lewismasss

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Mar 31, 2019
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It's hard for me to gauge how dark it actually is tbh. As a person, I am not prone to get very emotional and rarely does a movie make me depressed. Furthermore, as an author, you also don't really have the same bond as a reader. Originally there was no plan for a separate path as I saw the events as something that could play with the emotional strings and nothing more (I still don't see it as that dark). That was until my proofreader and brothers went through it. They made sure to tell me how dark it was.

Now, I really really (can't emphasize that enough) hope that the people that are prone to lash out when they get sad takes the short version.
The short version explains everything Luna went through just without actually adding any feelings to it.
Like - if someone tells you that they were beaten when they were young- you would feel bad for em but that's it.
But if you could see through their eyes everything they went through, the physical and mental abuse, the 'experience' would be different.
You'll still know the same as if you took the short version but now you can actually 'feel' it.

So point is- Save before the event. Play the full version. If at any point you start, feeling stuff you don't like, load back and take the short version.

Hello is there any rape i hope not
 

Cocomaster

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Nov 16, 2017
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It's hard for me to gauge how dark it actually is tbh. As a person, I am not prone to get very emotional and rarely does a movie make me depressed. Furthermore, as an author, you also don't really have the same bond as a reader. Originally there was no plan for a separate path as I saw the events as something that could play with the emotional strings and nothing more (I still don't see it as that dark). That was until my proofreader and brothers went through it. They made sure to tell me how dark it was.

Now, I really really (can't emphasize that enough) hope that the people that are prone to lash out when they get sad takes the short version.
The short version explains everything Luna went through just without actually adding any feelings to it.
Like - if someone tells you that they were beaten when they were young- you would feel bad for em but that's it.
But if you could see through their eyes everything they went through, the physical and mental abuse, the 'experience' would be different.
You'll still know the same as if you took the short version but now you can actually 'feel' it.

So point is- Save before the event. Play the full version. If at any point you start, feeling stuff you don't like, load back and take the short version.
Dark is good, it helps to make the plot more gripping.

If MC feels bad for Luna, then he knows what he has to do :sneaky:
 

yltohawk

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Mar 19, 2019
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Hi, why almost 5 month without update? any reason ?
Yes We have been patiently waiting for you to come along and ask that very question... Now that you have finally made your presents known we can anticipate the next update by midnight tonight by Amazon same day delivery.
 
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