way he’d surprise us now is if she shoved a heel in Inoda’s balls and walked off with some dignity.

Until then, it’s just reheated NTR stew — and we’ve all had our fill.

 

[Aniky Light]

That ain’t a plot twist, that’s Fujino playing peekaboo with his pants down. “Likely” my ass — the writing’s clearer than a cheap motel mirror after a quickie. Asuna clinging to Inoda is about as shocking as morning wood. Only way he’d surprise us now is if she shoved a heel in Inoda’s balls and walked off with some dignity.

Until then, it’s just reheated NTR stew — and we’ve all had our fill.

Fujino: Come on piggies, I've prepared the usual mush for you, now shut up and eat.

 

[EdenGenesis]

As far as I remember, 110 points were deducted for Asuna seeing Kirito in a brothel, and later, in the FOG,Kirito base scene, 70 points were deducted for bad sex. 110 - cheating... 70 - bad sex... hmm.... What's going on in Asuna's head anyway, and how does it work?
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- 110 points for Kirito just looking at pussy.
- 70 points for not making her cum right.

So by Asuna-logic™:
Staring = cheating
Lame dick game = war crime

Meanwhile, getting stuffed by Inoda like a vending machine snack?
That’s just "stress relief," apparently.

Her moral compass must be spinning harder than a fidget spinner in a strip club bathroom.

 

[mos555]

That ain’t a plot twist, that’s Fujino playing peekaboo with his pants down. “Likely” my ass — the writing’s clearer than a cheap motel mirror after a quickie. Asuna clinging to Inoda is about as shocking as morning wood. Only way he’d surprise us now is if she shoved a heel in Inoda’s balls and walked off with some dignity.

Until then, it’s just reheated NTR stew — and we’ve all had our fill.

Well, yes, I think it's true, people basically saw what they wanted to see. Asuna is a fallen cheating whore, and nothing interesting will happen next.(I don't consider Inoda and Asuna's honeymoon to be anything interesting) People have looked at the whore - people now want the whore to be punished.

- 110 points for Kirito just looking at pussy.
- 70 points for not making her cum right.

So by Asuna-logic™:
Staring = cheating
Lame dick game = war crime

Meanwhile, getting stuffed by Inoda like a vending machine snack?
That’s just "stress relief," apparently.

Her moral compass must be spinning harder than a fidget spinner in a strip club bathroom.

The adequacy of Asuna's judgment was called into question at the moment when she forgave the rapist for her rape, simply because he looked so unhappy, and then also agreed to serve him once a week.

 

[seifukulover]

We know Fujino hates Kirito, but I wonder if he really hates Asuna too. This story about turning the strong and wholesome girl into a betraying whore, seems like it's meant to trash her just as much as Kirito (if not more)

 

[EdenGenesis]

P.s If there was a real chance for a good ending (relatively good), it would be worth doing it now.

Something like an early ending-

Asuna realizes that something is wrong with her memory and she starts pulling out memories. Suddenly, Asuna realizes that she has two sets of memories, but Asuna herself understands perfectly well which are real, and which with Inoda seem to have been forcibly inserted into her head. Asuna gets scared of this and expels Inoda, because don't understand how Inoda managed to pull it off and now she's just afraid to communicate with him. Suddenly, the Inoda can replace everything or erase? Asuna returns to Kirito, but because of the fear she has experienced, she is afraid to communicate with those she does not trust. That could be the ending. She would fit into the current situation quite normally.(well, except that the other characters just disappeared)

Yeah, that’d be your classic “bittersweet redemption” ending — the kind we see in softer NTR routes. She crawls back, hollowed out by what happened, and Kirito, ever the nice guy, takes her in... even though she’s not the same, and neither is he.

But let’s be real: if he ever learns the full scope of what went down — the mind-fuckery, the sex tapes, the betrayal on loop — he’s not just gonna stand there in his black coat with a sad violin playing. He’ll go full SAO mode. Inoda’s teeth? Respawn disabled.

Liz? She’s got the receipts. Every video, every moan, every “Inoda-kun~.” She’ll drop that on Kirito like a nuke — not to hurt him, but to clear the air. Because if Asuna really wants to stay, she’ll have to come clean... or someone else will.

And honestly? It’s kinda tragic. Kirito — the guy every girl wants — ends up being the one who fucks the least in the whole damn game. What a cosmic joke.

 

[Aniky Light]

We know Fujino hates Kirito, but I wonder if he really hates Asuna too. This story about turning the strong and wholesome girl into a betraying whore, seems like it's meant to trash her just as much as Kirito (if not more)

What if Fujino's favorite girl was Suguha instead? That would explain why he kept her safe in the second part

 

[mos555]

We know Fujino hates Kirito, but I wonder if he really hates Asuna too. This story about turning the strong and wholesome girl into a betraying whore, seems like it's meant to trash her just as much as Kirito (if not more)

Hate - is too strong a word. I'd say he doesn't care. The SAO franchise and its characters are a suitable consumable for Fujino. Reki Kawahara created a comfortable universe for him, with comfortable characters who are very conveniently in a romantic relationship. It remains to do the minimum - add your own character and play god. Therefore, Inoda is the only one to whom Fujino can feel emotions. The rest, most likely, he just doesn't give a shit.

The fact that Asuna has turned into a whore is a logical development for any NTR game. I don't think the fact that Asuna is Asuna has anything to do with her downfall. Sakura fell just like Asuna, and Emiya watched just like Kirito. The character doesn't matter, Fujino just follows the standard road.

 

[Aniky Light]

Hate - is too strong a word. I'd say he doesn't care. The SAO franchise and its characters are a suitable consumable for Fujino. Reki Kawahara created a comfortable universe for him, with comfortable characters who are very conveniently in a romantic relationship. It remains to do the minimum - add your own character and play god. Therefore, Inoda is the only one to whom Fujino can feel emotions. The rest, most likely, he just doesn't give a shit.

the truth is that Fujino likes fat and ugly men like Inoda xD