VN Ren'Py Abandoned Take me softly [v0.1 Hotfix 1] [Rotveller]

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Sulring Durgul

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I share most of BarbarrossaNA's impressions.
The story has potential, we'll see how it evolves.
Some pictures are really grainy (sister showing you the house, job interview) while others are clear. What kind of computer do you use for the rendering?
The models faces are not straight out of the box DAZ3D which shows the dev is trying for something unique. I quite like the father, and I find Dina very beautiful (her eyes :love:) but Anna's face looks a bit strange to me. Shame as the rest of her is really gorgeous.
Rotveller, your game would benefit greatly from an english-speaking translator. It would improve the dialogues because so far they are sometimes a bit strange. Also, there's an untranslated sentence during the breakfast scene.

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So far, there are no sound or music. Perhaps they will be added later?

Best of luck with your game.
 
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✝Fenrir✝

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man, people really do be out here just knee jerk reacting to those three letters without reading huh? Like, even in the post the dev brought it up, it was obvious it'd be optional; since it was in a conversation about an alternate path where you help your dad instead of stop him. Secondly, that isn't even really NTR, (Although the type of people who complain about NTR would disagree) it's sharing. NTR would be if you dad fucks them in front of you or some shit.
It's a joke...
 

Famescua

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First off I'd like to say that I like this game so far. Now you mentioned ntr, I'm not one of those that say I wont play this game because of it. You did say it would be avoidable so I have no issues with it. Now there are others out there who will straight out condemn the game because it was added. You should put a note in the tags that it will be added so you dont get so much backlash later on. You still will get backlash but at least you will have warned people about it first. Also I know some people will say its technically not ntr, but people here dont look at technicalities. As long as they see a love interest with another guy that is ntr on their eyes. Like I said I will still play this game just stating things that will come up later on.
 

Rotveller

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Some pictures are really grainy (sister showing you the house, job interview) while others are clear. What kind of computer do you use for the rendering?
Ryzen 5 3400G with RX580 and 16 GB RAM
Rendering on cpu all the time and some scenes too hard for him(average render time of all scenes is ~ 6 hours)

Also, there's an untranslated sentence during the breakfast scene.
I will fix it soon

So far, there are no sound or music. Perhaps they will be added later?
Yes!
 
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