- Nov 18, 2017
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Anne is the (almost) perfect wife for an enthusiastic cuck, which is the role the MC (and by proxy the reader) are forced to adopt in this story. The problem is there's no trust or respect between her and the MC by the end of Chapter 15, which are foundational pillars for their type of relationship to work long term. Even the cucklord MC would have a problem with what she's doing with Martin, which is why Anne is lying about it and feels conflicted (but continues to fuck him anyways). I remember thinking she was making like $400k/year to put up with that airline gig with the "huge income" and "double pay" talk, then burst out laughing when I found out she was going through all that sexual harassment for "a little over $60k/year." She's there for the D and the $ is an excuse. I think most people, even many of those with a cucking fetish, would eventually come into conflict with Anne's lying and complete lack of personal control or accountability - it's these traits that disqualify her from being "wife material." All this isn't happening for Tony anymore, it's happening for Anne whether Tony wants it to or not (and she'll now lie any time she wants to do something she knows Tony won't like). Why would a pair that can't trust each other and doesn't respect each other consider themselves good partners? I see this as an objective opinion based on her behavior in the story, rather than coming from a misogynistic point of view.only misogynists can complain about Anne.
I think it's the blending of fetishes/themes in that point tracking system that confuses most readers, who I'm assuming (like me) thought they would be able to avoid the storylines shoved down our throats in chapter 15. Swapping, Sharing, Cheating, and Cucking are all distinct fetishes and assuming the same reader is going to enjoy all of them from the same character POV is an erotic writing mistake, in my opinion.