I really like the "bully fucks mom" thing, I love the (seemingly incoming) "bully fucks the crush" thing and I love the "bully fucks figure of authority" thing and adore that he might have impregnated the principal.
I hate a couple of things though, and they stand out more than the positives so far.
The blackspeak is too forced, it reads horribly. Doesn't sound believable or interesting at all, and the game would just benefit if it was toned down. From my understanding that was done on purpose to satirize, but it has abandoned any connection to reality and is just annoying.
Another thing: sharing sucks, and seems like the story is going that way in the future. Looks like you're doing the same thing most porn creators do when dealing with black people, treating black people as a single entity and corrupted characters belong to that entity, thus the women Jamal corrupts eventually will belong to the gang. Don't go for that, sharing is sharing. Please allow us to have a path where whoever he fucks is his only, no sharing. The same for the other two bullies: please give us a path where it's Jamal the one that fucks the women around MC instead of distributing the influencer girl to the TV company execs, the shy redhead to the blonde fat bully, and who knows what else.
This second point is just a preference but I believe it's a popular stance. The first is my analysis from one writer to another, that has to go. That said, the game is great so far. The mom model is a bit different but it's not ugly, I like it.
Godspeed, Dev!
