the only good Martin is a dead Martin.
Tony standing there thinking. thought you would get away with stealing my women? fuck you asshole. #PoeticJustice
the only good Martin is a dead Martin.
Tony standing there thinking. thought you would get away with stealing my women? fuck you asshole. #PoeticJustice
I understand where you're coming from and somewhat agree, but recall that there's no backstory with Anne's mom. We implicitly assume she's not stolen boyfriends from Anne in the past. Dad, on the other hand, did. I don't know about anyone else, but if my dad had started banging my college gf's I would have done the freak! I can't imagine how that would have ruined a relationship for evermore. So, in one sense, Mircom really didn't play up the douchebag aspect far enough. Or, maybe he did and that revealed the really low level beta status of the MC. Just depends on how one wants to view it, I suppose.
Yeah, the whole Martin relationship is the stuff that only works on Porn-Logic™. Martin isn't suave or persuasive enough to actually bag Anne on his own. He supposedly has a history of doing this, yet the only way for the cucking route to go forward is for Tony to make the dumbest possible decision at every turn, then act surprised when history repeats itself.
It's also the sort of thing that when fans of the game rally around it saying that 'it was inspired by a true story', I'm left thinking that the word inspired there is doing a lot of heavy lifting. Cause Martin's supposed past actions is a level of malicious and personal betrayal that any sane person would have reacted to by disowning their father; that's not the sort of person you invite out to the beach with your wife, and then trust enough to leave them alone together. But again, Porn-Logic™.
It's like the last 2 seasons of Game of Thrones where they were not worried about characters acting against type or being dumb as hell, they just need to get the story from Point A to Point B come hell or high water; and they're going to bash all of these square characters into the round holes of the plot with this massive hammer until we get there (because at this point the creative heads have absolutely checked out of the project).
Freki that is a screenshot from a fan made game called My Life as a Stewardess. It is not canon or from TAC in anyway other than use of the same characters.
Freki that is a screenshot from a fan made game called My Life as a Stewardess. It is not canon or from TAC in anyway other than use of the same characters.
still, you say it is the same characters (models) I understand that but the statement made above it makes it seem like a spoiler picture for some (I hadn't seen this updated recently and thought honestly you were posting a pic from the VN that I hadn't gotten to yet)
the only good Martin is a dead Martin.
Tony standing there thinking. thought you would get away with stealing my women? fuck you asshole. #PoeticJustice
it would be interesting to know what an example of an ending with no-lazy writing would be for you.
this is the second time you quote me by talking about "lazy writing" and instead I described many different possible endings here... I'm sure as a developer you should know that an interactive story can have multiple endings
what I mean is that only one of the endings should remain open for a future sequel...
but maybe I understand that you wish this story had never been written??
By the way!
Actually your post is the only and the biggest example of lazy writing here!
it would be interesting to know what an example of an ending with no-lazy writing would be for you.
this is the second time you quote me by talking about "lazy writing" and instead I described many different possible endings here... I'm sure as a developer you should know that an interactive story can have multiple endings
what I mean is that only one of the endings should remain open for a future sequel...
but maybe I understand that you wish this story had never been written??
By the way!
Actually your post is the only and the biggest example of lazy writing here!
I think they were making the point that show or movie endings that sacrifice a satisfying closure or resolution for explicit sequel bait are lazy and bad; and they're right about that.
I think they were making the point that show or movie endings that sacrifice a satisfying closure or resolution for explicit sequel bait are lazy and bad; and they're right about that.
Do you want slowing myself? How?
So you are one of those who thinks he knows everything and is always right? It would be interesting to know what your standards are and what stories you prefer! It's really easy to criticize others while remaining behind a shield of hypocrisy that doesn't make us understand what for you is a good game with a well written story!
I'm not one of your business and you don't have the ability to control me and believe me, my standards are unattainable for your slow brain!
Do you want slowing myself? How?
So you are one of those who thinks he knows everything and is always right? It would be interesting to know what your standards are and what stories you prefer! It's really easy to criticize others while remaining behind a shield of hypocrisy that doesn't make us understand what for you is a good game with a well written story!
I'm not one of your business and you don't have the ability to control me and believe me, my standards are unattainable for your slow brain!
I know enough to be cogent of what I don't know. But I can say this for sure; I sure as fuck can at least write better than you can (as clearly demonstrated by literally ever post either of us have made thus far). Not that it's particularly hard. All anyone has to do to clear the very low bar you have set is simply not post cringe constantly.
You have made it abundantly clear to everyone here that you have an incredibly undiscerning palette, and that your standards are rock bottom. That's fine, everyone is entitled to like what they like. But maybe stop pretending that your dollar menu bugger fetish is equivalent to a wagyu steak? Maybe also stop with the creepy Martin cosplay? You know, if you want to be less cringe.
I know enough to be cogent of what I don't know. But I can say this for sure; I sure as fuck can at least write better than you can (as clearly demonstrated by literally ever post either of us have made thus far). Not that it's particularly hard. All anyone has to do to clear the very low bar you have set is simply not post cringe constantly.
the only clear thing is that you are complaining because Mircom has decided to do a third rework to this game. I'm sorry for you but you have no power over this decision
you are repeating this again and again proving your impotence. I suggest you to be less cringe.
You have made it abundantly clear to everyone here that you have an incredibly undiscerning palette, and that your standards are rock bottom. That's fine, everyone is entitled to like what they like. But maybe stop pretending that your dollar menu bugger fetish is equivalent to a wagyu steak? Maybe also stop with the creepy Martin cosplay? You know, if you want to be less cringe.
this is not your business ....and obviously I'm not Martin
I just wanted to make it clear to everyone that the path I follow in the game is Martin's
On the contrary it's you who continues to be vague and I think your blah blah about me is acceptable only because you're frustrated about the third rework! But if you want to be less cringe I suggest to avoid to repeat the same thing over and over.
As you can see talking about you or me is just a blah blah because I can be wrong same as you if I try to get in your shoes...
I will never stop saying that Martin is the best path in the game ... because I play by this way and it shows the real reasons why Tony wants to share Anne with others!.
Overview:
You are married to Anne and you are looking to spice up your sex life. You enjoy showing off your wife and have fantasized about sharing her with others. Your journey starts with you taking baby steps to convince her along the way to reach your final goal of sharing her.
This is a great story!
The MC must try to convince Anne but Anne is not a toy in MC's hands she is your wife.. so during the evolution she will be free to react as she want depending on your choices
Ok, going to offer a suggestion which may help some of you sleep a bit better and longer.
I suggest the "I" button be engaged. It may help as I described above and it may also redirect your time and energies away from arguing with a traffic sign. You can continue to do it, of course, but you'll get nowhere. It's come to the point where we are just enabling the behavior.
Realy? Why you repeat again your useless statement?
in all your posts you talk, talk, talk... you only talk about your hate towards how the story was written... we all get it..
close a story is the simplest and laziest way!...
keep telling the story without making the audience lose interest is something that only great writers can do
How you think as developer to close without lazy writing after 15 chapter?
I have already posted at least 3/4 different possible endings including the one where Anne gets pregnant!
...but at the end is only the dev that decides when and how to close the game!
we can only write speculation but i will never complain about Mircom decision. This story deserves to be written in the best possible way due to remain a reference in the history over the times
I quoting myself now because the following post is the best replay for your "always the same and repetitive" complaints
I sleep very well, thank you!... and I'm thinking about the endings because currently it seems interesting and very fun to do it ... since the story has been reworked near to the end!
what is for all of you an happy ending for a ntr story??
...or rather, endings are usually defined in two broad categories:
Happy and Bad...
but perhaps there are also sub-categories like: "not so bad" and "not so happy" or "mixed" endings
I have many in mind but the first thing to define remains:
what could be an happy ending for Tony as MC!
Happy ending for Tony as MC.. Tony finally gets over this idiotic need to share Anne with every dude she meets. she has gotten tired of it and Tony is finally enough for her libido since they fuck like rabbits anywhere and everywhere. they also have many a 3some with many hot women that Anne brings home from the beach, the gym, wherever.
Bad ending is where Anne keeps whoring around and ends raped and murdered by Troy cause he is a pos that gets off on raping defenseless women. Tony finds out what he did and cuts his head off as revenge for Anne and then he continues to have every woman he meets since he can never feel love again after losing the love of his life.
as a bonus, Anne never told Tony about her fucking his dad, but when he finds out, he chops his dad's dick off and shoves it up his ass and then slits his throat and feeds him to the sharks.
Revenge is a dish best served cold..
Happy ending for Tony as MC.. Tony finally gets over this idiotic need to share Anne with every dude she meets. she has gotten tired of it and Tony is finally enough for her libido since they fuck like rabbits anywhere and everywhere.
you wrote an happy end for Tony? this maybe will be happy for Anne if she remain faithful also Tony has to do the same or the couple will break soon or later..
(the game is about find a way to share her as you can read in the OP Overview)
your "happy end" is a bad end for the Tony original achievement and is lazy and stupid. the MC Tony is the one who wanted to share Anne and he loves also just watch or expose her (he also says it in the TACOS dialogues) ... the happy or bad ending must be good for the couple not just for one of them!
And in your end Anne will be Tony slave forever.
the stats box contains points for both Tony and his wife so if only one of them is happy in the ending it will be an "half happiness."
and about Anne. Tony will never be able to know if your "wherever" includes the Martin brother club (Tony Uncle) or not
Martin is a main character and fr sure there will be always a choice were she will not fuck him... but Uncle Robert was the one who saved them that night they went out on adventures but it was going really badly for them if their uncle hadn't intervened... Tony was already passed out after the first punch.
I want try write endings that make sense with this very complex story
your ending does not take into consideration the complexity of the many events that occurred in a story that is full of different contents that cannot leave the protagonists indifferent as if nothing had happened
as you can see I'm using logic my and my happy end is for Tony & Anne because he is the one who want share her... happy ending applies to everyone including "your" Anne.
Bad ending is where Anne keeps whoring around and ends raped and murdered by Troy cause he is a pos that gets off on raping defenseless women. Tony finds out what he did and cuts his head off as revenge for Anne and then he continues to have every woman he meets since he can never feel love again after losing the love of his life.
in this case you wrote a bad ending just for Tony and not for Anne(she loves whoring herself)
This ending is also lazy and obvious BAD(?) ending because after 15 chapters with many scenes where she whoring herself everyday there is nothing special about this bad ending in fact TROY has no reason to kill Anne she loves to fuck him... no sense he kill her! Your ending is not BAD because is the same as all the great sex scenes during the game for Anne!
The main bad end must be for the COUPLE HERE WE GO with my bad ending for Tony & Anne ATTENTION HORROR AND SCI-FI TAG must added to do this :
as a bonus, Anne never told Tony about her fucking his dad, but when he finds out, he chops his dad's dick off and shoves it up his ass and then slits his throat and feeds him to the sharks.
Revenge is a dish best served cold.
I think this is the best ending I have read in your post
Tony could have had feelings of revenge towards his father also for his first girlfriend Emma and if he didn't do it then it doesn't make sense to do it now... after all, Martin's behavior was what made him marry Anne who seems much more available of Emma in fucking with strangers...
I think at least 4 main endings should be written...
1) Anne and Tony loyal each other
2) Unfaithful Anne and Faithful Tony
3) Faithful Anne and faithless Tony
4 Anne and Tony both unfaithful
This mean that if you want bad and happy end... the endings will be 8 or more for me all endings are stupid including the 4 endings I've already written here
I hope this will help Mircom3D to find inspiration on a way to close the story of this amazing couple
please don't hate me too much i deserve to be loved too (Martin)
