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Gosamr

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Hey Dev!

It looks like you've got a script error (L1738) here...

1736 menu:
1737 "Offer massage" if mc_brav >= 4 and ru_attrac >= 1:
1738 $ ru_attrac += 1
1739 jump chtr4q1con1
1740 "End pictorial":
1741 jump chtr4q1con2

Even if players have 4x mc brave and 1x Ruby attraction, line 1738 blocks the "Offer massage" option and players see only "End pictorial" option and go on to Chapter 6 skipping Chapter 5 completely.

If line 1738 is removed, then providing players have 4 mc brave +1 Ruby attraction, the "Offer massage" option does appear and providing it's selected players then correctly go on into Chapter 5.
 

Lorric17

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Oh interesting, I did that but I only got the option to end the photoshoot towards the end. Do I need to pick different choices before that?
I can see that I misread the code. The line is in the comment above and you need to offer your hand AND have four bravery. So make brave choices before then. Time for a mini walkthrough, so from the start of the game:
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Gosamr Not sure what you mean by ru_attrac blocking progress? ru_attrac is already 1, and line 1738 increases it to 2.
 
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Fjar2365

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Can't save the game. But you have a load option In main menu? Not bad start. For v.08 needs more content. Wish you good luck
 

LGM

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Well, this could certainly use a proofread. There are some kinda strange sentences around, names are sometimes in lowercase, and the word 'scene' is used a few times where 'show' would make sense. Scene is better than show, sure, but not in dialogues.

Also, in Chapter 7, the game just assumes the MC had sex with Ruby, even if he didn't. It shows a flashback image to that sex scene, and I would argue it makes little sense for MC to think of her for his onlyfans idea if all they did was take some harmless photos.

And do we really have to have the "help, fellow family member, I got stuck in the dryer" trope? Maybe it's just me, but I think that's too stupid even for a porn game.
 
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Before I Forget

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the game is interesting, i like it. the story isn't terrible but a little messy.
some random thoughts:
change the summary its a terrible description about what the story is about, not even a mention about the ring. Maybe that will change but right now that description isn't even in the game and I doubt the main focus of the story will the your father broken dick; it probably will come back and be relevant in the story but probably as an antagonistic role.
i checked this game out because i was curious how a game that was a couple months old was at chapter 7, turns out the chapters feel more like scenes. Its up to the dev how they see what is a chapter but at this rate best case is the game is short with a reasonable amount of chapter or there will be a bunch of chapters before the story properly gets going.
Yeah, I guess he's going by the standards in comics. But it all sums up to 2 to 3 chapters for me, and that's being generous. Looks good in the art department but the story is mid so far.
 

Thedude715

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Uh I am really confused by this game right now is it skipping scenes or something? It went from chapter 4 straight to 6. The game later references that you had sex with ruby which for sure did not happen the only choice I was given was to end the photoshoot.
There was also a scene when the mc got a call from him mom? And went home to visit but earlier they said she had left the country? I am so confused.
 

Niloy Kawser

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Overview:
The MC ran away from home after the usual fight with his Dad.
A year ago, his father confessed to his Mom that he had been cheating behind her back for some time.
One would wonder why the confession when he could have kept quiet.
Well, on one of his cheating escapades, he met a girl at a bar and took her to a hotel,
but the girl spiked his drink with sleeping pills when he went to the loo.
Now instead of him falling asleep from the pills,
his Johnson went to sleep indefinitely.
He could not get erect, and after going to several doctors,
they could not figure out a way to cure him.
He said he still gets aroused, but his Johnson would not wake up.
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Thread Updated: 2022-11-11
Release Date: 2022-11-11
Developer: SweetPlumz -
Censored: No
Version: Ch.7
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
Genre:
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How do i access the menu in the android version of the game
 

Behappy69

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Nov 3, 2020
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Just wondering as I can't message the dev will there be music at some point, and also will there be se sound effects? I hope the dev can get back to me about this if they read these messages. Or anyone that has contact with them.
 

Eagle1900

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wow what an amazing game; completely hooked up thanks for this game and waiting for next updates (y)
 
3.70 star(s) 7 Votes