RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

[mtl poet]

This game would work better if it wasn't a parody of SAO. Or if the story was just regular people roleplaying as their favorite character, but failing miserably. My main gripe is that when it comes to deconstructing the whole thing, it starts off quite strong, but as the story progresses, the characterization quickly falls off a cliff.

Speaking of which, what a good job Fujino did in creating Inoda's persona. He may not be the most intelligent or interesting, but he sure is a resentful swine. The little shit gives off the impression of an irl sociopath or a rapist in the making. A total unit in any NTR, but kind of horseshit in this particular plot.

All in all a solid game. It's a shame all the crashes and bugs, but that's not Fujino's fault and more like an engine shortcoming.

 

[Aniky Light]

Isn't that the point of NTR though?? I feel like Asuna had a little repulsion as compared to other NTR doujinshi and all, so comparatively Asuna is a better slut atleast, given she chose not to speak to Inoda after that stormy night. Others wouldve been hooked and justified it by just saying "its so good, and weve already done it once, so whats the harm in doing it again??"

I'm referring to Asuna's attitude, she behaves like Inoda

 

[Aniky Light]

I hope Asuna leaves Kirito and I don't say because I want to see Kirito suffer, but that she stops taking advantage of Kirito's comforts. You want to fuck with Inoda? Do it! but stay away from Kirito and don't bother

why do I hate Asuna? because she reminds me of my ex who fucks with others but wants us to be together and that irritates me. Tell Kirito that you fuck with that fat guy, go ahead, say it! so we can end it xD

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

In the original story, Kyoko is a professor of economics at the university, lol. And Asuna's father left the company altogether after the events of ALO. So in the original, they don't have such a rich life.
I mean, in the game, Kyoko's office is in the supply department. It's kind of low for a company director, in my opinion.

I think it should be beyond obvious now that Fujino has only the most basic bare knowledge of Canon SAO, so yeah, there are countless inconsistencies all around, hell, the mere fact Kirito moved out of his big-ass family home to a shitty apartment is the first one you see that makes absolutely no sense yet nobody really caerd because it was clearly meant for NTR-logic purposes XD

I still read in the comments that hope of seeing Kirito completely destroyed and abandoned or that Sinon and Suguha fall

About Inoda, NO! he is not a kind and reliable person compared to Asuna, if he is, it's because Kyuoko suggested this approach to him, but there he doesn't care about Asuna, he uses this approach only to get what he wants

People will keep hoping for that until the very end, no matter how much the plot has been going and showing the exact opposite, because as you recall the majority of people playing this game who know SAO are either SAO or Kirito haters, so yeah Sadly, there IS still a possibility of Fujino doing that, especially to Sinon (Who has a very real possibility of end up dragging Suguha down with her if she 'falls' like that), so their 'hope' isn't unfounded, even if it would make the whole narrative of Sugu's plot so far pointless Fujino is still at the end of the day an insta-NTR/corruption author at heart with this game being the odd one out, as all the mini-games he released while still doing SAO prove, so he could still do that and the sad reality is that the majority of the game's followers wouldn't give a fuck and still cheer for it :3

 

[variaNTR]

Asuna is fully willing to fun and NTR stuff in FOG but we are trying to transition to IRL right now. So there has to be scenes where Inoda trains her to be okay with doing stuff with him IRL. See see that a lot in this update. Asuna ignoring Kirito's calls to focus on watch tv with Inoda, willing to dance for him in her underwear, and in the end of the massage she seriously considering having anal sex with him IRL. So be patient. Soon the transition to IRL will be over and we will have fun NTR situations like the one in the Title screen!

I hope so, I'm just afraid that Fujino might just go all in with Asuna's corruption then finish the main plot and wrap everything up with this game. I just wish there are more scenes first before Fujino finish it

 

[Aniky Light]

I think it should be beyond obvious now that Fujino has only the most basic bare knowledge of Canon SAO, so yeah, there are countless inconsistencies all around, hell, the mere fact Kirito moved out of his big-ass family home to a shitty apartment is the first one you see that makes absolutely no sense yet nobody really caerd because it was clearly meant for NTR-logic purposes XD



People will keep hoping for that until the very end, no matter how much the plot has been going and showing the exact opposite, because as you recall the majority of people playing this game who know SAO are either SAO or Kirito haters, so yeah Sadly, there IS still a possibility of Fujino doing that, especially to Sinon (Who has a very real possibility of end up dragging Suguha down with her if she 'falls' like that), so their 'hope' isn't unfounded, even if it would make the whole narrative of Sugu's plot so far pointless Fujino is still at the end of the day an insta-NTR/corruption author at heart with this game being the odd one out, as all the mini-games he released while still doing SAO prove, so he could still do that and the sad reality is that the majority of the game's followers wouldn't give a fuck and still cheer for it :3

it would be really stupid if it ends like this, I mean, Fujino creates the plot for Suguha but in the end he ends up in a trap, so are you kidding me? what the fuck is this?

 

[Aniky Light]

the good thing, if Suguha falls into the trap, at least he doesn't end up on Inoda's dick, anything goes but not fat shit

 

[Marphey]

what the fuck is this?

NTR game MCs are not allowed to have happy ending.

 

[Aniky Light]

NTR game MCs are not allowed to have happy ending.

if the creator wants, then yes

 

[Aniky Light]

I hope the Suguha sect does not dissolve, otherwise you will be convicted of high treason.

 

[Marphey]

if the creator wants, then yes

Point of Netorare is to humiliate the mc if you want Mc to have harem of girls only he fucks go and play Hero's harem guild or something.

 

[Aniky Light]

Point of Netorare is to humiliate the mc if you want Mc to have harem of girls only he fucks go and play Hero's harem guild or something.

It's obvious that you only play one-way and humiliating games, but there's no point in opening a debate, otherwise they'll block our thread

 

[Nerddboxxxx]

I'm a generous god XD it seems that Fujino sensei took my suggestion on the new anal pose..
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U said this is a perk, how do I use perks in the game. I thought they were part of the story and had known use.

 

[Lucifer8YmkRHyqYADP8he]

because she's a hypocrite, she does everything behind Kirito's back, she always finds stupid excuses, she takes advantage of Kirito and in the meantime she jumps on Inoda's dick, Asuna doesn't care about Kirito

Yo bro it think there is still more to come, in one of the perks, she will pretend to be kritio bf in irl but be inoda's woman, slave...

 

[saitamaTM]

why the update become more boring there is a less POV

this update feel just like novel game

 

[Lucifer8YmkRHyqYADP8he]

Those scenes where she will be pregent and fuck inoda in irl... and those 3 girl's fight for inoda Dick..

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

It's obvious that you only play one-way and humiliating games, but there's no point in opening a debate, otherwise they'll block our thread

The fact that there are still people who think NTR's "point" is to humiliate the MC says everything, really, it seems most people who consume the genre nowadays can't even remember what the word stands for XD (Helps even less how in SAO is an even iffier situation given that none of the Asuna girls doing it with someone else is really NTR and if they try to do it with Kirito behind Asuna's back it actually DOES count as NTR, but for most people it won't because the MC getting some already makes it 'not really NTR' in their eyes, as most people genuinely seem to think NTR = Humilliate MC instead of the "Stealing Another's Lover" of the name)

Mind you, there is still a chance shit may end up like that because it's in Fujino's nature, but really, if he wanted to then he would have never gone to the trouble of rewriting Suguha's entire plot after she already was completely not-NTR-ed and on her way to full corruption under Hebishima's dick, hers and Sinon's entire plot are proofs that Fujino really went all out into wanting to try something new after all the issues at the beginning of Part 2 made him change his approach to the game completely.

 

[Aniky Light]

Yo bro it think there is still more to come, in one of the perks, she will pretend to be kritio bf in irl but be inoda's woman, slave...

you said it right, "the slave"

 

[SAO fan]

can someone help me how can i see over the curtain scenes? i can only the over the curtain scenes in memory room

 

[ASDZXCQWER1321]

can someone help me how can i see over the curtain scenes? i can only the over the curtain scenes in memory room

that is the only way