VN Ren'Py The Adored Marriage [Ch.1 v0.7] [Simbaclaw]

[Firaxius]

Vn isn't to bad, but i noticed several grammar faults here and there, also, when going out, you choose between red or black dress, I picked the red dress, then enter club she wore red dress, but when seated she suddenly in black dress. Might hev to revise the grammar faults and such image mistakes, but beside that it a decent VN.

 

[Simbaclaw]

Vn isn't to bad, but i noticed several grammar faults here and there, also, when going out, you choose between red or black dress, I picked the red dress, then enter club she wore red dress, but when seated she suddenly in black dress. Might hev to revise the grammar faults and such image mistakes, but beside that it a decent VN.

I’ll fix them and reupload asap. Thank you so much!

 

[Singedularty]

looking forward to seeing how this game progresses. definite potential and it's pretty solid so far. thanks and good luck to the devs

 

[DIRTY FILTHY Animal]

not a bad first update, wifes hot, got a great body, the fading in and out of every scene is a little repetitious, i know you can turn that off under transitions but then it saves that setting for other renpy games. Also if you need a proofreader let me know, since I do that for a couple other games. here is the scene people are talking about in the club after we picked the red dress, when she sits down one frame is shown in the black dress

 

[Kerobin]

wow, the haters are coming out of the woodwork. As far as I can see, this is the developer's first release so I don't understand comments like "where is the ignore button" or "it will be abandoned". Regardless, I'm excited to see what happens next. The tags could be revised. As far as I can see, you play only as a male protagonist and some of the tags are more "planned" than in game ..anyway good luck

 

[AssRider]

Got my attention.
Haven't played it but the fact that you can choose outfit so early in the game is a big plus. Keep the high heels, add some nylons, but most importantly: communicate constantly (at least once a month) and I'll more than likely throw some bucks in that direction.
Good luck!

 

[lzmc]

When you see the name of this game, you know what the game is about.

 

[Pippone]

yeah, another ntr/female protagonist .I love it.

 

[JLConradie]

Really a nice start.. I like it... just don't die on us.. and don't let us wait 20 releases later, or 6 years for the first encounter

 

[Sldia]

Making it possible to change Evelyn's name would be nice.

 

[Pippone]

don't rush it, more the teasing less sex is the way

 

[Marc9]

SWINGING TAG is missing

 

[shiqz]

wow, the haters are coming out of the woodwork. As far as I can see, this is the developer's first release so I don't understand comments like "where is the ignore button" or "it will be abandoned". Regardless, I'm excited to see what happens next. The tags could be revised. As far as I can see, you play only as a male protagonist and some of the tags are more "planned" than in game ..anyway good luck

It's quite simple as to why but i just put them onto my Ignore as they pop up, tired of seeing their hate comments.

Simbaclaw Looks good, will keep this one on my Watch, don't lose your Motivation because of some comments

 

[Gamesstar]

Simbaclaw Congratulations on your game
Is there any femdom scenes currently in the game? What are your future plans on femdom, will there be a separate route for it?

 

[JESparrow]

All perfect marriage and relationship leads to ntr

 

[xert13]

it's clearly written in the post under the description, NTR

Yes, but NTR as used on this site can encompass netorase which is sharing, netori where the male steals others LI or Netorare where the LI is “taken” by another without knowledge or consent of husband/bf. If he knowingly watches it’s cuck. Sharing or netorase is often labeled Netorare. So, I get the sense that this VN is more sharing, but could be mistaken. Only the Dev can clarify.

 

[Frankbob]

wow, the haters are coming out of the woodwork. As far as I can see, this is the developer's first release so I don't understand comments like "where is the ignore button" or "it will be abandoned". Regardless, I'm excited to see what happens next. The tags could be revised. As far as I can see, you play only as a male protagonist and some of the tags are more "planned" than in game ..anyway good luck

Yep pretty normal for the anti NTR types to constantly try and trash devs and games that don't fit their idea of what a game/story should be.

 

[Nemesiz691]

Wife cheat yet lol?

 

[packard1928]

Great start ! Interesting couple... and love to see how it continues. Nice renders also!

 

[Kaikoaa98]

Mac version not working