Outstanding update @Mircom3D ! Really enjoyed playing through this and Anne is one of the most beautifully rendered/enjoyable characters that I’ve seen. In regard to the pace of the game, I think that unfortunately as a dev you’re never going to win haha. There will always be complaints about a game moving to fast, but if you commit a serious amount of detail there will be complaints about the game moving too slow, case in point A Wife and Mother. In that aspect, I think that you should continue at whatever pace you feel comfortable with and trust your instinct, it’s gotten you this far with a growing number of fans. However, I think that its important to consider the context of the game at this point. The couple is on vacation, their first vacation after deciding to share each other. This is the perfect opportunity to try out their fantasies, to be spontaneous, to rush it. No one there cares or knows who they are. This is the perfect opportunity to make rash judgements or take giant leaps forward. By experimenting here, they figure out whether this is something they can pursue at home. It makes sense that Anne would try these things here, where no one knows them, as opposed to at home, where there might be serious consequences. In that perspective, I fully support her progression in this update. I also love Anne’s style! I think that outfits play a huge part in how we enjoy these games and is often underappreciated. All of Anne’s outfits are stunning, great job!
I do have one suggestion in regards to the central use of peeking on Anne. While I can’t think of another better/realistic way to do this, often we hear the MC complain how he wishes he could hear what’s going on, and I personally would like to hear it too! My suggestion is that in addition to the MC’s perspective, can we also experience each scene as if we were in the room? As the scene plays out we can not only watch from his perspective, but intermittently we can jump into the room and experience the scene. This way we can not only feel the excitement of the MC, but also hear what Anne is saying and experience the full scene, not just visually. Also, I personally found it very hot when Anne was telling the MC of how Ryan caressed her on the first night, whenever the MC left the room. Instead of having the MC always around and spying, how about we have Anne narrate some of her encounters at night before bed? It could be like a flashback, while Anne narrates we could see the scene. This could be smaller stuff, maybe she flashed or made out with someone, but since the MC wasn’t there she could act a bit more freely. Anyway, these are just suggestions, keep up the great work!
I do have one suggestion in regards to the central use of peeking on Anne. While I can’t think of another better/realistic way to do this, often we hear the MC complain how he wishes he could hear what’s going on, and I personally would like to hear it too! My suggestion is that in addition to the MC’s perspective, can we also experience each scene as if we were in the room? As the scene plays out we can not only watch from his perspective, but intermittently we can jump into the room and experience the scene. This way we can not only feel the excitement of the MC, but also hear what Anne is saying and experience the full scene, not just visually. Also, I personally found it very hot when Anne was telling the MC of how Ryan caressed her on the first night, whenever the MC left the room. Instead of having the MC always around and spying, how about we have Anne narrate some of her encounters at night before bed? It could be like a flashback, while Anne narrates we could see the scene. This could be smaller stuff, maybe she flashed or made out with someone, but since the MC wasn’t there she could act a bit more freely. Anyway, these are just suggestions, keep up the great work!
