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I'm not that far into the rewrite. I see some changes, but overall, the mother is still a cunt and the MC is still a little bitch. Is it better? Getting a 1% pay raise is still better than not getting anything at all.I felt the same way but then I read some of the comments and all who replayed the rewrite say it's better now so...
Give it a try before writing it off?
Honestly, I don't even care what terrible thing happened to the mother. There is a scene where the MC is curious, and has a chance to find out, but then decides to not. It seems like its going to be dragged out and the MC is just going to be that alcoholic trolls punching bag in the meantime. Honestly, with the way he acts, just have Grace actually peg him instead of doing it metaphorically.
I tried to give this another chance, but just... ugh.