VN Others Onhold The Big Score [v1.6.5] [Divanation]

[Oblivion9873]

Also it's a bit weird to not have any sort of warning about some of the extreme stuff or the ability to opt out of it. Like I expected the humiliation, that's very clearly included in the tags but why is there adult-baby play (like diapers and everything) with no warning or anything? Don't think I've seen a game both not warn and not give the opportunity to opt out of this kind of stuff.

 

[Brown195]

Wow, I picked Ivy at the party and i can honestly say i hate her lol.

 

[Brown195]

Dont know if this has been asked, but is there a patreon?

 

[ddaisy]

Damn, I'm right at the party choice. The build up was great. I'll probably pick Ivy because of the dirt she has on my character. Nikki would be preferred, but she can't protect my guy from Ivy and Lauren.

 

[Div [Divanation]]

Also it's a bit weird to not have any sort of warning about some of the extreme stuff or the ability to opt out of it. Like I expected the humiliation, that's very clearly included in the tags but why is there adult-baby play (like diapers and everything) with no warning or anything? Don't think I've seen a game both not warn and not give the opportunity to opt out of this kind of stuff.

Hey I appreciate the critisim even though your miss leaded in some things. Yes the sound effects I use are from rpgmaker this is still a free game so there only so much I can do. I set up a patreon to give this game a budget and if some goals are reached I can add custom voices and such.

As for the abdl stuff it was very much hinted through out the dialogue and build up for nearly 3 chapters so you should know what your getting yourself into when following that character, but you said you skip the dialogue calling it "fluff" even though it's there for a reason.

Yes people want to see the h scenes but I am building a story too and this is a VN game where it is dialogue heavy.

 

[ktatau]

I loved the game, laura is the best

 

[skeropo]

Might as well add text based since there's almost nothing to look at

 

[Oblivion9873]

Hey I appreciate the critisim even though your miss leaded in some things. Yes the sound effects I use are from rpgmaker this is still a free game so there only so much I can do. I set up a patreon to give this game a budget and if some goals are reached I can add custom voices and such.

As for the abdl stuff it was very much hinted through out the dialogue and build up for nearly 3 chapters so you should know what your getting yourself into when following that character, but you said you skip the dialogue calling it "fluff" even though it's there for a reason.

Yes people want to see the h scenes but I am building a story too and this is a VN game where it is dialogue heavy.

Again, none of the ABDL stuff is in the tags or in some sort of prior content warning.
I understand that not everyone can make their own SFX stuff but it's still a valid criticism to point out its usage.
I get it if you want to right a story but to me, in this type of game, where I didn't even particularly enjoy the dialogue for the first 15-20 mins or so before I started skipping through, having so much of it is in fact a negative.

 

[Oblivion9873]

Hey I appreciate the critisim even though your miss leaded in some things. Yes the sound effects I use are from rpgmaker this is still a free game so there only so much I can do. I set up a patreon to give this game a budget and if some goals are reached I can add custom voices and such.

As for the abdl stuff it was very much hinted through out the dialogue and build up for nearly 3 chapters so you should know what your getting yourself into when following that character, but you said you skip the dialogue calling it "fluff" even though it's there for a reason.

Yes people want to see the h scenes but I am building a story too and this is a VN game where it is dialogue heavy.

Honestly you're the dev, you can ignore pretty much everything else I said, but please just make sure your settings are actually functional and properly tag the content

 

[Div [Divanation]]

Honestly you're the dev, you can ignore pretty much everything else I said, but please just make sure your settings are actually functional and properly tag the content

Again thanks for all the critics I take them all to heart good and bad, but for the tags I can do only so much since that's the admin's thing not mine. and yeah I plan on doing a setting overhaul once I get enough content out there.

 

[Deleted member 1571565]

Again, none of the ABDL stuff is in the tags or in some sort of prior content warning.
I understand that not everyone can make their own SFX stuff but it's still a valid criticism to point out its usage.
I get it if you want to right a story but to me, in this type of game, where I didn't even particularly enjoy the dialogue for the first 15-20 mins or so before I started skipping through, having so much of it is in fact a negative.

Not for nothing, but there was a lot of warning and foreshadowing. There is quite a bit about other things that are gonna happen that you might not like as well. how are you complaining about having to read a game that is based on reading (visual NOVEL)? Also reading the genre, granted its not the tags DOES warn you. If you're not reading and you are just skipping, its probably safe to say its not the type of game for you. I'm not going to say it shouldn't be tagged properly, but honestly, its really hard to be sympathetic towards someone that isn't actually reading or playing the game. If you just want scenes and stuff, its way easier to just go look up some porn.

 

[Oblivion9873]

Not for nothing, but there was a lot of warning and foreshadowing. There is quite a bit about other things that are gonna happen that you might not like as well. how are you complaining about having to read a game that is based on reading (visual NOVEL)? Also reading the genre, granted its not the tags DOES warn you. If you're not reading and you are just skipping, its probably safe to say its not the type of game for you. I'm not going to say it shouldn't be tagged properly, but honestly, its really hard to be sympathetic towards someone that isn't actually reading or playing the game. If you just want scenes and stuff, its way easier to just go look up some porn.

1. Things can be paced differently, some VNs are slow, some are fast, as I clearly stated in the post you are quoting, I gave it about 15-20 mins before I started skipping through, when I realised it was a slower one and that I didn't particularly care for the writing (just personal preference).
2. things being hinted at as the story progresses isn't a valid substitute for content warnings. We don't always have to be baited into reading 177013 over and over again.
3. I'm not asking for your sympathy, I'm providing feedback, it's up to the dev to decide what's useful and what's useless. Is that not the point of threads like these? If we're not gonna discuss the game why even have a forum like this in the first place?
4. VN can be an ambiguous genre/descriptor at times. The Evenicle thread classifies it as a VN when it's arguably way more of a JRPG than anything, even if it does have VN elements, for example. Is huniepop a VN? I've heard it referred to as such. Where do you draw the line? because I liked both of those games so I'm not gonna write something off just because it has the VN tag.

what a banal response

 

[Malcowitz]

So what did the themes of the game end up being? Femdom, Sissy and humiliation way too often end up with it just being NTR but there's also something about diapers?

What is the content in this?

 

[ddaisy]

Mostly femdommes forcing you into humiliating situations and mocking you endlessly about it. Popular sissy games tend to have femdom elements that help to push the story forward, but this one is a femdom game with sissy content being just one of the ways the game's cruel women will use to humiliate the poor MC. Much later into the game you get to choose which woman (and her associated fetish) will gain the most control over your character's miserable life.

 

[Malfred]

i love your game =)

is there gonna be pegging? asking for a friend =P

 

[Div [Divanation]]

i love your game =)

is there gonna be pegging? asking for a friend =P

Hey! yup there sure will be pegging, 3 out of the 4 girls will definitely have pegging content in their routes, I'm glad you enjoyed it I hope you look forward to its updates!

 

[nicknicola]

Same, I enjoyed it a lot. I played from start to finish in two days xD

I see some people complaining for "too much dialogue to get to sex scenes", but honestly I love precisely that, the build up, the shemes of the girls, etc. The art at times in the sex scenes is a bit sloppy and I would prefer a more intimate atmosphere (with shadows, dim lights...) more than a white/pink void for background for those scenes, but I guess it gets the job done.

Good job on the characters honestly, they are well developed and distinct.
Initially I didn't care about Ivy but it growed on me. In her own way I think she cares for the protagonist? Same for Nikki.
I love the humiliation the girls dish out on poor Jay, but I loved the brief moments in what they showed a more sweet side too. Example when Nikki briefly carrying Jay in her arms or looking somewhat confused when saying she only bullied Jay (because she likes him?) or Ivy saying guys get boring but with Jay was always fun to be around.

Between her shemes humiliating the MC, I hope eventually they show also they care for him too and show at times their sweet side.

 

[Div [Divanation]]

Same, I enjoyed it a lot. I played from start to finish in two days xD

I see some people complaining for "too much dialogue to get to sex scenes", but honestly I love precisely that, the build up, the shemes of the girls, etc. The art at times in the sex scenes is a bit sloppy and I would prefer a more intimate atmosphere (with shadows, dim lights...) more than a white/pink void for background for those scenes, but I guess it gets the job done.

Good job on the characters honestly, they are well developed and distinct.
Initially I didn't care about Ivy but it growed on me. In her own way I think she cares for the protagonist? Same for Nikki.
I love the humiliation the girls dish out on poor Jay, but I loved the brief moments in what they showed a more sweet side too. Example when Nikki briefly carrying Jay in her arms or looking somewhat confused when saying she only bullied Jay (because she likes him?) or Ivy saying guys get boring but with Jay was always fun to be around.

Between her shemes humiliating the MC, I hope eventually they show also they care for him too and show at times their sweet side.

Thanks for all the feedback and input! glad you enjoyed it so far. It's interesting to hear Ivy having a nice side haha, but yeah I did wanna throw in some subtle stuff here and there. I hope you look forward to the game's future!

 

[ShirouryuuAkihito]

keep the option of hiding the text during scenes and CG.....20% is covered by the text!
Femdom is nice but hate sissification , plz dont go that way!

 

[Div [Divanation]]

keep the option of hiding the text during scenes and CG.....20% is covered by the text!
Femdom is nice but hate sissification , plz dont go that way!

You can hide the text with the space key, and like I mentioned before each girl caters to a specific fetish if you don't like that one you can always go with another girl.