Unity Abandoned The Diary [Ch. 1 V1.2] [Nairdae]

[Nairdae]

What irks me with a lot of these games is they trying to be "jack of all trades" and not really excel or master at anything in the hope to deliver a little bit of this and that for everyone. If a game got a "incest" tag or not doesn't really bother me that much. But if it does I would like to see it done right, not be some superficial ad-hoc, but be a integrated vital part of the story or else it doesn't make sense. At least if you going to use it as a selling argument to attract fans of that fetish.

I understand your concern, I consider myself a person who likes incest so I wanted to create the project with that idea in mind. By the other hand as developer of this project and spending so much time creating it and thinking how to do it unique in a long-term I also want the game to be reached as many players as possible because being honest, projects still alive after some time if the community plays it and shares their thoughts in forums like this one, there it's this feeling of being proud/happiness when you read comments about something you created with your ideas that it's really hard to achieve in other way. That's one of the reasons I added the input text for people who doesnt like the incest tag so they also can have the chance to play it and enjoy it as much as incest lovers like us are enjoying it.

Thanks for sharing your concerns!

 

[Grimtown]

M/S, sisters/brother. Yes you can change it from settings tab ^^

Thanks, just trying it. Quick 1st immediate feedback: The agent Campbell text "Press x..." needs to be static and clicked away. I was distracted for a second by RL and didn't read half of it before it vanished.

 

[Joshua Tree]

I understand your concern, I consider myself a person who likes incest so I wanted to create the project with that idea in mind. By the other hand as developer of this project and spending so much time creating it and thinking how to do it unique in a long-term I also want the game to be reached as many players as possible because being honest, projects still alive after some time if the community plays it and shares their thoughts in forums like this one, there it's this feeling of being proud/happiness when you read comments about something you created with your ideas that it's really hard to achieve in other way. That's one of the reasons I added the input text for people who doesnt like the incest tag so they also can have the chance to play it and enjoy it as much as incest lovers like us are enjoying it.

Thanks for sharing your concerns!

Well, if you look at Naughtyroad and his "Light of my life".... there is a good lesson to get there how to do story telling right. (and make people climb the walls begging for more. But as said before, good luck with your game. Will keep it on my radar but give those poor girls a bit skin conditioning...

 

[Nairdae]

Thanks, just trying it. Quick 1st immediate feedback: The agent Campbell text "Press x..." needs to be static and clicked away. I was distracted for a second by RL and didn't read half of it before it vanished.

Hey, thanks a lot for the feedback, and indeed you are totally right, I´ll add this continue button xD, funny thing, I played that scene around 7 times to check if the wait was long enough to read it and I´ve never come with the idea of adding a button to skip it when you are done reading xD, thanks a lot!

Well, if you look at Naughtyroad and his "Light of my life".... there is a good lesson to get there how to do story telling right. (and make people climb the walls begging for more. But as said before, good luck with your game. Will keep it on my radar but give those poor girls a bit skin conditioning...

I´ll take a look! To be honest, I feel a little bit limited with the storytelling because English its my second language so I wrote the scenes in Spanish and then translate it to English, the thing its that I must write the script in a "simple" way without any deep thought or more extended vocabulary to not mess up the translation. I hope I can hire a proofreader in the future and write the script the way I want ^^

Hahaha working on it, I promise you´ll like the next updates and the high-quality creams they are all be using! xD

 

[Tease Me]

Guess it's dry air and lots of sun.... But yeah, some of the preview pics made me think about walking dead....... the dead ones.. lol.. j/k (kinda).. Don't get me wrong, I like more realistic models with flaws, beauty marks, thicc, curvy, whatever.. slice of life... all these games with characters where all look like runway models is not really that interesting.

There is realism then there is extreme this is Extreme!!! I have discussed this with other Devs most of them decreased the amount of texturing. 1st photo the knees are bent the skin should be smoother not shriveled. Younger skin should have minor flaws. Pronounced facial creasing normally happens in the mid-forties.

 

[Grimtown]

Hey, thanks a lot for the feedback, and indeed you are totally right, I´ll add this continue button xD, funny thing, I played that scene around 7 times to check if the wait was long enough to read it and I´ve never come with the idea of adding a button to skip it when you are done reading xD, thanks a lot!

Sure thing. Another thing I noticed is that the Save/Load list seems very sluggish. I have to really torture my scroll wheel to move up and down.

As I write this text I have reached the point where I have to react to Nadine (go ahead/reject politely) and taskswapped to check if the game has a [harem] tag.
It hasn't. So unless it's just accidentally missing, am I right in assuming that choosing to go ahead probably will close other path(s)? Do you plan a harem route?

 

[Vrijgeest]

Going from unity to renpy isn't evolve, that is devolve tbh...

TIYO. I dont agree. Not only the save system is a problem. No rollback. Adding patches is another.

 

[Nairdae]

Sure thing. Another thing I noticed is that the Save/Load list seems very sluggish. I have to really torture my scroll wheel to move up and down.

As I write this text I have reached the point where I have to react to Nadine (go ahead/reject politely) and taskswapped to check if the game has a [harem] tag.
It hasn't. So unless it's just accidentally missing, am I right in assuming that choosing to go ahead probably will close other path(s)? Do you plan a harem route?

If you click on the list and just drag it should go up and down as well

For now, the love paths of each character are different from each other so they don't collapse, in the future probably there will be some threesomes that's for sure, but it's also likely to close other paths with other people

 

[House Of Black]

Before I dive into this I wanna know will there be NTR or no?

 

[Nairdae]

Before I dive into this I wanna know will there be NTR or no?

Sexual speaking no, no one its gonna touch any of your girls ma boy!

 

[Grimtown]

If you click on the list and just drag it should go up and down as well

For now, the love paths of each character are different from each other so they don't collapse, in the future probably there will be some threesomes that's for sure, but it's also likely to close other paths with other people

Alright.
The diary for all 4 girls says "story completed". Wondering why the [vaginal sex] tag is on the OP... I chose to go ahead with Nadine which included the beginning of a blowjob, but apart from that I haven't seen other sexual content in this.

 

[Nairdae]

Alright.
The diary for all 4 girls says "story completed". Wondering why the [vaginal sex] tag is on the OP... I chose to go ahead with Nadine which included the beginning of a blowjob, but apart from that I haven't seen other sexual content in this.

You forgot about Alba/Renata from the coffee shop?

 

[Grimtown]

You forgot about Alba/Renata from the coffee shop?

Yes, yes I did.

 

[Grimtown]

No rollback.

I agree. I miss rollback in this game. Also the possibility to skip ahead through content you already know.

 

[TommyTuba]

This

Hey, thanks a lot for the feedback, and indeed you are totally right, I´ll add this continue button xD, funny thing, I played that scene around 7 times to check if the wait was long enough to read it and I´ve never come with the idea of adding a button to skip it when you are done reading xD, thanks a lot!



I´ll take a look! To be honest, I feel a little bit limited with the storytelling because English its my second language so I wrote the scenes in Spanish and then translate it to English, the thing its that I must write the script in a "simple" way without any deep thought or more extended vocabulary to not mess up the translation. I hope I can hire a proofreader in the future and write the script the way I want ^^

Hahaha working on it, I promise you´ll like the next updates and the high-quality creams they are all be using! xD

This game shows definite promise. Looking forward to the next update.

 

[madmit]

Lol, how expensive should be video card to play this? Ridiculous.

 

[Grimtown]

Alright, another few things I noticed. Not a complaint, just personal feedback.
- You tease us with one item in the store (dress), but we can't actually buy it.
- MC doesn't exit/enter his bedroom at the same location in the hallway.
- The to-dos are very spread out at the end of every single person's diary entry. That is already a bit confusing, it will get more confusing the more entries there will be. A single page with all current to-dos might be more helpful.
- In my opinion the diary needs some sort of quick navigation. Browsing it it very time consuming, since you have to go back/forth page by page (+page turn animation).
- Generally the timed transitions feel like driving with breaks on. Especially when loading an older save you can't skip through familiar content.

Got it bookmarked now and will keep an eye on it.

 

[Nairdae]

Alright, another few things I noticed. Not a complaint, just personal feedback.
- You tease us with one item in the store (dress), but we can't actually buy it.
- MC doesn't exit/enter his bedroom at the same location in the hallway.
- The to-dos are very spread out at the end of every single person's diary entry. That is already a bit confusing, it will get more confusing the more entries there will be. A single page with all current to-dos might be more helpful.
- In my opinion the diary needs some sort of quick navigation. Browsing it it very time consuming, since you have to go back/forth page by page (+page turn animation).
- Generally the timed transitions feel like driving with breaks on. Especially when loading an older save you can't skip through familiar content.

Got it bookmarked now and will keep an eye on it.

Thanks a lot for the feedback I'll take note of everything you said, especially the To Do's list thing!

 

[Sortino]

I can't open it, can anybody help ? When I lauched the game nothing happened.

 

[bigbobby0940]

So errr, anyone gonna say how much content is in this 0.1 release?

I could imagine people are getting tired of downloading every new 0.1 release, seeing it's got 3 mins of content and then deleting it from their folder only for it to never even reach 0.2 in the first place.

Well, seeing as nobody is answering this despite there being 3 pages of people discussing this """"""gane""""""", i'll do everyone a favor seeing as i'm pretty sure the only posters in here are shills

1. Renders are surprisingly high quality
2. Models are not my cup of tea as their skin textures seem dirty and they're not that pleasant to look at BUT I can definitely see this as being a conscious choice as it seems like the developer went for a realistic approach which is DEFINITELY appreciated as i'm getting tired of perfect model tier families in every game with massive tits/ass and small waists. So I appreciate the variety and it's still fappable.
3. Very slow transitions between dialogue, makes it a bit of a slog
4. Interesting scenario. Curious to see how it develops
5. No real sexy content from what I found unless I missed something, felt a little lost trying to find out what I was meant to be doing once I finished the tutorial. Looked at the gallery and saw there's a blowjob scene but I was too bored and tired of navigating the house to carry on to find it.


Overall, a lot of effort actually went into this first release which is appreciated and frankly, surprising as I expected it to be another rushed 0.1 release thrown on f95zone for that sweet patreon support.

As to whether or not you should play it, well if you want to see if it's worth supporting sure, if you're like me and you only come to f95zone to see what new games you can actually bust a nut too before going on with your day, then absolutely not. Wait for more updates as there's nothing worthwhile here besides an interesting concept. The sandbox element is an absolute dealbreaker for me, clicking on every room at different times of the day is the worst design you could have for a porn game.