VN Ren'Py Abandoned Take me softly [v0.1 Hotfix 1] [Rotveller]

[Crazygamer43]

Overview:
You are a young guy who returns to his hometown after studying abroad at the invitation of your father. You live in his house with his new family and find out that he is back in crime. Can you stop him before it's too late?​

Thread Updated: 2020-07-21
Release Date: 2020-07-21
Developer: Rotveller

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Version: 0.1 Hotfix 1
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English, Russian
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[Khairus]

Welcome and Best of luck with the Game

also, do we have to stop the criminal ? why can`t we join him and together create a criminal empire ?

or maybe even just let him get arrested or killed and take over the female family members :}

 

[hakulaku97]

so does it contain incest or does it have atleast an incest patch? because action with family members is better with real incest or incest in general

so will there be an incest tag for this game?

 

[Qmil679]

That butt looks nice in the first photo.

 

[5p1der]

Hmm that ass tho

 

[Hysni]

Looking good but needs extra tag like :Romance ,Dating,Vaginal,Creampie + Pregnancy
Good luck with Your Game Dev

 

[PinkGoddess]

Tag; big ass
First image; big ass

You give what you promise, Ill try this with a few more updates and in android port.

 

[XMimic]

Her face is probably brighter, than my future.

 

[Sinner30700]

MILF IS LIFE!!!!!!!

 

[Rotveller]

so will there be an incest tag for this game?

In future updates ( and the mc's sister will arrive )

also, do we have to stop the criminal ? why can`t we join him and together create a criminal empire ?

or maybe even just let him get arrested or killed and take over the female family members :}

I'll keep that in mind Way to NTR

 

[hakulaku97]

In future updates ( and the mc's sister will arrive )



I'll keep that in mind Way to NTR

first of nice sisters are allways good but will there be mom son action?
you mention NTR will it be avoidable?

 

[RafaeldSouza]

awesome

 

[BarbarrossaNA]

I'm glad when somebody attempts to make a game. A first try usually brings trials and tribulations as I'm sure the learning curve is steep. English as a second language further complicates this. With that being said I have to express my thoughts on this game and Dev. The Renders to me are uneven.. as in the daughter looks great.. the father is decently done.. and the mother looks.... not so good. The 'boss' pictures are 'foggy'? just not very defined, but the date renders are fine. With english as the second language we're very stilted and there is very little 'smooth' flowing conversation. The story could be stretched out more.. instead of a smooth production this one jumps from square to square. Say like comparing a choppy cartoon to a disney cartoon. Example would be maybe 3 renders jumping from talking in the bathroom to the sex scene.. Several places are like that. It needs more back and forth to make the conversation flow easier. This is more.. jump jump jump than flowing.

I'm sure as the DEV adds to the game things will smooth out quality wise BUT this definitely needs somebody to help with the wording of the conversations. For a first attempt I'm not gonna scale it on a # out of 10..

I've seen worse games develop into decent games and I've seen better games fail. Take this as constructive criticism and continue to work on your game. This shows me enough skills to continue on your path.. good luck Rotveller!

 

[blademaster89]

Welcome and Best of luck with the Game

also, do we have to stop the criminal ? why can`t we join him and together create a criminal empire ?

or maybe even just let him get arrested or killed and take over the female family members :}

Naughty boy(or girl?), want your own dad to be put to the gallows? lol Why not share with your old fart , think about it, he is getting his share of fun and you get the bonus and the females get double bonus . That way, it really stays within the family, a big happy, genetically proper family.... lol.

 

[blademaster89]

so does it contain incest or does it have atleast an incest patch? because action with family members is better with real incest or incest in general

so will there be an incest tag for this game?

It is next best to incest, to be honest, you can knock the ladies up without the fear of genetically impaired babies all the while fucking your mom/sisters/ and for the more adventurous....the father too? Also, this may bring new prospective to the game, let's wait and watch what the dev. has plans for this.
Of course, this is just my point of view, yours is perfect as well but I need to get that out of my system lol.

 

[rKnight]

...and find out that your father is back in crime. Can you stop him before it's too late?

 

[Rotveller]

first of nice sisters are allways good but will there be mom son action?

you mention NTR will it be avoidable?

I want to make a visual novel where your choices really affect the plot.
NTR will be optional (as well as all erotic scenes in first version... you may not get them at all, it all depends on you)

 

[✝Fenrir✝]

 

[xmilteach]

Thx

 

[tigerdiamond]

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man, people really do be out here just knee jerk reacting to those three letters without reading huh? Like, even in the post the dev brought it up, it was obvious it'd be optional; since it was in a conversation about an alternate path where you help your dad instead of stop him. Secondly, that isn't even really NTR, (Although the type of people who complain about NTR would disagree) it's sharing. NTR would be if you dad fucks them in front of you or some shit.