RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

[Aniky Light]

that'd be brutal for kirito (if true), but fortunately he'll have suguha aka the best girl in this game by his side
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in the meantime Asuna...

 

[Captain Oblivious]

Playing Pt2 now and gotten to the chasing pigeon part in desolate mountain. Clearly one of the best NTR games on f95 so far.

 

[ASDZXCQWER1321]

I'm replaying the game for the second time and I'm just shocked by how bad it is in terms of the Asuna-Kirito-Inoda relationship (although it's hard to say what it's good at, except for the animations) when I played it for the first time, it was my first hentai game and I was a little inspired and interested, but now it's clear that this is just a 20-30 page doujinshi level, which has 2 parts, where in the first the heroine absurdly quickly becomes corrupted, breaks ties with the offender, and in the second she just as absurdly becomes a dick-addicted bitch, such works are posted on well-known sites every day. At first I thought that maybe it wasn't that bad, but for a game that takes over 20 hours (and at the end of my first playthrough I had 40, but I think the timekeeping is wrong) it's just terrible, since the game literally didn't show anything new, especially Asuna, who can hardly even be called a character, Fujino just does whatever he wants with her. And as far as I understand, one of the interesting moments that I like is not caused by Fujino, but by the audience (Hebeshima's refusal, it turns out that a big penis does not destroy the personality of girls and they can continue to live normally after such an experience). The only hope for this game is that the storylines of the other characters (Sinon, Suguha, Liz (I know about the spoiler, but maybe Fujino will refuse this), Kirito, Administrator) will come to some kind of non-standard ending, and not the standard ending of a 20 page doujinshi where everyone is a whore fucking 24 hours a day and there is nothing else in their world). well and as for the scenes, some of them are pretty good, but some in the later part of the games are too monotonous and repeat themselves from scene to scene, which is also strange, as if they are not so difficult to make (many people say so, I don’t know how to make them at all), in the anal scene Fujino used one interesting scene, but as I understand it, one of his fans suggested it to him

 

[mos555]

I'm replaying the game for the second time and I'm just shocked by how bad it is in terms of the Asuna-Kirito-Inoda relationship (although it's hard to say what it's good at, except for the animations) when I played it for the first time, it was my first hentai game and I was a little inspired and interested, but now it's clear that this is just a 20-30 page doujinshi level, which has 2 parts, where in the first the heroine absurdly quickly becomes corrupted, breaks ties with the offender, and in the second she just as absurdly becomes a dick-addicted bitch, such works are posted on well-known sites every day. At first I thought that maybe it wasn't that bad, but for a game that takes over 20 hours (and at the end of my first playthrough I had 40, but I think the timekeeping is wrong) it's just terrible, since the game literally didn't show anything new, especially Asuna, who can hardly even be called a character, Fujino just does whatever he wants with her. And as far as I understand, one of the interesting moments that I like is not caused by Fujino, but by the audience (Hebeshima's refusal, it turns out that a big penis does not destroy the personality of girls and they can continue to live normally after such an experience). The only hope for this game is that the storylines of the other characters (Sinon, Suguha, Liz (I know about the spoiler, but maybe Fujino will refuse this), Kirito, Administrator) will come to some kind of non-standard ending, and not the standard ending of a 20 page doujinshi where everyone is a whore fucking 24 hours a day and there is nothing else in their world). well and as for the scenes, some of them are pretty good, but some in the later part of the games are too monotonous and repeat themselves from scene to scene, which is also strange, as if they are not so difficult to make (many people say so, I don’t know how to make them at all), in the anal scene Fujino used one interesting scene, but as I understand it, one of his fans suggested it to him

In general, I agree. Previously, as a fan of the orginal SAO, looked at the game through rose-colored glasses. But somehow now only disappointment remains. About the perosnages. Asuna, there's no point in talking, the only hope for something adequate is a mini-storyline with Asuna not being right in the head because of what Sugo did to her. We apparently have a couple of memories in the game and documents at the hospital. That's all, that is, at the moment it is unclear whether this storyline is worth attention at all or if Fujino decided to throw it out and turn Asuna into a trouble-free whore for Inoda for no reason. In fact, we see that Inoda can manipulate only Asuna. He had to blackmail Kyoko with video recordings, and he raped Liz, since she absolutely refused to be manipulated. That is, it is obvious that Asuna is the only one whom Inoda can manipulate, and the Administrator's help is needed for this. In order for the current situation to improve somehow, we need an unexpected twist at the end, for example:

"The administrator turns on the antennas for his own purposes, but they suddenly somehow point at Asuna and she comes to her senses and realizes that she seemed to be in a dream and Inoda was controlling her. Helps Kirito deal with enemies in the game and in real life with the help of his mother's influence. She breaks off her relationship with Inoda and returns to Kirito, but it's too late because Asuna is pregnant with Inoda's child. Asuna pretends to have Kirito's child because she's afraid to admit it. As a result, Kirito is raising someone else's child, and Asuna still dreams of Inoda's penis sometimes."(I know it's a little cringe, but it's not a bad option for Asuna to play at least some role in the plot.)

You're also generally right about the characters. But Kyoko is not a particularly necessary character, because she was supposed to be a bridge between Inoda and Asuna for a future threesome, but why do we need Kyoko if Asuna already agrees to everything? Inoda completely controls her like a sex toy. After being raped, Liz turned into a toxic yandere with the habits of a bdsm mistress. The big question is, if Inoda can't manipulate her, then how will he drag her into the harem? Many people wrote here that after Liz was raped, she herself became a slave to Inoda's penis, but for 3 updates Liz has just been mocking Inoda and there is not a single scene where Liz remembers the penis in a good light. Alice is a completely filler character who kind of had the goal of showing Kirito what "Netorase" is, but in recent updates, Fujino seems to have put that out of his mind. That leaves Sinon and Suguha... I really liked their abrupt departure from Hebeshima and the new motivation of protecting Kirito and opposing the Council. But Fujino doesn't give them too much screen time, even though they play a pretty big role in the plot. Unlike Asuna, who is only needed for porn. There is only hope for future updates. Fujino promised to put Asuna on the back burner and give time to other character. We'll see.

 

[Aniky Light]

In general, I agree. Previously, as a fan of the orginal SAO, looked at the game through rose-colored glasses. But somehow now only disappointment remains. About the perosnages. Asuna, there's no point in talking, the only hope for something adequate is a mini-storyline with Asuna not being right in the head because of what Sugo did to her. We apparently have a couple of memories in the game and documents at the hospital. That's all, that is, at the moment it is unclear whether this storyline is worth attention at all or if Fujino decided to throw it out and turn Asuna into a trouble-free whore for Inoda for no reason. In fact, we see that Inoda can manipulate only Asuna. He had to blackmail Kyoko with video recordings, and he raped Liz, since she absolutely refused to be manipulated. That is, it is obvious that Asuna is the only one whom Inoda can manipulate, and the Administrator's help is needed for this. In order for the current situation to improve somehow, we need an unexpected twist at the end, for example:

"The administrator turns on the antennas for his own purposes, but they suddenly somehow point at Asuna and she comes to her senses and realizes that she seemed to be in a dream and Inoda was controlling her. Helps Kirito deal with enemies in the game and in real life with the help of his mother's influence. She breaks off her relationship with Inoda and returns to Kirito, but it's too late because Asuna is pregnant with Inoda's child. Asuna pretends to have Kirito's child because she's afraid to admit it. As a result, Kirito is raising someone else's child, and Asuna still dreams of Inoda's penis sometimes."(I know it's a little cringe, but it's not a bad option for Asuna to play at least some role in the plot.)

You're also generally right about the characters. But Kyoko is not a particularly necessary character, because she was supposed to be a bridge between Inoda and Asuna for a future threesome, but why do we need Kyoko if Asuna already agrees to everything? Inoda completely controls her like a sex toy. After being raped, Liz turned into a toxic yandere with the habits of a bdsm mistress. The big question is, if Inoda can't manipulate her, then how will he drag her into the harem? Many people wrote here that after Liz was raped, she herself became a slave to Inoda's penis, but for 3 updates Liz has just been mocking Inoda and there is not a single scene where Liz remembers the penis in a good light. Alice is a completely filler character who kind of had the goal of showing Kirito what "Netorase" is, but in recent updates, Fujino seems to have put that out of his mind. That leaves Sinon and Suguha... I really liked their abrupt departure from Hebeshima and the new motivation of protecting Kirito and opposing the Council. But Fujino doesn't give them too much screen time, even though they play a pretty big role in the plot. Unlike Asuna, who is only needed for porn. There is only hope for future updates. Fujino promised to put Asuna on the back burner and give time to other character. We'll see.

I hope Fujino doesn't forget what he's doing

 

[karlA29]

In general, I agree. Previously, as a fan of the orginal SAO, looked at the game through rose-colored glasses. But somehow now only disappointment remains. About the perosnages. Asuna, there's no point in talking, the only hope for something adequate is a mini-storyline with Asuna not being right in the head because of what Sugo did to her. We apparently have a couple of memories in the game and documents at the hospital. That's all, that is, at the moment it is unclear whether this storyline is worth attention at all or if Fujino decided to throw it out and turn Asuna into a trouble-free whore for Inoda for no reason. In fact, we see that Inoda can manipulate only Asuna. He had to blackmail Kyoko with video recordings, and he raped Liz, since she absolutely refused to be manipulated. That is, it is obvious that Asuna is the only one whom Inoda can manipulate, and the Administrator's help is needed for this. In order for the current situation to improve somehow, we need an unexpected twist at the end, for example:

"The administrator turns on the antennas for his own purposes, but they suddenly somehow point at Asuna and she comes to her senses and realizes that she seemed to be in a dream and Inoda was controlling her. Helps Kirito deal with enemies in the game and in real life with the help of his mother's influence. She breaks off her relationship with Inoda and returns to Kirito, but it's too late because Asuna is pregnant with Inoda's child. Asuna pretends to have Kirito's child because she's afraid to admit it. As a result, Kirito is raising someone else's child, and Asuna still dreams of Inoda's penis sometimes."(I know it's a little cringe, but it's not a bad option for Asuna to play at least some role in the plot.)

You're also generally right about the characters. But Kyoko is not a particularly necessary character, because she was supposed to be a bridge between Inoda and Asuna for a future threesome, but why do we need Kyoko if Asuna already agrees to everything? Inoda completely controls her like a sex toy. After being raped, Liz turned into a toxic yandere with the habits of a bdsm mistress. The big question is, if Inoda can't manipulate her, then how will he drag her into the harem? Many people wrote here that after Liz was raped, she herself became a slave to Inoda's penis, but for 3 updates Liz has just been mocking Inoda and there is not a single scene where Liz remembers the penis in a good light. Alice is a completely filler character who kind of had the goal of showing Kirito what "Netorase" is, but in recent updates, Fujino seems to have put that out of his mind. That leaves Sinon and Suguha... I really liked their abrupt departure from Hebeshima and the new motivation of protecting Kirito and opposing the Council. But Fujino doesn't give them too much screen time, even though they play a pretty big role in the plot. Unlike Asuna, who is only needed for porn. There is only hope for future updates. Fujino promised to put Asuna on the back burner and give time to other character. We'll see.

Liz had a moment during the anal massage when she looked at the shadows of Inoda and Asuna and remarked - after all, he knows how to satisfy a woman (there was some such phrase). So who knows what's in her head (or rather, in the author's head about her future fate).
As for Kirito's fate... I came across a short Christmas sketch from the author. There, the main character literally had all his girlfriends fucked in front of his eyes, but he still didn't understand anything. He didn't understand even after he watched the video from the camera... And it only dawned on him when the bad guy fucked his girlfriend right in front of him without hiding anything, and the rest of the girlfriends laughed and joked. It seems to me that it will be about the same here. Especially considering what they rolled out to us in the last update - I'm talking about Kirito's request to Asuna to humiliate him... Inoda will fuck Kirito's harem, and they will humiliate him. Kirito will mess around with their children... Sinon will be given into the hands of a bad guy from society (I don't follow the development of this topic at all). With Suguha, it's not clear yet. With her current position - let anything happen, as long as Kirito is happy, you can write any crap into their relationship... In short, so far everything seems to be heading towards the usual ending of the plot in a standard NTR novel (

 

[karlA29]

I hope inoda has another skill in FOG multi-clone would be good full gangband to slutsuna.

Honestly, I'm surprised this hasn't happened yet... A scene like this has been expected since the sex in the tent, when Inoda created a clone to sit and "keep order" at night while Inoda fucked Asuna. So it's entirely possible that the author will create an event like this.

 

[EmaEiishi]

Around at the half way point for part 2.

I'm generally immune to NTR stuff, in fact, I'm enjoying seeing Kirito get cucked due to my detest for his character in general. But man... why do that to my boy Klein, mate is just a all around good lad.

 

[4-kun]

Honestly, I'm surprised this hasn't happened yet... A scene like this has been expected since the sex in the tent, when Inoda created a clone to sit and "keep order" at night while Inoda fucked Asuna. So it's entirely possible that the author will create an event like this.

Why are you surprised? anal is new for Asuna, so dp couldn't happen

 

[karlA29]

Why are you surprised? anal is new for Asuna, so dp couldn't happen

Well, you understand everything perfectly well... Everything happens here strictly at the author's discretion and at the moment when the author decides that it has a place in the game. What was the problem with introducing anal into the game, for example, 3 updates ago? Here, the events in all scenes develop the same way.

Asuna - Inoda, what are you doing. I don't want to!

Inoda - oh, stop being indignant, you'll feel really good now!

Asuna - Oh, ah! Come on, Inoda, don't stop!

This is simplified, but in almost all of Inoda and Asuna's sex scenes, the dialogues are like this. Thus, anal could have been introduced a long time ago, instead of waiting for the stars in the sky to align. Accordingly, DP can be done.

And at the moment, we have an idiot heroine who, after 3 months of sex in all holes, still can't understand why she fucks with Inoda and how she feels about her boyfriend...

But there is a useless dark council, "governing the world" and consisting half of schoolchildren, a goddess and a quest for the birth of a child, which is the stupidest in its implementation. And all the forces of this all-powerful company are aimed at Inoda fucking Asuna in the ass.
Regarding my previous comment... Basically, you are right, if you look at it from the point of view of the development of the game's plot at the moment. It's just that, as I wrote in that comment, I thought about the future of dp as soon as I saw Inoda's clone (even if it wasn't a clone, but an illusion. Kirito didn't physically interact with it, I think). And that was in the distant version 0.4-0.45 approximately. And I will remind you that then Inoda fucked Asuna all night in the tent! It would be logical to think that they would move their sexual activity forward. BUT... we have a bunch of incomprehensible crap, and Inoda only persuaded Asuna to anal now.

 

[Captain Oblivious]

Quick question: desolation mountain part with pigeon... how far along am I in terms on content percent-wise of v0.8?

 

[Aniky Light]

why do you hate Kirito? and I'm not talking about the one from the game, and don't give me banal answers like why does he behave like this or why was he already packed with experiences in the first level and other various bullshit, aside from he was a beta tester and it's normal that he has an advantage, do you hate because he's surrounded by girls? it's normal, it's called recognition of his actions, don't you like how the author made him? take it out on the author I feel all this hatred from you and for what? I've seen anime and I don't see the reason to hate him, He did what was right to do.
If we talk about Inoda also called (rapist, psychopath, stinky, slimy, deceiver, mean, ugly, bastard, manipulator, asshole, with that disgusting ass that I have to find in front of me every update ) and the fans start to honor, soon they will get down on all fours and say: come on Inoda, open my ass and spit in it.
The problem is that everything goes backwards, they hate the heroes, and root for the enemies
some people don't even want to play as the hero, they want to play as the rapist

I have so many reasons to hate Inoda and Fujino created it specifically for this, even though some people got stuck with their thoughts in the first part, convinced that Inoda is a good guy xD

no point rooting for Inoda, since the game is about to end and that fat guy will finally end up in oblivion, I just hope Fujino doesn't use him for other games

p.s., I wrote all this in general

 

[Aniky Light]

I just hope that Fujino is not like some who hate Kirito and that he created this game just for fun and not because someone told him to create this game so we can vent against Kazuto just because he annoys me

 

[seifukulover]

I just hope that Fujino is not like some who hate Kirito and that he created this game just for fun and not because someone told him to create this game so we can vent against Kazuto just because he annoys me

I think it's obvious that Fujino hates either Kirito or Asuna, otherwise he wouldn't work for so long on a story that destroys their characters so much.

 

[mos555]

Why are you surprised? anal is new for Asuna, so dp couldn't happen

Is it new? Asuna accepted Inoda's log in the real world after a couple of hours of preparation. All porn actresses can only applaud such an experience. I think DP is not a problem for Asuna at all. Moreover, DP with clones is only possible in the game, and I think it's even easier. In a game where the taste of semen can be adjusted, it should be possible to adjust the pain level.

 

[mos555]

why do you hate Kirito? and I'm not talking about the one from the game, and don't give me banal answers like why does he behave like this or why was he already packed with experiences in the first level and other various bullshit, aside from he was a beta tester and it's normal that he has an advantage, do you hate because he's surrounded by girls? it's normal, it's called recognition of his actions, don't you like how the author made him? take it out on the author I feel all this hatred from you and for what? I've seen anime and I don't see the reason to hate him, He did what was right to do.
If we talk about Inoda also called (rapist, psychopath, stinky, slimy, deceiver, mean, ugly, bastard, manipulator, asshole, with that disgusting ass that I have to find in front of me every update ) and the fans start to honor, soon they will get down on all fours and say: come on Inoda, open my ass and spit in it.
The problem is that everything goes backwards, they hate the heroes, and root for the enemies
some people don't even want to play as the hero, they want to play as the rapist

I have so many reasons to hate Inoda and Fujino created it specifically for this, even though some people got stuck with their thoughts in the first part, convinced that Inoda is a good guy xD

no point rooting for Inoda, since the game is about to end and that fat guy will finally end up in oblivion, I just hope Fujino doesn't use him for other games

p.s., I wrote all this in general

Envy, banal envy. Kirito got one of the best girls in the entire anime universe. And the pair of Kirito and Asuna is generally the most popular.

But now, seriously. People probably don't hate him. It's just that people are annoyed by his deliberate blindness and artificial stupidity. Fujino made Kirito too dumb in the second part. In the first part, Kirito at least suspected something, but in the second he completely turned into a brick. A fresh breath of air is a hallucination. Kirito at least began to think and suspect something. But the last couple of updates have been completely silent, perhaps the hallucination theme has become inconvenient for the accelerated completion of the game.

 

[oozaru2023]

I read the new comments and I am surprised or amused that there are still people who confuse CANON with a fictional alternate history, I repeat, FICTIONAL. The topic does not matter here, if Fujino hates Cuckito and Slutsuna, if that were the case, does he also hate the protagonist of Chainsaw Man, does he hate Gudao from FATE GRAND ORDER, does he hate EMIYA from FATE?? well no. I have repeated a thousand times not to expect a rational decision in an NTR story, it is very rare that it happens, they always tend to make wrong decisions so that the plot gets to the point, I mean, the NTR simply enjoys or laughs at the decisions they make, for everyone else they look stupid, simple as that.

 

[ASDZXCQWER1321]

I read the new comments and I am surprised or amused that there are still people who confuse CANON with a fictional alternate history, I repeat, FICTIONAL. The topic does not matter here, if Fujino hates Cuckito and Slutsuna, if that were the case, does he also hate the protagonist of Chainsaw Man, does he hate Gudao from FATE GRAND ORDER, does he hate EMIYA from FATE?? well no. I have repeated a thousand times not to expect a rational decision in an NTR story, it is very rare that it happens, they always tend to make wrong decisions so that the plot gets to the point, I mean, the NTR simply enjoys or laughs at the decisions they make, for everyone else they look stupid, simple as that.
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I can't but every time I see your gif with Hebishima and Sinon (I always feel like it's a fem version of Inoda getting fucked by Kirito) I don't know if it's because Sinon's body looks too massive in it. xD

 

[mos555]

I read the new comments and I am surprised or amused that there are still people who confuse CANON with a fictional alternate history, I repeat, FICTIONAL. The topic does not matter here, if Fujino hates Cuckito and Slutsuna, if that were the case, does he also hate the protagonist of Chainsaw Man, does he hate Gudao from FATE GRAND ORDER, does he hate EMIYA from FATE?? well no. I have repeated a thousand times not to expect a rational decision in an NTR story, it is very rare that it happens, they always tend to make wrong decisions so that the plot gets to the point, I mean, the NTR simply enjoys or laughs at the decisions they make, for everyone else they look stupid, simple as that.
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I wonder how anyone who has never heard of SAO even understands what's going on in this game. Asuna and Kirito, they have practically no backstory, without knowing the canon, you won't understand who they are at all. Considering that Fujino has written down the romantic feelings of Asuna and Kirito very poorly, some people will not understand why they are together at all.

Are they really together? Who is Yui, why do they want to "return" her? Why "return"? Where was she before and where should she be returned from? Who are Alice and Klein? Why would they give them time at all? Why doesn't Sinon have a backstory, but so much time is devoted to it? Who is the Administrator? Why doesn't anyone tell you who she is and where she came from? Why do the characters have no backstory at all? What the fuck is going on? What is Aincrad? What kind of Sugo? Where is he torturing Asuna and why??? What's going on anyway? AAAAAAAAA!


If earlier in Fujino's games there was no plot and the games can be perceived as a series of porn videos with little movement between them, then in SAO Fujino decided to tell us a story, but this story does not work at all without knowledge of the canon. Therefore, it is extremely difficult to abstract from the canon when playing such a parody.

 

[ASDZXCQWER1321]

Envy, banal envy. Kirito got one of the best girls in the entire anime universe. And the pair of Kirito and Asuna is generally the most popular.

But now, seriously. People probably don't hate him. It's just that people are annoyed by his deliberate blindness and artificial stupidity. Fujino made Kirito too dumb in the second part. In the first part, Kirito at least suspected something, but in the second he completely turned into a brick. A fresh breath of air is a hallucination. Kirito at least began to think and suspect something. But the last couple of updates have been completely silent, perhaps the hallucination theme has become inconvenient for the accelerated completion of the game.

at the beginning of the second part there were still hints that kirito would suspect something, when we were just presented with the anxiety scale, but all the doubts at the beginning remained, I also thought that hallucinations would cause at least the slightest suspicion and at least lines of dialogue, but no