Story definetly has potential and the dark theme of the novel is also great to match the story. I like the set up as its obvious you've taken your time to flesh out the character to feel realistic in a gritty scenario.
Personally I feel repulsed by nose/septum and eyebrow piercings on women, but I understand many don't care. It just makes it less enjoyable, but I get that its part of the punky/trashy aesthetic you were going for.
The font was difficult to read. I get that you wanted it to match the mood, but typically that kind of font is just used for headlines.
Personally I feel repulsed by nose/septum and eyebrow piercings on women, but I understand many don't care. It just makes it less enjoyable, but I get that its part of the punky/trashy aesthetic you were going for.
The font was difficult to read. I get that you wanted it to match the mood, but typically that kind of font is just used for headlines.