RPGM Completed TakenoteR [v1.0] [HNStudy]

[LiMp17]

The only bad part about this game is that any update feels short to me,..really can't wait to see what happens next.

 

[Pierre76450]

Small clarification for those who criticize the creator of the game, know that the Creator is studying, so it is logical at times that he favors his future and his studies rather than the development of the game.
Of course I can understand your frustration but you can also understand that the person does not always have the time to concentrate on the game.

When talking about the low content put in this update 0.8 I can tell you that the first who should be disappointed is the creator but instead of criticizing, encourage him to continue developing this superb game, it is not by criticizing at all costs that it will make the creator want to continue it, many game creators give up on criticism so criticizing is understandable but make logical and constructive criticism and above all don't allow yourself to insult a thief creator when you didn't have what you wanted, it's very difficult to create games because you have to both satisfy the old ones that they like the content and try to attract new ones so it's a little complicated to convince everyone but once again it's not a critic without any objectivity that it's okay help the developer.

sorry, my english bad.

 

[ScrewMe]

The illusion of choice is there because thats what it is for the character. An illusion. Everyone knows its going to happen. The idea is not if, but when and how.

Secondly the plot builds up to more and more explicit levels with varying risks. Thats what people enjoy with corruption stories. The elevation of the plot over time as they break down from their own personal experiences. Thats quite literally a plot device in every corruption story whether its an NTR wife, or a guy banging 14 girls in a harem. Like I even expressed before, the story that you and the previous person suggests isn't even what happened. The wife doesn't start as a ho right away. But it happens over many scenes.

Lastly its cool you want a pick your own adventure where every choice matters. the reality is the scope of such a game like that is insanely larger than a game with illusions of choice. Plotting out a game like that would take a long time even in the scripting stage for the story alone. Let alone drafting, drawing/rendering, and completing the scenes for each which exponentially explode with choice based games. Different dialogues, plot trees, etc etc etc. All the people saying "why do my choices not matter!!" in games like this just wholey downplay the amount of effort that explicit kind of game takes. We have entire games that fit that mold on f95 that have been updating for YEARS and still aren't close to completion. Its easier to just tell a story straight out. Event he game you mention before, A Wife and Mother, has been going on since 2017.

These kinds of complaints just feel like nitpicks. And it feels more like its the typical "I hate NTR so I'm gonna play an NTR game and then try and covertly bash it without saying it". Just alone with the complaint " Who are these people who get off to 35 dudes fucking one girl and her being a complete cumdump? " shows exactly what you don't like about the game. And thats fine. Thats why we have the genre tags.

The action with the girl getting into inapropriate stuff happens on day 1, if my memory serves me right. It's not "What hell is wrong with these creeps" but "He groped me. It's bad but I liked it" - again, build-up is lacking.
As someone who's trying to make his own game at this point, the main thing which eats most of the time with me aren't branches, choices and plot - it's the fking time it takes to render stuff. Writing the dialogues gives you a heavy head, on that I agree.

Want to make a kinetic novel? Cool. Once more: do the proper build-up then. In here, it's "oh, a creep". And then another. And then another. Creep at the bar - oh, why won't I sit on his lap and then go to an empty room with him - nothing would happen, obviously? Creep at the beach - why won't I let him give me a massage)
The idea is good. If the main thing is girl's corruption then well...there's nothing to corrupt since she's already there on the day of arrival.
Hm, the elevation of the plot..."I suck a dick of my neighbor. And then the bald guy at the gym. And then I suck a dick of an old coworker. And a teenager. And then I suck two dicks" - does it develop the character in any kind at that point? It's just satisfying kinks at that point. If it's like that, then let me get to choose who to bang)

Who complains? I just shared an opinion. Whore yourself out(Slut type of game) and Magic Dick(Harem) are not my types of the game cause in 9 cases out of 10 they're written poorly and give you an impression of a teenage boy fantasy who never talked to a woman before.

 

[Pierre76450]

The action with the girl getting into inapropriate stuff happens on day 1, if my memory serves me right. It's not "What hell is wrong with these creeps" but "He groped me. It's bad but I liked it" - again, build-up is lacking.
As someone who's trying to make his own game at this point, the main thing which eats most of the time with me aren't branches, choices and plot - it's the fking time it takes to render stuff. Writing the dialogues gives you a heavy head, on that I agree.

Want to make a kinetic novel? Cool, do the build-up then. In here, if my memory serves me right, it's "oh, a creep". And then another. And then another. Creep at the bar - oh, why won't I sit on his lap and then go to an empty room with him - nothing would happen, obviously? Creep at the beach - why won't I let him give me a massage)
The idea is good. If the main thing is girl's corruption then well...there's nothing to corrupt since she's already there on the day of arrival.
Hm, the elevation of the plot..."I suck a dick of my neighbor. And then the bald guy at the gym. And then I suck a dick of an old coworker. And a teenager. And then I suck two dicks" - does it develop the character in any kind at that point? It's just satisfying kinks at that point. If it's like that, then let me get to choose who to bang)

Who complains? I just shared an opinion. Whore yourself out(Slut type of game) and Magic Dick(Harem) are not my types of the game cause in 9 cases out of 10 they're written poorly and give you an impression of a teenage boy fantasy who never talked to a woman before.

I completely understand what you mean and I somewhat share your opinion. personally it doesn't bother me that much since I play it just to pass the time not to have a good time but I understand what you mean.

After my message did not concern you since in what you say it is a constructive criticism, I am talking criticize without any objectivity you this is not your case so my message did not concern you.

 

[mc loving VI]

Changelog ???

 

[holy8675]

Hi there HNStudy, Happy new year man!
I was so happy to see that you managed to put out another episode
I really liked it, we are no getting slowly to the heated part of the game
I hope you all right and you will have this year even more time to your "hobby/passion"

 

[TinFoilHat19]

...And that was my exact point of quitting. The "choices" were just an illusion, the build-up is lost and we get a ho' straight up from the start.
That's one big problem I have with "Whore Of Babylon" type of games who position themselves as the ones with choices - cool, the chick will cheat, but let me at least have a choice who will be a lucky fella. And then the whole choice is "Would you like the hubby to be fucked or to be fucked, but with one more render?" Who are these people who get off to 35 dudes fucking one girl and her being a complete cumdump?

Does the game have animations?

 

[Alexey99]

Does anyone have a save of the end of 0.7? I don´t know why mine don´t appear anymore

 

[thisispuncake]

Does anyone have a save of the end of 0.7? I don´t know why mine don´t appear anymore

there should be a save in the games folder already

 

[Flyest_Nihilist]

Game doesnt start

 

[killer300]

Anyone knows what does the creator use to create this animation?

 

[EroPulse]

Anyone knows what does the creator use to create this animation?

PaintToolSAI 2

 

[twistyelf]

And you're saying like Pornstar is your regular job at the office)

The biggest FemProtag hits in here have these kind of choices, though. Look at AWAM where one path may lock out another one. Or JOHN, where you can avoid any dude you want.
That's the problem IMO.
One thing when Rape or something like it gets the plot going or builds the character, antagonist etc. But when characters in the story don't change at all and are just the way they are right away - then what's the point of your story and the journey they go through?
You could use an argument "oh, story in nsfw games", but if you don't need any story and build-up, why would you play a game and not fap to cartoonish porn/your generic stuff at PH, right?

JOHN and AWAM are what games? Cause your discussion is selling me on trying them out.

 

[EroPulse]

JOHN and AWAM are what games? Cause your discussion is selling me on trying them out.

Jessica O'Neils Hard News and A Wife and Mother.

I admit the games looks nice, but, unlike TakenoteR, those games have very long update times (some twice/triple as long as TakenoteR), and have been around for a few years now. Neither of those games have good penetration sex scenes, outside of the wives husbands. AWAM is notorious for "blue balling" and JOHN is a close second. You can go read their threads to see I'm not exaggerating.

I agree with ScrewMe, that some things are a little fast in this, but, at least this isn't two years in the making waiting for the wife to finally get fucked by someone other than their husband.

 

[holy8675]

Jessica O'Neils Hard News and A Wife and Mother.

I admit the games looks nice, but, unlike TakenoteR, those games have very long update times (some twice/triple as long as TakenoteR), and have been around for a few years now. Neither of those games have good penetration sex scenes, outside of the wives husbands. AWAM is notorious for "blue balling" and JOHN is a close second. You can go read their threads to see I'm not exaggerating.

I agree with ScrewMe, that somethings are a little fast in this, but, at least this isn't two years in the making waiting for the wife to finally get fucked by someone other than their husbands.

AWAM is notorious for "blue balling" and JOHN is a close second. You can go read their threads to see I'm not exaggerating.

well said. I would also add in the list the Perfect Marriage.
All 3 of them done with beautiful art but blue balling the consumer :S

 

[Old Man From Scene 24]

usually i skip RPGM games, but the map is relatively small, i really like it so far.

 

[Jeremiqss]

We wait so long for so few scenes...

 

[CutieLvr]

HNStudy, just wonderful, if not too short, only because I love it so much. The opening scene where Elika starts off with the boy, just wow!!, first a little hand job, and then to my surprise, she starts to suck him too. Just when she was actually going to put his big dick inside, she gets distracted. Man, what a dirty tease you are, lol. I am hoping that for the next time, she sucks and fucks him until he floods her pussy or ass or both while he is very much awake and maybe get some of his friends involved as well. Still hoping for some woof-woof action pretty soon too.
Hubby is being "woken", to sharing and infidelity. That's a good thing because he can't satisfy Elika and even he knows it. Hell, he can't even dance. The boys in the bar have to either take Elika and her friend into the toilets or upstairs and gangbang the fuck out of both of them. I would like to see her go out on the nudist beach and get gangbanged by all in front of her husband or by herself.
I haven't noticed if there was a gallery, but, with such nice pictures cumming out now, a gallery would be awesome. Extend the sex scenes longer with more detail. I just love the facial expressions you have for Elika.
At the end, it said that 8.5 should be out in January. So are we to expect another version before the end of January? Thank you, you are doing an awesome job.

 

[idkagoodusername33]

The action with the girl getting into inapropriate stuff happens on day 1, if my memory serves me right. It's not "What hell is wrong with these creeps" but "He groped me. It's bad but I liked it" - again, build-up is lacking.
As someone who's trying to make his own game at this point, the main thing which eats most of the time with me aren't branches, choices and plot - it's the fking time it takes to render stuff. Writing the dialogues gives you a heavy head, on that I agree.

Want to make a kinetic novel? Cool. Once more: do the proper build-up then. In here, it's "oh, a creep". And then another. And then another. Creep at the bar - oh, why won't I sit on his lap and then go to an empty room with him - nothing would happen, obviously? Creep at the beach - why won't I let him give me a massage)
The idea is good. If the main thing is girl's corruption then well...there's nothing to corrupt since she's already there on the day of arrival.
Hm, the elevation of the plot..."I suck a dick of my neighbor. And then the bald guy at the gym. And then I suck a dick of an old coworker. And a teenager. And then I suck two dicks" - does it develop the character in any kind at that point? It's just satisfying kinks at that point. If it's like that, then let me get to choose who to bang)

Who complains? I just shared an opinion. Whore yourself out(Slut type of game) and Magic Dick(Harem) are not my types of the game cause in 9 cases out of 10 they're written poorly and give you an impression of a teenage boy fantasy who never talked to a woman before.

Yes, a lot of games have the issues you are expressing. But this one doesn't. It has a VERY real reason as to why she is doing stuff the way it is. Having a marriage lacking in affection and sexual contact can leave a partner wanting more. Its one of the most grounded real stories I've seen in games because of how much it happens in normal relationships with people neglecting their partners wants and needs. And then when tempted by it, they are more okay with it despite knowing what is wrong. As I explained before, the husband being a bum and even setting up the situations that the wife gets into on day one contributes to it. The couple clearly have had problems for a long time like the wife says in many of her inner monologues. He doesn't pleasure her enough, ignores her, and this frustrates the wife. She then uses the idea of a smut novel as justification for cheating as material for the novel. It has an incredibly grounded premise and we are not just starting from the very first issue, but clearly later into their relationship where these problems have already been bubbling. The wife just simply was never in a situation like this that would allow her to explore those thoughts prior to the vacation. A lot of this is explained in the story which is why it confuses me how others have issues on the pacing.

And yes rendering and drawing takes the most time. But if you have a pick your own choice script, it balloons the amount of renders and drawings you need to make by multiple times. One scene can be now 6 different scenes with different characters and different dialogues for each depending on which of the 32 previous choices you made. Devs get around this by just locking off scenes instead of making new ones for each choice, which is then still an illusion of choice.

I said most people complain about this because it seems intentional going into a game where clearly the main goal is for the femprotag to whore themselves out, only to be shocked when that happens. Its like going into a McDonalds and going "well what the fuck.... they have Big Macs here??? How can this be??!". And nearly all corruption games become a whore yourself out or magic dick game.

I just simply don't agree this is one of those games where there is "no reason" for the wife to be acting the way she does like many other games have. You don't need to go 50 updates with just a handjob for build up so long as you have a clear course as to why things are happening and pacing to explain it.

 

[C10ud]

how to fix sauna scene problem? Game stucked after sauna scene...