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RubyRomanceGames, you'll want to go back and comb through for some grammaticals.
For example (just a random selection), punctuation and capitalization:
And sentence structure/word choice:
Just a head's up.
For example (just a random selection), punctuation and capitalization:
Python:
scene ep2_house_party_fr_1_crowd_dance_32 with quick_dissolve
kay "by the way I want to introduce you to members of my book club"
....
scene ep2_house_party_fr_1_crowd_dance_36 with quick_dissolve
ju "and I like your outfit very punk rock"
....
scene ep2_house_party_fr_1_crowd_dance_46 with quick_dissolve
ju "at least somebody appreciates my dress unlike some people"
....
scene ep2_house_party_fr_1_crowd_dance_60 with quick_dissolve
mc "how's Kayla?"
scene ep2_house_party_fr_1_crowd_dance_61 with quick_dissolve
ju "she's calmed down maybe you should go talk to her after."
....
Python:
scene ep2_house_party_fr_1_crowd_dance_51 with quick_dissolve
th "How rude of me, Hmm why don't we get to know each other closer?"