RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

[ShadowZero93]

I find it funny people still complain about OOC when this is a NTR, everyone is meant to be stupid or behave unusual as they usually would.

Honestly, I feel this whole ChadKirito twist is just a redhearing from Fujino to either apease his supporters, or make Kirito fall even more by the end. Really hope the whole bit with Liz goes five steps backs while she's with the pig

 

[nhami]

I played this last update. I would like to make a few commentaries:

This update was a little disappointing. I thought on how it ended the last update that Kirito would find Asuna and Inoda but mistake it for Inoda and his cousin having sex. Instead we get a quiet scene with Inoda and Asuna and Asuna agreeing to Inoda becoming a trial boyfriend. Asuna also was very unlikable in this update. Asuna spends most of the time with Inoda after coming back from the two week quarantine, avoids kissing Kirito and have the double standards of complaining about Liz being with Kirito alone.
This makes us see the effects of the new lvl 5 Sow of False Memory perk. Asuna is being pulled futher toward Inoda. But I think there should be at least some suspense whether Asuna will choose Inoda over Kirito. I think it should have happened this update, but in next update, Asuna should spend more time with Kirito rebuilding her relationship with Kirito so there is at least some suspense about who Asuna will choose.

There was also some drama about Asuna and Inoda affair getting exposed to public by Inoda mistake that could create some suspense.

This was supposed to be a false hope of Asuna not choosing Inoda because Asuna discover that Inoda true nature is evil. Asuna would then have a choice between Evil Inoda but that is good at sex or Good Kirito but that is bad at sex. Asuna will, of course, choose who is better at sex. Asuna will then would probably rationalize that she was a "Slut All Along". Asuna will probably change her morals to be evil so she can continue to enjoy sex with Inoda without the internal conflict of suffering for not having the good sex with Inoda and having betrayed Kirito. But I think this was also weak because even Asuna knows Inoda is morally corrupt and even calls him a pig.
Asuna goal is to fix the broken Inoda so that Inoda becomes a good person.
One possibility to make a true dillema for Asuna that creates suspense is for Asuna to believe herself that she cannot save broken Inoda and make Inoda become good.
For example, Asuna hears Inoda bragging to someone that he is just pretending to be good to manipulate Asuna, by using Asuna savior complex to make Asuna do what Inoda wants.
A example dialogue for Inoda:
"Hehe, she thinks she's saving me. Every time she complain I just pretend to be hurt by her and she does what I want, hehe. Her need to be a savior is the easiest string to manipulate!"
This would put a check in Asuna savior complex that Inoda exploits.

The best part about the update was Evil Kirito with the Predator Eyes ability. It was hinted that Kirito would increase his libido but not that Kirito would create an evil split personality. This is an interesting character twist.

About Evil Kirito, Liz reveals Inoda and Asuna affair to Evil Kirito and it is ambiguous if Kirito will fight for Asuna or is going to dismiss Asuna as tainted goods and have a harem of only the other female characters. I though this route would be a Netorase route but this is more Dark Erotica genre with a possible revenge trope instead of a subgenre of netorare genre.

It was hinted that Inoda and Asuna affair will be public revealed. But it appears Good Kirito will remain oblivious until the end, even if Asuna and Inoda affair becomes public, Good Kirito will simply dismiss it with some excuse and continue to live in happy ignorance.

In the Asuna and Inoda scene from Kirito pov, a black circle briefly appears around Asuna and Inoda. It is ambiguous if Inoda invisiblity was working in real life this time because of the installed antennas by Axiom Church. This was something hinted, but the antennas were instaled when Kirito was seeing the flashbacks of Asuna and Inoda having sex after when Kirito goes to the place where they were having sex in FOG and the antennas hinted this would happen even in real life. Asuna and Inoda affair would be revealed to Kirito and it would remain in Kirito memory but not get erased like in the Dream world. But again, Good Kirito will probably dismiss it and remain oblivious.

There was also the Asuna teaching assistant for Inoda plot. I assume this will be a plot device for the level 3 taboo pleasure unlocking. This could be the classic sex behind the door scene. Kirito would be visiting Inoda and Asuna after normal school hours. Kirito talks to Asuna while Asuna and Inoda are having sex behind the door. Althrough this is more of the same as lvl 2 perk tent scene. Maybe Fujino could increase the cruelty by making Asuna call Kirito on purpose to the talk to her while having hidden sex with Inoda behind the door.

 

[Mr Technician]

I find it funny people still complain about OOC when this is a NTR, everyone is meant to be stupid or behave unusual as they usually would.

Honestly, I feel this whole ChadKirito twist is just a redhearing from Fujino to either apease his supporters, or make Kirito fall even more by the end. Really hope the whole bit with Liz goes five steps backs while she's with the pig

Well, we should see both plots. Not just one preferred. Both paths were promised from the beginning by the author so it should feed all of fan needs. I suppose next update would bring more Inoda + any girl scenes. To think of it - if Kirito Cuck route should progress - Inoda should get more girls in that route abusing Asuna, which would help him get them. For the Kirito Chad should be discovery of Inoda + Asuna fucking. And idk what for Kirito Cuck? More vids send from Inoda to vlog and to watch? Probably like that...

 

[ShadowZero93]

Well, we should see both plots. Not just one preferred. Both paths were promised from the beginning by the author so it should feed all of fan needs. I suppose next update would bring more Inoda + any girl scenes. To think of it - if Kirito Cuck route should progress - Inoda should get more girls in that route abusing Asuna, which would help him get them. For the Kirito Chad should be discovery of Inoda + Asuna fucking. And idk what for Kirito Cuck? More vids send from Inoda to vlog and to watch? Probably like that...

That is as fair as players will get. I just hope Fujino puts the same effort in both paths.

 

[Plyto1991]

It's sad that there won't be a third part. In my opinion, from a story perspective (if we can even talk about it in this kind of game), the third part makes sense. Asuna is now uncertain about her feelings, and the third part would have been an open confrontation between the protagonist and Indori. It would have been a competition to see who could satisfy her better. If we delve into perversion, then Indori can seduce Liz (he almost did it) and other female characters, and it's possible that this will blow the protagonist's mind, leading to some kind of trap content or even sissy. In my opinion, the third part could expand its influence to various other forms of perversion. Additionally, it could provide an opportunity for the player to turn the girls away from Indori if they so desire.

 

[saitamaTM]

I played this last update. I would like to make a few commentaries:

This update was a little disappointing. I thought on how it ended the last update that Kirito would find Asuna and Inoda but mistake it for Inoda and his cousin having sex. Instead we get a quiet scene with Inoda and Asuna and Asuna agreeing to Inoda becoming a trial boyfriend. Asuna also was very unlikable in this update. Asuna spends most of the time with Inoda after coming back from the two week quarantine, avoids kissing Kirito and have the double standards of complaining about Liz being with Kirito alone.
This makes us see the effects of the new lvl 5 Sow of False Memory perk. Asuna is being pulled futher toward Inoda. But I think there should be at least some suspense whether Asuna will choose Inoda over Kirito. I think it should have happened this update, but in next update, Asuna should spend more time with Kirito rebuilding her relationship with Kirito so there is at least some suspense about who Asuna will choose.

There was also some drama about Asuna and Inoda affair getting exposed to public by Inoda mistake that could create some suspense.

This was supposed to be a false hope of Asuna not choosing Inoda because Asuna discover that Inoda true nature is evil. Asuna would then have a choice between Evil Inoda but that is good at sex or Good Kirito but that is bad at sex. Asuna will, of course, choose who is better at sex. Asuna will then would probably rationalize that she was a "Slut All Along". Asuna will probably change her morals to be evil so she can continue to enjoy sex with Inoda without the internal conflict of suffering for not having the good sex with Inoda and having betrayed Kirito. But I think this was also weak because even Asuna knows Inoda is morally corrupt and even calls him a pig.
Asuna goal is to fix the broken Inoda so that Inoda becomes a good person.
One possibility to make a true dillema for Asuna that creates suspense is for Asuna to believe herself that she cannot save broken Inoda and make Inoda become good.
For example, Asuna hears Inoda bragging to someone that he is just pretending to be good to manipulate Asuna, by using Asuna savior complex to make Asuna do what Inoda wants.
A example dialogue for Inoda:
"Hehe, she thinks she's saving me. Every time she complain I just pretend to be hurt by her and she does what I want, hehe. Her need to be a savior is the easiest string to manipulate!"
This would put a check in Asuna savior complex that Inoda exploits.

The best part about the update was Evil Kirito with the Predator Eyes ability. It was hinted that Kirito would increase his libido but not that Kirito would create an evil split personality. This is an interesting character twist.

About Evil Kirito, Liz reveals Inoda and Asuna affair to Evil Kirito and it is ambiguous if Kirito will fight for Asuna or is going to dismiss Asuna as tainted goods and have a harem of only the other female characters. I though this route would be a Netorase route but this is more Dark Erotica genre with a possible revenge trope instead of a subgenre of netorare genre.

It was hinted that Inoda and Asuna affair will be public revealed. But it appears Good Kirito will remain oblivious until the end, even if Asuna and Inoda affair becomes public, Good Kirito will simply dismiss it with some excuse and continue to live in happy ignorance.

In the Asuna and Inoda scene from Kirito pov, a black circle briefly appears around Asuna and Inoda. It is ambiguous if Inoda invisiblity was working in real life this time because of the installed antennas by Axiom Church. This was something hinted, but the antennas were instaled when Kirito was seeing the flashbacks of Asuna and Inoda having sex after when Kirito goes to the place where they were having sex in FOG and the antennas hinted this would happen even in real life. Asuna and Inoda affair would be revealed to Kirito and it would remain in Kirito memory but not get erased like in the Dream world. But again, Good Kirito will probably dismiss it and remain oblivious.

There was also the Asuna teaching assistant for Inoda plot. I assume this will be a plot device for the level 3 taboo pleasure unlocking. This could be the classic sex behind the door scene. Kirito would be visiting Inoda and Asuna after normal school hours. Kirito talks to Asuna while Asuna and Inoda are having sex behind the door. Althrough this is more of the same as lvl 2 perk tent scene. Maybe Fujino could increase the cruelty by making Asuna call Kirito on purpose to the talk to her while having hidden sex with Inoda behind the door.

a lot update now is short i feel like it now more and more short

 

[saitamaTM]

That is as fair as players will get. I just hope Fujino puts the same effort in both paths.

don't have hope

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Well, we should see both plots. Not just one preferred. Both paths were promised from the beginning by the author so it should feed all of fan needs. I suppose next update would bring more Inoda + any girl scenes. To think of it - if Kirito Cuck route should progress - Inoda should get more girls in that route abusing Asuna, which would help him get them. For the Kirito Chad should be discovery of Inoda + Asuna fucking. And idk what for Kirito Cuck? More vids send from Inoda to vlog and to watch? Probably like that...

Once again, reminder, no matter what Kirito does or which route you're in, the Asuna/Inoda plot doesn't change at all, all it seems to change is what happens with the side-characters regarding Kirito, so one thing wouldn't directly affect the other regardless at least from what we've seen so far XP

a lot update now is short i feel like it now more and more short

This is because the past 2 updates have been specifcially plagued by Fujino's issues at work (One he had to take at least one week of extra work, the other came from him hurrying up trying to deliver an update in less time than usual because of the previous one's delay). Next one it seems will also come late because he's got to change jobs and move...

 

[SieuThoat]

Where can I see the gallery in part 1?

 

[Blueflameria]

Creampie yet?

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

Where can I see the gallery in part 1?

It's at the very end of the game, when you finish Part 1 you're thrown straight into the gallery (Alternatively, you can get a save that takes you there directly, and use Gatsu's Mod to also see all the other stuff not in the gallery).

 

[niifan]

Creampie yet?

nope maybe for christmas

 

[SieuThoat]

It's at the very end of the game, when you finish Part 1 you're thrown straight into the gallery (Alternatively, you can get a save that takes you there directly, and use Gatsu's Mod to also see all the other stuff not in the gallery).

Thanks bro! Do you know where I can find Gatsu’s mod? I’ve tried searching but all the links seem dead

 

[zAsura]

Hi, im at 6/28 testing liz xray glasses, are there supposed to be scenes there or not?
by the dialogue i assume there must be but i cant see anything?

Sorry for bad english

 

[kinglionheart]

Thanks bro! Do you know where I can find Gatsu’s mod? I’ve tried searching but all the links seem dead

https://f95zone.to/threads/sword-ar...ealed-magic-verv1-fujino.154352/post-12489313

There seems to be problems with the attachment system right now. All attachment files are not working. You have to wait until it is fixed.

Hi, im at 6/28 testing liz xray glasses, are there supposed to be scenes there or not?
by the dialogue i assume there must be but i cant see anything?

Sorry for bad english

The scene is in the recollection room. You can see when you end the day.

 

[zAsura]

https://f95zone.to/threads/sword-ar...ealed-magic-verv1-fujino.154352/post-12489313

There seems to be problems with the attachment system right now. All attachment files is not working. You have to wait until it is fixed.


The scene is in the recollection room. You can see when you end the day.

Hi, i actually meant from Kirito perspective at the moment of trying the glasses, like blurry or side view sex
already move on, thanks for replying

 

[kniveout24]

no progress report?

 

[mos555]

Before the report is released (if it comes out...), I want to say that I read the comments on CI-EN. Avoiding overtly psychopathic comments -

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and trying to break through the "wonderful" translation from Chinese, I realized that in the new update, oddly enough, people mostly condemn the use of AI CG.
About GigaChad Kirito (they call him Black Kirito in CI-EN), opinions are quite diverse, but in general, commentators believe that this is a fairly fresh solution that reveals Kirito himself, as well as the plot of the game, much better than "blind, deaf autistic Kirito". There are many comments about how players look forward to the future interaction between Inoda and GigaKirito. There is very little outright negativity towards Kirito's new image. AI CG upset a lot more players.

 

[Aniky Light]

Before the report is released (if it comes out...), I want to say that I read the comments on CI-EN. Avoiding overtly psychopathic comments -

Spoiler: An example of a sick comment

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and trying to break through the "wonderful" translation from Chinese, I realized that in the new update, oddly enough, people mostly condemn the use of AI CG.
About GigaChad Kirito (they call him Black Kirito in CI-EN), opinions are quite diverse, but in general, commentators believe that this is a fairly fresh solution that reveals Kirito himself, as well as the plot of the game, much better than "blind, deaf autistic Kirito". There are many comments about how players look forward to the future interaction between Inoda and GigaKirito. There is very little outright negativity towards Kirito's new image. AI CG upset a lot more players.

Doc, it's time to hospitalize that sick individual with absurd ideas xD

 

[mos555]

Doc, it's time to hospitalize that sick individual with absurd ideas xD

There are many such comments. To cure them all, we need to free up several psychiatric clinics only for Ci-En commentators.