I really liked this update, opposed to the previous one which I felt as a bit of a filler with the club and Convitae, this did seemed to move the main plot forward a bit more, and with the introduction of the green Klingons, it opened up possibilities for future allies against the eugenic women in my opinion (a warrior race that is all about glory and honor should revel in the possibility to fight a powerful enemy), which could bring Hannah back.
The only thing I don't like here is Ziv. Not the fact that she has a doodle, I can avoid that, but rather how she acts and how the MC reacts to her ultimately. You made a deal with her, where she "forgot" to tell you that by making it you'll get an even bigger target on your back that you already have, putting your friends and Thim in more danger, and when you call her out on it, she gets pissy. She offers the Tavor quest, not really out of kindness but as a part of a deal, and then when it turns out that there's still more fishy shit around them, she's acting rather pompous upon calling them out. I mean, if you understandably get angry and such, she basically tells you to fuck off every time, acting like she's in a position to do that, and the MC just automatically caves in and bitches out of the situation. That part was a huge what the fuck, and honestly I'd rather throw her ass out on the airlock when she does that.