RPGM Sword Art Online: The Trap of Breath Concealed Magic [verβ1] [Fujino]

[nhami]

I talked with chatgpt about Fujino last update and it made an interesting argument:
The Yui Rebirth Ritual and Memory Alteration were bad writing because it is appear out of nowhere but it genius for the provocative elements of the netorare genre.
Asuna is gullible, Kirito is premature ejaculator, Inoda is sex god and get away free for every wrong thing he does. It is poor writing but it is very provocative for the audience.
The purpose of the netorare genre is just to cause shock in the audience and the last update have success in that. Having the characters being hopeless while things happen to them causes a shock.
Suguha and Sinon characters arc regain agency which is uncommon in netorare. Their characters are out of place in Fujino story.
This is a good argument. Althrough I was annoyed with the plot of the last update it certainly caused an impact on me.
I am curious about what is going to happen in the next updates. If Fujino will keep escalating the provocation or if he will tone down because of negative feedback.
I am also curious about what is going to happen to Suguha and Sinon in the low prurience ending. I assume the high prurience ending will be the good in twisted way ending. Suguha and Sinon will probably end up with Kirito in this ending.

 

[mos555]

I talked with chatgpt about Fujino last update and it made an interesting argument:
The Yui Rebirth Ritual and Memory Alteration were bad writing because it is appear out of nowhere but it genius for the provocative elements of the netorare genre.
Asuna is gullible, Kirito is premature ejaculator, Inoda is sex god and get away free for every wrong thing he does. It is poor writing but it is very provocative for the audience.
The purpose of the netorare genre is just to cause shock in the audience and the last update have success in that. Having the characters being hopeless while things happen to them causes a shock.
Suguha and Sinon characters arc regain agency which is uncommon in netorare. Their characters are out of place in Fujino story.
This is a good argument. Althrough I was annoyed with the plot of the last update it certainly caused an impact on me.
I am curious about what is going to happen in the next updates. If Fujino will keep escalating the provocation or if he will tone down because of negative feedback.
I am also curious about what is going to happen to Suguha and Sinon in the low prurience ending. I assume the high prurience ending will be the good in twisted way ending. Suguha and Sinon will probably end up with Kirito in this ending.

The script is provocative only because of the characters that Fujino uses. If instead of the SAO characters, the game had original, unknown characters, then the only thing this game could stand out from the many of the same is high-quality porn scenes.
The hand of the player who completed the Fujino game from start to finish. -

The script and the development of the plot without famous characters would be just a set of cliches and platitudes.

It's a feeling when an AI understands everything better than a living person. We're doomed. After chatgpt studied Fujino's game, he probably wanted to destroy humanity.

 

[AKIRA PARK]

I didn't visited this thread for like 3 days and THE HELL man 30+ pages discussing about this game

 

[AlterInfernalAllius]

New Progress report is up, nothing of value this time except the fact he fixed the 6/14 bug people had reported and that he's a bit behind sadly XP

 

[mos555]

7.14 Progress report

Current Progress:
Scripts：40%
Events：45%
CG：30%
fix the bug that prevented progression in the 6/14 camping event. Work's been a bit heavy this month, so the script progress is slightly behind—not sure if I can make it in time for Friday in-game.

目前的進步報告：
文本進度：40%
事件進度：45%
CG進度：30%
嘗試修復了过去露營事件的無法繼續BUG，這個月工作有點多，對話進度稍微有些落後，不知道能不能做到遊戲中的周五。

 

[Aniky Light]

New Progress report is up, nothing of value this time except the fact he fixed the 6/14 bug people had reported and that he's a bit behind sadly XP

So no discussions today? xD

 

[mos555]

Well, no new information or answers to questions, just a hint that Fujino probably won't have time to do a full 3 days in the game by the end of July.

 

[Aniky Light]

7.14 Progress report

Current Progress:
Scripts：40%
Events：45%
CG：30%
fix the bug that prevented progression in the 6/14 camping event. Work's been a bit heavy this month, so the script progress is slightly behind—not sure if I can make it in time for Friday in-game.

目前的進步報告：
文本進度：40%
事件進度：45%
CG進度：30%
嘗試修復了过去露營事件的無法繼續BUG，這個月工作有點多，對話進度稍微有些落後，不知道能不能做到遊戲中的周五。

Fujino: I'd better not post a report that's too juicy, otherwise there'll be a mess.

 

[mos555]

So no discussions today? xD

On the one hand, I even feel a little lighter, because some of the answers to Fujino's questions make me nervous.

 

[Aniky Light]

On the one hand, I even feel a little lighter, because some of the answers to Fujino's questions make me nervous.

Idem

 

[Aniky Light]

Well done Fujino, don't spoil anything, just post technical stuff

 

[mos555]

Well done Fujino, don't spoil anything, just post technical stuff

It could have been made even more concise.

7.14 Progress report

The development of the game is proceeding according to plan.

游戏的开发正在按计划进行。

 

[kinglionheart]

Well it seems the next update won't be v0.90 but v0.87 or something. If in-game Friday is the end of quarantine then it would mean that should be the long Asuna event.

Maybe another instance of an mini-update next month to add in Friday?

 

[Aniky Light]

It could have been made even more concise.

7.14 Progress report

The development of the game is proceeding according to plan.

游戏的开发正在按计划进行。

What plans? To make us clash with our nervous systems again?

 

[241771201]

謝謝
^^

 

[Aniky Light]

I hope Fujino has found a universal solution

 

[Lucifer8YmkRHyqYADP8he]

What means Friday in game means he will not quarantine in this month

 

[sock_puppet]

The last updates makes this game feel like an empty shell, feels like this history as planned to end in the rain scene in the woods but the players complained so much he kept extending more and more to the point everything become senseless. All the idea of Kirito having the "hallucinations" and this making him question what's real could be an premise good enough to a whole new game, and in this one it feels wasted, most of Fujino's great porn scenes feel wasted since the story has completely lost the track a long time ago. If this project had already ended, even if it was with an awful ending, we could already have at least two other games from Fujino with 5 stars quality by now (considering the length of his other games).

 

[ASDZXCQWER1321]

The last updates makes this game feel like an empty shell, feels like this history as planned to end in the rain scene on the woods but the players complained so much he kept extending more and more to the point everything become senseless. All the idea of Kirito having the "hallucinations" and this making him question what's real could be an premise good enough to a whole new game, and in this one it feels wasted, most of Fujino's great porn scenes feel wasted since the story has completely lost the track a long time ago. If this project had already ended, even if it was with an awful ending, we could already have at least two other games from Fujino with 5 stars quality by now (considering the length of his other games).

I agree, and there is a solution to this, you need to play only the first part and finish with it (but you can't know that it will be like this), since I really like the first part, and the second one gave me more dissatisfaction than joy, the plot is weak, and as for me, there are 4-5 good scenes that I like throughout the game, the rest are just quite ordinary or Inoda's ass xD

 

[Leo D. Marstone]

This is the original question translated by Fujino.
Q: Will Inoda NTR Kirito’s sister too?
A: No.

Alright so....what even is suguhas character supposed to be in this game. At first I thought we got a sub story line with her and hebishima going on but he got "sacked" from the story.

What is her purpose now? Does she have sex scenes with kirito? With someone else? With herself?
Does she drive the story forward in any shape or form?

I mean if she doesn't get content then by all means let inoda have her so her character can be used for some sex scenes. Might be a hot take but.....yeah.