Ren'Py The Awakening [v0.4.5b] [SLim Games]

[SLim_Games]

get an error in the bathroom scene at school, and am returned to the main menu

hmm, can you post me the error?

I think you are being a bit too harsh on yourself. I enjoyed the new version, even the voice acting, I usually just turn it off

What I felt is that the guy at school telling you to go to the bathroom is a bit over the top, that's way too quick in my opinion.

As for feedback to make it a better game, I think it might help if you would specify what in your opinion does not really work. That should give you input regarding those points.

What I planned was to make those new things and let the community decide, which lead in my opinion to a not soo good chapter.. for example I put in the breakfast scene this idle animation for the mom character... and this never reappears.. I think I'll drop that. It just takes too much time to make them. I will definetly add more voice lines for the other characters .. and if someone dont like them they can turn it off. but i think many people would like them. I will make a poll in the next days to see what people want

 

[Infinithex]

Slim men i have been following you since the chapter 1 releases but i have to tell you, you always give a good work and i really love the game keep doing the good work.

 

[SLim_Games]

Slim men i have been following you since the chapter 1 releases but i have to tell you, you always give a good work and i really love the game keep doing the good work.

thanks but I wanted to make this chapter so good that 1&2 looked bad compared

 

[UncleVT]

It works. thanks

Thank you. Added mirrors for PC version.

 

[Doublefrost]

Huh. I really like that toon render option in the screenshots. I may need to contribute and pick this one up, because that looks way better than the standard 3dcg renders you get with these. The normal ones are usually a good dose of uncanny valley and not quite right looking skin, which is nearly impossible to address by going for even more realism in the render.

 

[hyco2]

I like the game, and find it highly amusing, how a developer of a decent work does so much excusing, while others post crap without any shame.

That being said, I also felt the update was on the short side. The switch of perspective was just ok. I don't play female mcs normally, because I find it immersion-breaking.
When the technical problems are solved, maybe the school could get a bit of polish characterwise? Now I find it a bit ... rushed, maybe?

Und natürlich fand ich die Deutschstunde lustig! (The german lesson made me smile...)

 

[Wuggie]

Short but very nice update! These animations are the best I’ve seen in any adult VN! Keep it up Slim!

 

[Hadley]

I'm really no fan of that weird Fairy and Corruption thing. Feels really out of place.

The whole chapter feels like you are in a new Game every few minutes since so many features get introduced/tested. First you play as a different Character and then Voice-Acting starts out of nowhere. Its actually better than expected, but feels weird to start with it like in the middle of Chapter 3.

But that German question was satisfiying. As a native German my Character probably speaks better German than that teacher.

 

[bobbo69]

It was, how should I put it?

short and sweet thanks for the update, nice job

 

[Gromo123]

Than this is Chapter 3 There can i find the first 2 Chapters`?

 

[mickster101]

Than this is Chapter 3 There can i find the first 2 Chapters`?

Page 1.

 

[Carlo S]

SLim_Games: Thanks Brother, and Good Luck

 

[locomotor79]

i only heard from the blondy that lives whit the mainchar
i did saw the mouth from eldersis move however no sound

and shame still no sex. eventhough the game is this far alrdy

 

[satanete]

Does downloading Ch3 give access to all three chapters? I'm asking because I don't see Ch1 download (out of mobile ones)

Thanks in advance.

 

[UncleVT]

Does downloading Ch3 give access to all three chapters? I'm asking because I don't see Ch1 download (out of mobile ones)

Thanks in advance.

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MAC Ch.3:

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Android Ch.3

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[Naypwn]

Yeah, not a fan of the change of perspective. It's creepy.

 

[ghostch15]

i think maybe the mega is corrupted when i unzip (with 7zip) i get a "unexpected end of data" and "bad archive.rpa" message
just fyi ..* just dl'd from work the file was fine there so

 

[phreakinowski]

Please Keep in mind that this is a testversion of chapter 3. SInce the phone is not working correctly I havent put it in yet. There are other things missing aswell that I'm working on right now.

In my opinion this chapter is a mess. I tried many new things and it doesn't really work.. I hope you could give me some input what I can do to make it a better game.

-> also uploading mac and android version now

Well I am enjoying what you have going on here, and while the voice acting was a bit of a shock at first, I do like it and think she did a very good job with her lines... look forward to hearing her expressing herself during more "advanced" scenes... if ya know what I mean, and I know you do.
I love how unsatisfied you are with your own work, it shows how much you care about delivering something great... and when your "unsatisfactory" work is already 50 times better then most of the genre, you are certainly on the right path!

 

[phreakinowski]

i think maybe the mega is corrupted when i unzip (with 7zip) i get a "unexpected end of data" and "bad archive.rpa" message
just fyi ..* just dl'd from work the file was fine there so

I encountered the same error but the workupload link was fine.

 

[locomotor79]

chapter 3 is actualy ep1 & ep2 & the begin of ep3