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I listed asking for help as a PRO, a good thing. I’m sure there will be some that will gladly help with translation. They need to know what your native language is. There are several games out there where supposed English speakers constantly use i, i am & i’m, instead of I, I am & I’m, for example. Your capitalization is good.
Sound: Several developers hit us with LOUD music or sounds before it can be adjusted. Happily, you did not do this (another good thing) & I hoped that you would adjust the volume in case you changed some timing in the future and blasted someone on a 1st install of your game.
Suplexed. Sorry, I did a thesaurus check rather than a dictionary check. Got it now. I'm not a wrestling fan.
Numbering: Based on your explanation. Most would have numbered it something like;.1.3.1. or .1.3a. Your explanation makes it clear you were not trying to decieve.
Split sentences, EXAMPLE:
Screen 1: “By default, humans wish to attain things they can’t have”
Screen 2: “By default, humans wish to attain things they can’t have a lot harder than things they have in very trivial ways”.
SO; screen 2 repeats screen 1 and adds some text. This happens many, many times. There is at least one instance of this being split across THREE screens, but the special text formatting of “something observing me” makes some sense for the additional screen, but keeping it all on one screen would be better, keeping the special formatting in place.
ROCKS: I thought you might be trying to convey something that did not translate well. Since you intended it to be a “dumb” thought, then OK. I know when I was learning Spanish, some jokes or thoughts did not come across correctly when literally translated. When I learned more Spanish and/or was around Spanish speakers who would explain things better in English, they made sense.
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Thank you so much for the follow-up! I can't afford a translator right now (part of why I'm doing this as a hobby in my free time) and I don't want to make friends help me without paying them, but I'll take your advice into consideration!
As for the split sentences you make a good point, I really liked this format when reading text in other games as a way to easily digest some really big blocks of text that can't otherwise be split into 2 sentences, but if it made you get tired of reading (have the opposite reaction to mine) it's something important to take into consideration
I'm debating between making the next- a fast small update or a slow but bigger one, but whenever I release it on patreon, if possible, I'd like to get your permission to ask people in a itch.io devlog about their opinion on the "split sentences".
And if you ever have some spare time, get to the end of this update, and feel like it, I'd love to get an opinion of the quality of the end renders as it is the only thing that I'm wondering about right now.
Again thanks so much for the opinion! I feel like it was a good idea to publish the update on f95 for reviews after all~!
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Thank you- The next update will be a small patch with fixes and only two scenes. After that, I plan to work on a larger update.
Please be sure to let me know if there's anything else you liked or disliked about the current version!~
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Is it possible to avoid the sex scenes with the LIs who aren't going to have a romance with the MC?
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Don't know yet if there will be any characters with no romance whatsoever. What I said there is that probably not every character will have a slow burn buildup-
If in the future I change my mind and I write any like that (say a character that wants to have sex with you as soon as you meet them in game for example) there will be a menu option to refuse
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Extended info about this update and the next one at the devlogs below~
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dude looks like my gay coworkerhana-mo
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Wait...am I playing the right game?
Fuck it...looks girly enough.
You Know what they say, If there's a hole there's GOAL.
...seriously though is this gonna happen at some point? Cuz if I know my porno tropes well enough ...basically begging for it.
if theres any content with this guy it NEEDS to be skippable.
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Hey! The first few points are just to know which way the script is going, if you have enough Evan points in the next few sentences he says one thing and if you don't have them then he says another, don't worry about Evan for now.
Blaire's one is because she's testing your patience for a future event, pay it no heed if you only want to improve your relationship with her!
Have a nice day~!
NGL need an option to punch Evan in the face...
annoying as hell.
don't want to be friends with that guy
talk shit to him, you lose a point with Blair..
like what? so the mc gotta just stay passive while a massive D bag talk shit?
Don't like that.
annoying as hell.
don't want to be friends with that guy
talk shit to him, you lose a point with Blair..
like what? so the mc gotta just stay passive while a massive D bag talk shit?
Don't like that.
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See my previous answer for more context on points!
As for the option to punch him in the face, you can pretty much cuck him in this version lol~
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I added him as some kind of punching bag, can't spoil too much but you'll see in the future~