VN Ren'Py The Copycat [v0.8.0] [PiggyBackRide Productions]

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ApocalypseSurvivor

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I usually don't write this amateur writing but this game really pissed me of.
I should've checked it before playing this game.
NTR games are moodkill and you also took one of my top MILF.
You made that MILF miserable & destroyed. You could've wrote a better writing.
I'll never forgive this game and also the dev.
Hope your game gets success only to those cucks.
 
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MrCrazeeMan

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ApocalypseSurvivor said:
I Usually don't write this amateur writing but this game really pissed me of.
I should've checked it before playing this game.
NTR games is like a moodkill and you also took of my top milf.
You made that milf miserable. You could've wrote a better writiing.
I'll never forgive this game and also the dev.
Hope your game gets success only to those cucks.
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My man… this is a porn GAME not real life. It’s not that deep
 
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John Doe Jr.

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ApocalypseSurvivor said:
As I told it's a amateur writing.
That was just to take out my anger and that's it.
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What makes the writing amateur in terms of porn games? There's a clear and defined plot. The characters for the most part are all fleshed out and you understand their motivations and fears and what they want. It's engaging where you're interested in where the plot is going, what's going to happen to all the characters, and how will they respond to things happening. Most porn games barely have any of that with just sex scene after sex scene with no characterization or plot to build the sex scenes up and make them interesting
 
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ApocalypseSurvivor

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John Doe Jr. said:
What makes the writing amateur in terms of porn games? There's a clear and defined plot. The characters for the most part are all fleshed out and you understand their motivations and fears and what they want. It's engaging where you're interested in where the plot is going, what's going to happen to all the characters, and how will they respond to things happening. Most porn games barely have any of that with just sex scene after sex scene with no characterization or plot to build the sex scenes up and make them interesting
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I wasn't talking about the game's amateur writing, it's MY amateur writing.
As of my opinion about this game, a reviewer Consistently_1nconsistent wrote perfectly about this game.
Consistently_1nconsistent said:
The story alone is for anyone how loves getting fucked over and wants to see women get railed by big black cock. I would be amazed if anyone can get passed the fact that the MC is competing against a gigantic cocked piece of shit who apparently is running trains on some popular blonde every weekend and raping the school principle (? can't remember sorry) who evidently enjoys it. All while flirting with the MCs mom who quite literally wants to take every dick she can find. The MC gets into some scenarios where he can get laid, but one is questionably date rape and the other is a pity fuck. Overall, the MC is a future cuck specialist waiting in the wings. I'm not a fan of these stories unless the MC does just as much fucking as the characters who try to fuck with him. This would have more promise if the piece of shit were killed in the first 30 minutes rather than having a bullshit premise around a copycat that clearly has nothing to do with the MC or the other characters. If this was a murder mystery where the MC starts to suspect his own mother, that would make for a more compelling story. Like let's say the night she went to threaten the big gorilla (not a reference to his race - he's just big and dumb) he ended up dead. That would cast doubt on the her. Having her be in places where suspiciously other killings keep taking place. Have victim be a girl the MC was recently with. Have the dumb blonde go missing after she had that three-way with big idiot and his friend. Casting some suspicion on him before he gets ganked. The current story feels like a bunch of random shit thrown together and calling it a plot. It's just:

Here's a scene where the MC gets bullied

Here's a scene where two guys practically rape a girl and she evidently loved it?

Here's a scene where the mom gets involved and hit on by the same guy who beat her son, rapes women, and she's somehow attracted to this gruff gangster attitude

Now a scene where for no reason the MC's mom is holding a knife in a panic

Oh the mom talked to the principle about her son's bully and instead of actually doing something about it, the principle willingly gets raped.

And the "plot" just gets more and more convoluted with no actual premise. In the end this story does nothing for me. The sex is just there and if that's the only reason to go through this nonsense I'll go to the dozens of other VNs that do it better. This just isn't my cup of tea. Hope everyone else who enjoys this gets something out of it and I wish the Dev all the luck in the world getting support.
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crisbr

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ApocalypseSurvivor said:
I usually don't write this amateur writing but this game really pissed me of.
I should've checked it before playing this game.
NTR games are moodkill and you also took one of my top MILF.
You made that MILF miserable & destroyed. You could've wrote a better writing.
I'll never forgive this game and also the dev.
Hope your game gets success only to those cucks.
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This is a porn game, if you like it, play it, if not, don't play it, the problem is that some people can't differentiate between things, if you don't like it, it has to be destroyed and fought, man, I don't like it, move on, fuck, they just want to live a lie that he is the MC and catch everyone perfect harem the mother sister even the daughter and that's what people like you like and you come and talk shit here go and catch your little sister in these games first mature the world is not made around you and your tastes
 
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John Doe Jr. said:
What makes the writing amateur in terms of porn games? There's a clear and defined plot. The characters for the most part are all fleshed out and you understand their motivations and fears and what they want. It's engaging where you're interested in where the plot is going, what's going to happen to all the characters, and how will they respond to things happening. Most porn games barely have any of that with just sex scene after sex scene with no characterization or plot to build the sex scenes up and make them interesting
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you said it all congratulations on the wise words I completely agree with you
 
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Sahady

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ApocalypseSurvivor said:
I usually don't write this amateur writing but this game really pissed me of.
I should've checked it before playing this game.
NTR games are moodkill and you also took one of my top MILF.
You made that MILF miserable & destroyed. You could've wrote a better writing.
I'll never forgive this game and also the dev.
Hope your game gets success only to those cucks.
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Go cry somewhere else, if this is not your genre of games, why come and write about it
 
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