VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Buran Inside the Walls [v0.15.1] [hana-mo]

[circuitarity]

I'm a simple man, I see incest.. wait wincest? WINCEST?!

That's what you get when you run the game on a sister OS to Windows instead

 

[Chimba]

Hey~

First time as a dev here, I added my favorite file-hosting links. Let me know if anything is wrong, or you like any other better than those!

Sorry if I repeat myself too much, but any feedback regarding the quality of the last scenes (as they represent the quality I'll be working at the start of the next update), default audio levels (If they are too high or too low) and how I express myself in this language would be greatly appreciated!

Extended info at the devlogs!~

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Hi, since you have ownership of the thread, it would be good if you put the planned tags in the OP where it says "Genre Spoiler", with the last images added this seems to be sandbox/adventure/combat(?)maybe fantasy, monster gilr?

Good luck.

 

[AccountNo23_III]

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[Fazed]

hana-mo


Wait...am I playing the right game?
Fuck it...looks girly enough.
You Know what they say, If there's a hole there's GOAL.


...seriously though is this gonna happen at some point? Cuz if I know my porno tropes well enough ...basically begging for it.

 

[punisher2099]

Was there an incest tag here before?

 

[Soulpuppet]

Was there an incest tag here before?

Yes, yes there was. Wonder what happened.

 

[hana-mo]

Was there an incest tag here before?

The original poster messed up a bit with the incest tag, Lily says that she is roleplaying with you when the bed event happens, you 2 aren't family.
I can make the tag happen in the future quite easily and in a much better fashion; but for now, I don't want anyone to try the game out because of a false flag, be dissapointed, and think I lied to them~

Thanks for the question~!!

 

[Shipfan66]

Downloading it now; won't get to play tonight cause of Mega transfer limits (already had a much bigger file downloading), but I'll let you know how it looks and sounds when I get to play it. Just from the previews I see a nice variety of girls' body types, which is a plus from my point of view. As for the Evan guy that some posters have mentioned, I'm really hoping he's one we can avoid having relations with. Good that he's there for guys who swing both ways, but for those of us who don't, please give us a chance to turn him down (nicely if possible, not so nicely if he's too stubborn lol). Best of luck, hana-mo, looking forward to seeing how this one develops!

 

[JB08]

Downloading it now; won't get to play tonight cause of Mega transfer limits (already had a much bigger file downloading), but I'll let you know how it looks and sounds when I get to play it. Just from the previews I see a nice variety of girls' body types, which is a plus from my point of view. As for the Evan guy that some posters have mentioned, I'm really hoping he's one we can avoid having relations with. Good that he's there for guys who swing both ways, but for those of us who don't, please give us a chance to turn him down (nicely if possible, not so nicely if he's too stubborn lol). Best of luck, hana-mo, looking forward to seeing how this one develops!

Use a VPN. Once you hit download limit, even if the download is stuck mid way, switch to a different ip/country then refresh the mega page, it saves download progress and hit resume.

 

[hana-mo]

Downloading it now; won't get to play tonight cause of Mega transfer limits (already had a much bigger file downloading), but I'll let you know how it looks and sounds when I get to play it. Just from the previews I see a nice variety of girls' body types, which is a plus from my point of view. As for the Evan guy that some posters have mentioned, I'm really hoping he's one we can avoid having relations with. Good that he's there for guys who swing both ways, but for those of us who don't, please give us a chance to turn him down (nicely if possible, not so nicely if he's too stubborn lol). Best of luck, hana-mo, looking forward to seeing how this one develops!

- If there's a file-hosting option you'd like to see let me know!
- Any non-vanilla kink options/scenes will be behind impossible to miss decisions so don't worry about that~

Thanks so much for the nice comment! Have a good day~!

 

[Kalsan]

hana-mo are you going to add any type of NTRish content to the game? I mean stuff like sharing/swinging/other males having sex with the girls?

 

[hana-mo]

hana-mo are you going to add any type of NTRish content to the game? I mean stuff like sharing/swinging/other males having sex with the girls?

Unless an overwhelming amount of people ask for it I won't, one of the reasons being that the tag would make a lot of people stay away instead of trying the game out

Thanks for the question~

 

[Fazed]

Unless an overwhelming amount of people ask for it I won't, one of the reasons being that the tag would make a lot of people stay away instead of trying the game out

Thanks for the question~

Great. Never a good idea to put something in the game that you yourself are not interested in.
I do have a question though. There will be group sex in the future right? I mean it is a harem game so I would think that will come at some point but assuming that Evan will be on the table(unless my eyes are tricking me when I look at the banner pic, nothing wrong with it either way) how will that be handled?
Personally I wouldn't care at at that point since I am generally receptive to harem members interacting(if you haven't rejected one of them obviously) but I know others wont be. Thus the question. Options for all of that would be great.

 

[Kalsan]

Unless an overwhelming amount of people ask for it I won't, one of the reasons being that the tag would make a lot of people stay away instead of trying the game out

Thanks for the question~

I don't think that will happen because most harem fan can't stand that type of shit. Still that wasn't a definitive yes or no answer and I would prefer a more definitive answer before jumping into it but I will welcome what I can get.

 

[Sababukin]

WalkthroughMod
Change-Log:
2023.03.22: Updated to version 0.13.2

LINK

 

[AccountNo23_III]

Unless an overwhelming amount of people ask for it I won't, one of the reasons being that the tag would make a lot of people stay away instead of trying the game out

Thanks for the question~

It would only keep away the most ridiculous specimens of toxic masculinity on the planet. Wouldn't that be a good thing?

Also pixeldrain is superior file hosting.

 

[hana-mo]

Great. Never a good idea to put something in the game that you yourself are not interested in.
I do have a question though. There will be group sex in the future right? I mean it is a harem game so I would think that will come at some point but assuming that Evan will be on the table(unless my eyes are tricking me when I look at the banner pic, nothing wrong with it either way) how will that be handled?
Personally I wouldn't care at at that point since I am generally receptive to harem members interacting(if you haven't rejected one of them obviously) but I know others wont be. Thus the question. Options for all of that would be great.

-Evan isn't on the banner (I think you are referring to Charlotte, the white haired girl?) but he's involved in a major event in the script which I can't spoil, I haven't written any males that will be present on the harem and don't think I will。
-Yes there will be group sex, again don't plan to include any males into it.

Have a good day~!

 

[Fazed]

-Evan isn't on the banner (I think you are referring to Charlotte, the white haired girl?) but he's involved in a major event in the script which I can't spoil, I haven't written any males that will be present on the harem and don't think I will。
-Yes there will be group sex, again don't plan to include any males into it.

Have a good day~!

Great. Glad that is cleared up. Mixed signals cuz of game dialogue heh.

 

[DH4444]

I do not like to give a “star” rating this early in a game’s development.

PROS:

The characters are not copies of other those in other games.
Your Patreon and developer notes explain you are learning English & requesting help. I do not understand what you are trying to convey with the ROCK story at the beginning of the game. Please explain your ideas to whoever you get to translate.
What is the language you need translated?

CONS:

???? The question marks as apparent placeholders for words make no sense. It just makes the game harder to understand. Guessing at the word is better than question marks.
What is “suplexed” supposed to mean?
Sentences or thoughts split across multiple screens. Annoying. By the time the MC gets to the movie theater, I’m starting to get a headache and have pretty much given up trying to make sense of what is being said. I guessing a lot of the comments are geared towards humor.
Sound volume is preset to MAXIMUM. It is good that the sound does not start before it can be adjusted.
Your version number indicates you are several significant stages into the game, which you clearly are not. Are you trying to misrepresent the game as being much more developed than it is?

 

[hana-mo]

The characters are not copies of other those in other games.

-I have some experience as a character designer and these tools are incredible-

Your Patreon and developer notes explain you are learning English & requesting help. I do not understand what you are trying to convey with the ROCK story at the beginning of the game. Please explain your ideas to whoever you get to translate.
What is the language you need translated?

- I can speak english but I'm not native. Expressing myself through the script its easy, but the selection of words at my disposal isn't as big as someone who has spoken/studied the language for a long time. That should make everything more tedious to read but remain understandable, my objective is to be able to have the same pacing and make everything as fluid as in my own language. Don't want to give any personal info bc my work wouldn't let me do this as a hobby- Hope you understand-

-The rock story at the start is very simple and there should be no problems with it imo. The player is having a dumb thought mid conversation about giving themselves a nick on their own but making it natural- then the prompt where you choose your name is shown. I don't really see a problem there

???? The question marks as apparent placeholders for words make no sense. It just makes the game harder to understand. Guessing at the word is better than question marks.

- The question mark thing is something I'll look into, I think my scope of the script with a flowchart got too far too quickly which meant that I had to get some questions in the head of whoevers playing very early, I'll substitute them next patch, was doubting myself with this one, thanks!~

What is “suplexed” supposed to mean?

-Suplexed is a real word iirc, don't understand the problem here either

Your version number indicates you are several significant stages into the game, which you clearly are not. Are you trying to misrepresent the game as being much more developed than it is?

-Don't know the problem with the version either?: 0.1 First version (the last one) 0.13 means that this "episode" is a third of the way done, 0.13.1 <-- The 1 at the end is a patch I included after releasing the 0.13 on patreon.

-The 2 things which I am most interested in your comment and I cannot comprehend/understand:

Sound volume is preset to MAXIMUM. It is good that the sound does not start before it can be adjusted.

? The sound does not start at the very beginning so that you can adjust it and all mp3 are edited with audacity so that they don't start at their full volume, instead they go from 0 to their normal volume then loop with a fadeout

Sentences or thoughts split across multiple screens. Annoying. By the time the MC gets to the movie theater, I’m starting to get a headache and have pretty much given up trying to make sense of what is being said. I guessing a lot of the comments are geared towards humor.

?

Thank you for your honest opinion!

If someone knows what they mean and have experienced the same, please comment! I'm interested and would like to address it!!~