The writing is honestly way better than what I expected, the setting is great too. The name of the game itself puts it in a odd place in my mind, though. To me, it makes the game seem like it's going in a different direction than what it actually is. "Houndgate" gives that vibe that'll it have a huge focus on furry content and be another attempt at a CoC1 style TF romp, but the actual game is more-or-less seeming to be it's own respectable take on a high fantasy setting.
I can tell the prologue was your baby when it came to the writing, you did a bang up job with it. Though I agree with what the other guy said that a "verbal only" route to the dom path is sorely missing. I get you wanted the PC to be "barred" from the bar at the end of it, but IMO there's no need to do that, because the PC already has the "call to adventure" that is the flyer.
I know there's that classic trap where you can end up re-writing things till the cows come home if you let yourself, and the game is already 2, going on 3 years old, but I think a verbal dom path would be a nice addition to it.
The only general negative I have to say is I really didn't expect the game to be so lacking in content after the prologue. It was so baffling to see the scene guide after seeing all the locked character slots in the jounral, that I instinctly thought "well, obviously the scene guide is out of date!", but uh, nope, it was not.
After my playthrough, I only have one stand-out writing suggestion: Give a warning/hint to the player before they access content that requires a skills check. You don't have to red word of death it, but even a simple exchange in a preceding conversation like "you'd better keep up on your swordsmanship before you start taking missions" would be a good idea. This applies to any of the other skills.
I hope 2025 is a better year for progress in this game, because I really do love the writing, and I wish there was much, much more to read!
I also have some hopes/humble suggestions for the current and future characters in this, but since your last post mentioned avoiding feature creep, I'll keep them away, for now. The fact that you mentioned not being super focused on breasts does kind of damper my hopes, though...