Having played through most of this update, I do agree that the reviews about the script are fairly accurate. Of the 2000 or so lines, about 1/2 of them are literally repeating a line of thought from 3-4 lines above it or paraphrasing it but essentially containing the exact same content. It is very redundant and caused me to speed-click and skip through quite a few moments where two or more people say the same thing to one another 2-3 times in a row, in addition to a 4th time just thinking it.
The art is fine, the models are good looking, and the premise is fun, for sure. But the text could be edited down significantly.
One minor style thing is how the renders of two people thinking and talking happen. It's the both of them in one pose, but instead of animating or adjusting the pose, the camera angle changes without a single alteration of the position or pose, expression or sense of any movement. These events could be better animated, even with still shots but actually physically changing the position of an arm, leg, hand, or even facial expression. It's literally the unmoving frozen state taken from 2-3 angles.
