- Feb 11, 2018
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I could have done without the obligatory incest 
, but a nice set up for a (seemingly large) harem.
, but a nice set up for a (seemingly large) harem.
- Feb 25, 2020
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- Sep 22, 2017
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Game looks very good and the story is interesting. People probably already mentioned this, but the dev probably should work on how the characters are introduced. After playing the game I don't know how the mc and Andrea are related for example. Are they just friends or are they family? Having a small introduction for each character would make it better.
- Mar 22, 2020
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I agree, the sisters are being introduced in the game without really any mention of who they are. It would be nice to either meet them once before or when they first come up on the screen to make some mention of who they are. I was confused a couple times.
- May 10, 2020
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the dev said he tries to avoid patreon hammer, and doesn't want a patch. So they hide it in some way, I haven't played yet so I don't know how confusing it is.
- Sep 22, 2017
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The way it felt for me is like, if you started reading a book but instead of starting on the first page you skipped a few pages. It felt like there was a lot of information missing about the characters. But I don't want to be too harsh since it's the first release and I think the game has a lot of potential. I think this game can be really really good.
Edit: Also a way that some games seem to avoid problems with patreon is to have the player decide how the characters are related. I haven't seen any game that does that, being banned from patreon.
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looks good, longer then you would expect considering the size. Cannot wait to see more, just hope you have some kind of talk with Anna soon. Would feel wrong to have fun behind her back, besides gotta have her in on the fun. models all look good, and you have an interesting story set up.
Okay, solid start. Few typos here and there, but the dialogue and overall writing was otherwise solid. Renders look pretty decent. I'm interested to see where this goes.
- Nov 27, 2019
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Oh you are certainly not alone.
Oh, so something bad happens, so you force me unconscious, take me someplace new and then leave the room, telling me trust these two strangers who don't explain anything but just ask me questions?
Then you're entrusted to someone who then forces you unconscious again and sexually molests you, and then speaks the line "Should we just kill him now and not take any risks?"
Then we just segue into a normal conversation with your assumed sibling who's in your newly assigned dorm room?
Then you're hazed/ sexually harassed by your sister's girlfriend and another student? And that's just perfectly okay?
WTF?
formerflame, you really don't have to foreshadow with a 20 pound sledgehammer... Lilith? Maybe you could have gone with Ms. Morningstar? At least you didn't default the MC's name to Lucy or Luke.
"A child that is not embraced by the village will burn it down to feel warmth" Uh huh, that's the right response to the fact you're throwing a lamb to the wolves because wolves are so warm cuddly and embracing to lambs
Lilith is a prodigy who mastered some of the most difficult spells before she'd even begun her formal training, and she has request for access to other covens archives because she's become obsessed with some ancient prophecy. And she's positioned herself so that she is in charge of MC's progress and reporting his new abilities...
Oh this is gonna be a roller coaster.
Since I'm triggered the same way Faptime is, I may have to sit out a few episodes and see if this is my cup of tea when the story is more fully developed.
- Sep 22, 2017
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Decided to play again now that I know how the characters are related and it makes a lot more sense, the first time I played I was very confused about what was Katherine's role.
- Oct 15, 2018
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I really enjoyed this. The introduction to the various characters was kind of haphazard though. I definitely get letting the introductions happen as the story unfolds but for example the scene switches from the MC talking with Lilith to Cassie going "RAAGH". Who the hell is Cassie? Where even are we? Why does she have her legs wrapped around me two screens later? It's all very abrupt. Maybe the devs are avoiding characterizing the relationships because of Patreon? Anyway, that aside I think my only objection is that it ended too soon
Best of luck.
Best of luck.
- Sep 16, 2020
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This certainly solved some confusion. Nice start look forward to next release!
Holy crap, that's a LOT of girls in the pics. Are all those introduced in the game yet? Because if they are, then that's a LOT of characters for such early release.
Whenever I see these "Magic school" type games I always look through the tags and sigh to myself whenever I don't see a transformation one. Such a missed opportunity. Yes I know that a bunch of transformations would be hard to do in a VN, but this is also something I don't often see in other game engines. There are a couple that have magic and transformations by magic in them, but it just seems so rare.
This is not me saying anything against this game. I am just venting a little. Nothing in this is directed at anyone person as I have a lot of respect for game devs and the hard work they do to create their games. This is just me commenting on the lack of games that have magic as the core thing with the protag yet don't tap into transformation magic. If you would like to suggest a game with such things then I am all ears. But as stated this is not an attack or flame on the dev of this game or the game itself.
This is not me saying anything against this game. I am just venting a little. Nothing in this is directed at anyone person as I have a lot of respect for game devs and the hard work they do to create their games. This is just me commenting on the lack of games that have magic as the core thing with the protag yet don't tap into transformation magic. If you would like to suggest a game with such things then I am all ears. But as stated this is not an attack or flame on the dev of this game or the game itself.
When I saw the coven I was hoping for a female protagonist harem game instead it's just another generic magical horse cock harem game. Some of the girls are hot but the MC just the same old same old that you see in .999999999% of male protagonist type games.
Agreed... If the dev is scared of being banned from Patreon they should have gone with Subscribestar instead... Either that or just done the Landlady/Roommate bullshit - personally prefer when the dev gives us a chance in the beginning to decide the character relationships while also introducing us to the characters. This "approach" of throwing people at the player without any awareness of who anyone is doesn't work well.
Hopefully the player is given more information and more choices, right now the MC just goes along with everything...
- May 27, 2017
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Solid start if a bit light but I've already set my eyes on one of the chicks. She's not been introduced yet but the chick with the side-shave is certainly looking like my type.