Perverteer, you cruel cruel man, leaving things on a cliffhanger like that!
Seriously though, absolutely stellar story and visuals! Your games are the gold standard when it comes to taboo as far as I'm concerned. Though I do have a bone to pick with you that I'm not going to explicitly name so as not to give away too many spoilers (mc only gets to touch her boobs! C'mon man!). I can't wait to see what happens next.
A quick curious question.. will Rahia return at any point? I quite like her character even though I chose the Solo option. Wondering if she'd become a potential harem member in the future?
She might be already for all I know I'm on episode 11 after all but.. if not are there any intentions of such in the future?
Again, she's by far one of my favorite characters, you could have her search for Eva as her Queen and then accompany the MC and over time they grow closer? Just a thought.
Since it was hinted she survived in the get-away, I'd honestly love if it she became a crew member somehow and then a harem member.
Again, she's by far one of my favorite characters, you could have her search for Eva as her Queen and then accompany the MC and over time they grow closer?
One possible option. Another could be, that she is the one rescue the MC drifting through space or the head pristress on behalf of the Consiour backing - or the head pristress daughter.
Their is enough love for Rahia here, much more than for "the bitch" head pristress. Although, I believe, Ava had already called dips on Rahia.
What a wild and fucking great ride ! Been playing your game non stop on my free time for a few days now and I must say I am delighted ! Almost everything felt so right, from renders to character personalities to story.
Quite refreshing to see a "Chosen One" story where the MC is not the actual McGuffin (or at least doesn't seems so for now). I honestly felt like I was back on the Normandy sometimes, even went as far as naming my MC Shepard. You just have a way to twist our expectations:
Which bring me to the first point that I might have a bit of an annoyance. Nothing big, really, but I find the MC to be quite... tame? I mean, You made a great job in offering lenience for player expression during the dialoge (like during the Vess scene in the dungeon, it felt right to be able to vent our anger and bitterness at her betrayal, as she really deserved it imo) but if i'm not wrong, the crew has been on the run for about a year now, smuggling and dealing with violence for most of the time, and yet MC still feels like he's still a bit green? I mean, I don't expect him to become Han Solo after just a year of course, but i find him to be quite soft, maybe too soft ? I'd love to have more options like we had at the breeding farm and become an ice cold mercenary if the situation permits it (and yes, I mean resorting to killing or worse if need be) .
As for the second point that i'd like to refer it's about the narration. Up until now, the story in itself is pretty captivating, but i've noticed that the player is slowly losing the grip on the "driving" of the story. For the first few episodes, the player had the commands on the storyline, choosing where to go and who to meet to progress. But lately, it feels more like we have taken a backseat and the events are dragging us along. Which is understandable since we are the ones looking for something, but I'd still like to point out that this kind of narrative tend to frustrate players if drawn too long because we are loosing the control of our story thereby diminushing the impact of our character in the grand scheme of things. You probably already know all of that, but i like to be thorough in my impressions.
To end on a more positive note: The best Girls to me are Lilly - i'm a sucker for redhead and freckles -, Aven -killing machine on the streets and sweet lover in the sheets - and... Vess - so ... fucking hot... and cute... and adorable. You are doing a tremendous work, dev. It's a real gem. Keep going, mate.
I'm in chapter 12A at the moment, and I'm so incredibly upset, lol. I'm taking the situation with Vess way too personally, I know.
Rant incoming: She betrays everybody, her crew, the acarhyn, even the MC that she's grown to love and who she chose to continue to get close to in spite of what she intended to continue doing. She's risking death or worse for everyone involved, for the chance to get her estranged mother back that she barely knows. Now, I'm assuming that the logic here is that she's desperate for a love that she hopes her mother could give her, but the crew and ESPECIALLY the MC was already offering her that same love. AND it doesn't justify her insane actions regardless, which is never resolved btw (I'm not quite done with the chapter, but it doesn't seem like it). She says she's sorry, and I'm sure that she is, but at no point does she admit that her actions were wrong, or that she wouldn't do it again if she thought that there was a good chance to get her mother back. She only agrees that it was selfish, and says that she wants to make amends, as if something so ridiculously unforgivable could ever be made up for.
It's so egregious, and I just feel so insulted to the point that I almost wish the author would write a formal apology. (I'd never expect that ofc, don't get me wrong. They can do what they want).
I'm at the point where you can either "Leave an opening" or "Shut her down", and if it wasn't for the fact that this is a porn game and that she's probably my favorite of the bunch (+ those puppydog eyes are really hard to ignore), I would've opted for the latter. She needs to understand the gravity of what she's done and just how insanely wrong it was. However, am I correct in assuming that that would effectively permanently end any potential positive relationship with her? What happens to her?
I'm in chapter 12A at the moment, and I'm so incredibly upset, lol. I'm taking the situation with Vess way too personally, I know.
Rant incoming: She betrays everybody, her crew, the acarhyn, even the MC that she's grown to love and who she chose to continue to get close to in spite of what she intended to continue doing. She's risking death or worse for everyone involved, for the chance to get her estranged mother back that she barely knows. Now, I'm assuming that the logic here is that she's desperate for a love that she hopes her mother could give her, but the crew and ESPECIALLY the MC was already offering her that same love. AND it doesn't justify her insane actions regardless, which is never resolved btw (I'm not quite done with the chapter, but it doesn't seem like it). She says she's sorry, and I'm sure that she is, but at no point does she admit that her actions were wrong, or that she wouldn't do it again if she thought that there was a good chance to get her mother back. She only agrees that it was selfish, and says that she wants to make amends, as if something so ridiculously unforgivable could ever be made up for.
It's so egregious, and I just feel so insulted to the point that I almost wish the author would write a formal apology. (I'd never expect that ofc, don't get me wrong. They can do what they want).
I'm at the point where you can either "Leave an opening" or "Shut her down", and if it wasn't for the fact that this is a porn game and that she's probably my favorite of the bunch (+ those puppydog eyes are really hard to ignore), I would've opted for the latter. She needs to understand the gravity of what she's done and just how insanely wrong it was. However, am I correct in assuming that that would effectively permanently end any potential positive relationship with her? What happens to her?
Woah... that's a little extreme.
I'm sure you've played further at this point, but there seems to be a redemption in play.
While it may be ridiculous for her to do what she did, after all, she was probably naive enough to assume the the Confessor might let the crew go... and only take Eva (Someone she never met) But never doubt a daughters love for her mother
I did. Its stupid because there is no "back" button to roll to the previous screen. I saved on "end of chapter" and when I press next, it just says thanks for playing. I had to scroll to go back to the previous scene, AFTER that the new chapter loads in.
Woah... that's a little extreme.
I'm sure you've played further at this point, but there seems to be a redemption in play.
While it may be ridiculous for her to do what she did, after all, she was probably naive enough to assume the the Confessor might let the crew go... and only take Eva (Someone she never met) But never doubt a daughters love for her mother
I kinda doubt that. With what she tells us, I'm sure she knows exactly what sort of danger she put everyone in. Hell, even if she somehow didn't know before, we saw first hand what The Confessor was willing to do when his handmaidens assaulted the information broker's home (I forget his name). Not to mention that aside from maybe the priests, the acarhyn obviously weren't going to just let The Confessor waltz right in, let alone take their queen.
I kinda doubt that. With what she tells us, I'm sure she knows exactly what sort of danger she put everyone in. Hell, even if she somehow didn't know before, we saw first hand what The Confessor was willing to do when his handmaidens assaulted the information broker's home (I forget his name). Not to mention that aside from maybe the priests, the acarhyn obviously weren't going to just let The Confessor waltz right in, let alone take their queen.
It's extreme to ask the "author to write a formal apology" The audacity.
Anyway, Vess is a fictional porn character that clearly shows remorse for her stupidity. She's allowed to stay with the MC and clearly will be given plenty of time for the story to forgive her of her transgressions. Hang in there.... She'll become the love of your life soon again.
It's extreme to ask the "author to write a formal apology" The audacity.
Anyway, Vess is a fictional porn character that clearly shows remorse for her stupidity. She's allowed to stay with the MC and clearly will be given plenty of time for the story to forgive her of her transgressions. Hang in there.... She'll become the love of your life soon again.
Well first of lemme make it clear that I at no point asked for an apology, even remotely, and I never would. If the developer is happy with their product then they should stand by that. I'm just bothered that I've sat through so many hours of what is an otherwise great game and a decent story to boot, getting invested in the story and its characters, and then this bit of writing happens that I personally absolutely do not agree with.
Have you never been angry at something in a movie or book before?
Well first of lemme make it clear that I at no point asked for an apology, even remotely, and I never would. If the developer is happy with their product then they should stand by that. I'm just bothered that I've sat through so many hours of what is an otherwise great game and a decent story to boot, getting invested in the story and its characters, and then this bit of writing happens that I personally absolutely do not agree with.
Have you never been angry at something in a movie or book before?