What if I told you that I have (kind of) done this? That I've completely re-written the script and story for the first five chapters? Like you, I loved the renders and was baffled by the story and dialogue choices. At first it was just for my own entertainment, but I've seen a lot of people say the dialogue and so on are quite poor. I have to post some more before I could upload it, but I've put together a .rar file that will let you switch between the base game and the new version. Would you (or anyone else) be interested in it?The game has a great vibe to it with the steampunk genre combined with a bit of Judge Dredd, but the story and especially dialogue are lacking.
Making the story work wouldn't require much in the way of changes. Just make the starting society one in which, 1984-style, the government has worked to make people reject emotion.
I'm actually kind of curious myself. I wasn't really against the story or anything, but I'd kill to see it improvedWhat if I told you that I have (kind of) done this? That I've completely re-written the script and story for the first five chapters? Like you, I loved the renders and was baffled by the story and dialogue choices. At first it was just for my own entertainment, but I've seen a lot of people say the dialogue and so on are quite poor. I have to post some more before I could upload it, but I've put together a .rar file that will let you switch between the base game and the new version. Would you (or anyone else) be interested in it?
I need three posts to post a link, so OK, I'll post it as soon as I'm able. I really have changed it around quite a bit in many ways. A quick rundown:I'm actually kind of curious myself. I wasn't really against the story or anything, but I'd kill to see it improved
I'd love to see it. I did the same for A Sparrow's Flight some time ago and released it as a mod. The dev didn't mind.What if I told you that I have (kind of) done this? That I've completely re-written the script and story for the first five chapters? Like you, I loved the renders and was baffled by the story and dialogue choices. At first it was just for my own entertainment, but I've seen a lot of people say the dialogue and so on are quite poor. I have to post some more before I could upload it, but I've put together a .rar file that will let you switch between the base game and the new version. Would you (or anyone else) be interested in it?
If it did, the world would either be a dystopia or utopia, depending on who you are.(snip) Good porn rarely makes good politics.
Oh sick, sort of reminds me of the Business Sex Manner comics, but like the moments when this stuff is just getting established, and more wide spread. I'm into it.I need three posts to post a link, so OK, I'll post it as soon as I'm able. I really have changed it around quite a bit in many ways. A quick rundown:
- Now set on a parallel universe Earth, not some entirely fantastical world. Now called 1894 (lol geddit?)
- The story's not "We abolished sex, now we're unabolishing it" or w/ever the original was. It's now like the rise of a highly sexualised form of fascism or something.
- It's pretty strong stuff. The original has some kind of vague sense to it that reminds me of sexual-revolution-era vibes. Like we've all just got to get over our hang-ups, man, that kind of thing. This is really far more sadistic maledom.
- Many people may find it offensive! A lot of misogyny, a little bit of racism, quite a bit of ethnic abuse (mostly of the Irish so it doesn't really count). Not reflective of my actual views.
- It's still self-contained stories, but it relates, loosely, the overall progression, over the course of around fifty years, from horrific (sexual) violence towards anti-colonial insurgents to the abolition of women's rights entire. Women are simply property in this 1894 (again, not reflective of my actual views. Good porn rarely makes good politics.)
- Chapters 2 and 3 have switched order for Reasons.
ETA Also - Characters' names now appear when they speak, like normal.
It's actually subtitled 'A Porn Dystopia'!If it did, the world would either be a dystopia or utopia, depending on who you are.
There other game is priority: Special Request: In the Web of Corruption [v2.4] [Nemiegs] and it just updated.almost an year no updates, abandoned or missing final tag?
Well, I'm sorry if you're annoyed that I made a mod for your game. But what you're saying here is easily contradicted by statements you've made ITT well before I decided to release it - the fact that you'd more or less washed your hands of it was a big part of my decision to actually go ahead and put it out there.At one point, someone decided to rewrite the text of TFA without asking me and published it here. I realized I didn’t want to spend my already limited free time and resources creating art for an anonymous person on the internet. So, I cancelled all my plans for TFA and shifted my focus to working on the script for an entirely new game that will follow SR.