- Apr 1, 2019
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Love you all, love the game, love this site, it's free and all and I'm freeloading. Very underwhelming update for the time it took. New mission system is an unnecessary grind, it was fine before. Just my 2-cents, for those who care.
Initial impressions in the introduction, mostly nitpicky things which aren't a big deal:
- The title screen redesign looks great. Definitely an incredible job done on that. The font choice is crisp and fitting.
- The "Experience" screen is sort of confusing. The game is objectively a VN; the three choices don't imply the ramifications they'll have. In a game that is a VN, what's the difference between 'Full Experience,' 'Story+Freeroam,' and 'VN only?' The first option doesn't explain what that means, Story+Freeroam is what you expect out of a VN that has freeroam, and VN only seems redundant. I'd slap some hover tooltips on those choices to provide context on what they actually mean.
- Based on the intro, MC is an everyday man much like I assume everyone on this forum is yet he speaks like a British Royal. This is not the way common people communicate in a casual setting or any setting really, "No, im fairly sure no one bears such ill feelings towards me. I live a rather mundane life." Something like this seems like a normal reply to that convo, "Not that im aware of. I live a pretty boring life."
Again, not a big deal. What I listed are just things that immediately stuck out to me in the introduction without having to actively look for them.
- The title screen redesign looks great. Definitely an incredible job done on that. The font choice is crisp and fitting.
- The "Experience" screen is sort of confusing. The game is objectively a VN; the three choices don't imply the ramifications they'll have. In a game that is a VN, what's the difference between 'Full Experience,' 'Story+Freeroam,' and 'VN only?' The first option doesn't explain what that means, Story+Freeroam is what you expect out of a VN that has freeroam, and VN only seems redundant. I'd slap some hover tooltips on those choices to provide context on what they actually mean.
- Based on the intro, MC is an everyday man much like I assume everyone on this forum is yet he speaks like a British Royal. This is not the way common people communicate in a casual setting or any setting really, "No, im fairly sure no one bears such ill feelings towards me. I live a rather mundane life." Something like this seems like a normal reply to that convo, "Not that im aware of. I live a pretty boring life."
Again, not a big deal. What I listed are just things that immediately stuck out to me in the introduction without having to actively look for them.
Thank you for the feedback! Will look into that.
Hmm. Shouldn't lose MP for the trader unless it's for the bargain. And the book isn't important for the success of the contract.
Yup, focus is back on the story and the side contracts won't take much time now as most are done by contract creators.
- Sep 23, 2019
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Thanks for the feedback. Can't speak for the other two points since I'm just a hired-help writer but as for the third - I personally see the MC as a kind of a nerdy brainy dude. Sure - he takes care of himself physically to look like a sports dude - but judging by his internal dialogue he's the slightly snobby intellectual who silently judges people but isn't a total douche about it by saying it out loud. But in secret - I'm pretty sure he's spent a weekend memorizing famous Latin quotes and he spends way to much time philosophizing about the world and the "right" and "wrong" in the world. So him speaking in a slightly aloof/snobbish way seems quite in character
where do i get the gun? when i try and do the what is truly weak is truly stront event says i need a gun, dunno if im just dumb just cant find it anywhere. im doing the only story+freeroaming option btw
- Sep 23, 2019
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Pretty sure you get a gun as part of the main story. But don't quote me on it. I'm still replaying the game and it's been long since I first played it from the start. But thx for feedback. Maybe the Contract that requires a gun should be locked until you get the gun
EDIT: Apparently it's a bug and has been already fixed. When the bugfix gets released it'll work fine.
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- Feb 21, 2018
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Um nobody talks like that in a game like this... SiiiighhThanks for the feedback. Can't speak for the other two points since I'm just a hired-help writer but as for the third - I personally see the MC as a kind of a nerdy brainy dude. Sure - he takes care of himself physically to look like a sports dude - but judging by his internal dialogue he's the slightly snobby intellectual who silently judges people but isn't a total douche about it by saying it out loud. But in secret - I'm pretty sure he's spent a weekend memorizing famous Latin quotes and he spends way to much time philosophizing about the world and the "right" and "wrong" in the world. So him speaking in a slightly aloof/snobbish way seems quite in character
great game...not my first time playing it but the first time in a long time that ive returned so im replaying and still love it.
some grammatical mistakes....its one of those small but noticeable.
some grammatical mistakes....its one of those small but noticeable.
- Nov 28, 2018
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Kinda weird, I didn't even look at Patreon as I never saw a post for 0.07 so didn't check to see a post for 0.07.1. I see it now though. I'll just wait till it moves down to $5 so I can play.
- Oct 12, 2018
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- Nov 23, 2017
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If I had the money, resources, and connections, I'd try to get this game made into live action series, because damnit, the storytelling is movie/comedic drama series levels that I feel should be experienced by the masses.
- Feb 21, 2018
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no saves work with the new version because Hopes had to upgrade renpy, making all previous saves unusable.
- Mar 7, 2019
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As must as I love this game I think I'll just wait for the bug fix version.
- May 24, 2017
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The whole scene with Cordia where MC asks her if she is his mother doesn't make sense if you talk to the old guy in the first mission. If I am correct he says that on the mother's side MC doesn't have any siblings, so it would be weird to ask that question since Cordia has 3 children. Just something to point out to Hopes if I didn't miss or misunderstand something.
Maybe MC doesn't believe the old guy, but still.
Maybe MC doesn't believe the old guy, but still.