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if you don't want to know what's coming, you could just not read the stuff inside the spoiler tags and labelled "storyline preview"I really wished Perv stopped spoiling the scenes.
Your fault in this case since the spoiler box is pretty much labeled "Storyline Preview".I really wished Perv stopped spoiling the scenes. I mean after that last patreon update its pretty obvious Lilly's scene is coming.
At least, I hope, we're out of that damn boring planet already. Tbh the story has been kinda losing me for a while. I do hope it didnt peak at the Convitae episode and we're in for better days.
if you don't want to know what's coming, you could just not read the stuff inside the spoiler tags and labelled "storyline preview"
I still think Perv can make a storyline preview without spoiling whose getting a scene... but my bad, I guess?Your fault in this case since the spoiler box is pretty much labeled "Storyline Preview".![]()
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Then by definition it wouldn't be a storyline preview.I still think Perv can make a storyline preview without spoiling whose getting a scene... but my bad, I guess?
Storyline preview:Then by definition it wouldn't be a storyline preview.![]()
Storyline preview is not "you're gonna bang this one and that one" in my book, but whatever... I see a case of F95ism in this thread.Then by definition it wouldn't be a storyline preview.![]()
There.....fixed itStoryline preview:
1. Shit happens
LEWD SCENE!
2. MC makes a plan to deal with said shit
LEWD SCENE!
3. Plan doesn't work out the way MC hoped
LEWD SCENE!
4. Shit happens
LEWD SCENE!
5. Cliffhanger
It's not "F95ism", it's simple common sense.Storyline preview is not "you're gonna bang this one and that one" in my book, but whatever... I see a case of F95ism in this thread.
They're filler yes, but I'm not sure they're just pointless, especially in Eva's case.I'm also not a fan of the simulator scenes as they just seem like pointless filler, trying to say on a hi-tech spaceship they cannot turn off power to a system or even reset it hmm
That's a good point, I hadn't thought of how those would end! Psycho-sim Lilly (so close to writing cyberpsycho there!Though I guess with MC's reunion with Eva (and her return to the Iron Bastard set to happen in the future), the big question is how Perv is gonna close up Simul-Eva and Simul-Lilly storylines (here's hoping they get tied off nicely, and not just tossed aside).
You know, it might be one hell of an awkward moment if somehow Eva & Lilly both stumble upon MC's simulation.That's a good point, I hadn't thought of how those would end! Psycho-sim Lilly (so close to writing cyberpsycho there!) was disturbing. I can't help but think MC should've created an AI shrink, or therapist, to leave in there with her...
lol So true! They would each have valid questions - none of them are going to be easy to answer!You know, it might be one hell of an awkward moment if somehow Eva & Lilly both stumble upon MC's simulation.
And are you sure that AI shrink/therapist would be safe in there with her?
I'd think the shrink's reaction after spending 30 seconds of Simul-Lilly in that state would be "Oh hell.... no. I don't get paid (do AIs even get paid in simulation?) enough for this shit"![]()
Maybe I worded that badly, rather than pointless maybe an unnecessary direction. I could see him using the sim to try to connect to his sister because he's worried about her but having him treating the sims as if they are real and agonizing over them just didn't work for me. IMO it would have worked better as something he just turned on when he was feeling down or lost and trying to connect to Eva in some way, now it's more like a bad Star Trek holodeck episode, of course that's just my opinion, some people might really like the contentThey're filler yes, but I'm not sure they're just pointless, especially in Eva's case.
I mean, only appearance she had was with MC, Lilly and the rest of the navy's exploration group in the very beginning, then gets kidnapped and afterwards we don't see her until MC's group arrives at the Acarhyn planet.
Quite a long gap between beginning till that time with no Eva content so for Eva at least, the whole "Simul-Eva" storyline did make sense since MC missed his sister so much.
Makes less sense for Simul-Lilly case especially considering she started going psychotic, but Simul-Eva was basically alone in the simulation and MC basically had to have someone to keep her company while he's not there.
Though I guess with MC's reunion with Eva (and her return to the Iron Bastard set to happen in the future), the big question is how Perv is gonna close up Simul-Eva and Simul-Lilly storylines (here's hoping they get tied off nicely, and not just tossed aside).
Sounds like someone had lunch at Taco Bell. Then was stupid and ate it again for dinner.Storyline preview:
1. Shit happens
2. MC makes a plan to deal with said shit
3. Plan doesn't work out the way MC hoped
4. Shit happens
5. Cliffhanger
too soon. around end of month.any update?