Ren'Py The Awakening [v0.4.5b] [SLim Games]

[ut1stgear]

Really have mixed emotions on this one. You have definitely showcased your skills. I don't think you are an English native speaker but it's really good and if you use a translator it is a very good one. The graphics are great but the animations are only average so they need some work. The mini games are tolerable but I really am not a fan of them. The one issue I have with the prologue is how fast you moved the MC relationship with his sister forward. Not sure what the purpose of that is and I feel it limits what you can do with her.

I did vote for 2 in your straw poll. Sarah and Linda. Linda is leading but Sarah is just behind Margaret so she's 3rd.

Will keep watching this to see where you go with it. Looks good so far and it's too bad there are so many with a similar theme, the school theme but I do like the fantasy angle.

 

[Luka85]

need walkthrough?

 

[NightShadeX]

writing is kinda weird and all over the place. "landlady" catches me peeping on her in the shower and then the game skips few days until date with "roommate"
characters are quite poorly written tbh. i just met them and they give me hj's and bj's. there is magic involved but it feels like a cheap trick so you can get some sex content. long live the princess handled the magic fey quite good.
there is no build up and character development. sis looks like to be a cool character (in future when she is (hopefully) developed) but at the moment she is just random girl giving me blowjobs, because she loves me. and looks like MC and her had relationship even before the game starts but that is not explained. i guess it will be in the future with the amnesia and shit but right now you have no idea what the hell is going on. stuff just happen, without any explanation and MC just goes with it without caring to find out anything.
animations are cool but i imagine thats why development is slow. i dont think the payoff is worth it but im not gonna complain. the voice acting sucks tho. it just ruins the game. im fine with some moans and gasps but for full voice acting you need GOOD VOICE ACTORS. and you cant hire such when even yourself are not working full time on the game. you can turn the voices of so thats good but its kinda wasted recources. which can be spend on hiring a writer, which i think this game need.
tl;dr: the writing is ruining it.

It is a fap game. Are you expecting AAA title writing like MASS EFFECT: Andromeda?

 

[Unclepop]

there is a plot hole when MC and his blonde sis are waiting for a bus, they are talking about their relationship but the day before I chose the second option in the park,... so MC can not remember anything from their common past, cause they never talked about it in the first place.

 

[N1K17Y]

It is a fap game. Are you expecting AAA title writing like MASS EFFECT: Andromeda?

all the games in my signatures have good writing. and no its not a fap game. if you want to masturbate while watching 2 (or more) people have sex just open pornhub. there is more to these games/VN's

 

[ut1stgear]

all the games in my signatures have good writing. and no its not a fap game. if you want to masturbate while watching 2 (or more) people have sex just open pornhub. there is more to these games/VN's

That's true of 95% of these games but there a few that are nothing more than porn. I personally like the ones with a story and some fap material. I stay from "Life Selector" and HTML games because most of them are either straight porn or have very little originality.

Edit: I do agree with @crusty though. If you don't like Life Selector" then don't complain, just don't play them.

 

[christoprd]

shame that story is writen so poorly, like mom catches MC peeping on her in the shower and then the game skips few days like nothing happened, it just feels lazy

 

[Centurion]

need walkthrough?

No

 

[Animalstu]

Im loving this so far! The animation scenes are brilliant! Cant wait for next release.

 

[Jack_Sparrow_Pirate]

I love the game so far & I don't think Mom needs any changes she looks best.

 

[KaneB.C.]

Great game, its added to my favorites. Thx!

 

[mmmonsterkill]

Not a fan of the voices tbh

 

[Draakaap23]

Not a fan of the voices tbh

Me neither. I turn em off

 

[mmmonsterkill]

Me neither. I turn em off

yeah i did too, think its the same girl that voiced snow daze, didn't really fit there either...then again there probably arent that many people willing to do voice acting for a incest porngame :coldsweat:

 

[Draakaap23]

yeah i did too, think its the same girl that voiced snow daze, didn't really fit there either...then again there probably arent that many people willing to do voice acting for a incest porngame :coldsweat:

And even if there where, doubt there are good enough porn-actress that can overcome the inner turmoil of having to act out a believable: 'Fuck me daddy'

 

[Johnny-Doe]

Two questions :
1)Can you name the MC?
2)Does the game have an incest patch?

 

[mmmonsterkill]

Two questions :
1)Can you name the MC?
2)Does the game have an incest patch?

you can name both the protag and the girls, you also get to decide your relationships with the girls ingame, its a workaround.

 

[QTmodz]

Guys when was this last updated?

 

[ut1stgear]

Guys when was this last updated?

Last update was Aug 31 according to OP.

 

[wadere]

soo... i'm in the start and i need to chose my relationship with the first the girl i named sophia since there no default name. i know patreon is being a bitch about incest and all so in this game you need to put it yourself. what do i put? was she suppose to be? mother? sister? daughter? other?