VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Dragonspire [Ep.3 v1.0] [Lancastle]

[Grohal]

I prefer slow burners, the pacing is just to fast for me.
But the rest is fine. Will check this out again after some updates.

 

[Crow Armbrust]

THX

 

[grumpyoldcat]

Good luck, hope you make your mark in a sea full of tripe and the occasional hidden gem.

 

[Azsouth]

I liked it, not sure what the corruption stuff is about on the stats page, didn't think I did anything corrupt. Hope for a few answer in the next update, like the pixie, his eyes flashing purple, and why his boss is stalking him (she was at the club). Not sure why the receptionist wasn't shown in the after episode roll there, she seemed to really want the MC. Hope this game will have a have Harem and Pregnancy path.

 

[Lancastle]

I'd like explain some things I've seen. Yes you are forced into sex with Lin for story purpose. That will be the only time you're forced.

Hailie (looks like she) has done some porn in the past as some have seen. This will be addressed next interaction if you've seen this scene.

There is no plan for NTR. There will be threesomes available. If you feel that is NTR that's fine and just simply decline the offer.

A lot more will be explained in the next chapter update.

 

[shamtiiomi]

Sorry to ask but where is the porn scene about hailey?

 

[Lancastle]

Sorry to ask but where is the porn scene about hailey?

The end if you decline the advancements.

 

[HogRocket]

The end if you decline the advancements.

second playthrough time.

Looks like I'm going to have to pay attention and keep saves and run parallel paths from now on to see all content

 

[SeveredRealms]

The end if you decline the advancements.

The only problem with that is its a no no showing Li's like that. many people even at the thought of it will set her aside and not want her. If its in the past is best to have a passing mention but not show any renders with it. Its just a suggestion but many will not want anything to do with her because of that render alone.

 

[Poisonous]

Shaved-sides hairstyle...

 

[Sngo]

Hailie has done some porn in the past as some have seen. This will be addressed next interaction if you've seen this scene.

way to go just to ruin the best looking LI...

Well GL with the game anyway

 

[hatefuldisplay]

Not a bad start. Great renders and solid animation.

The story isn't bad, but it is running full steam on every woman you meet wanting to have sex with you. A little work on that area would make this more compelling. Hopefully, we find Cassandra or someone else to be a little more work for the final prize.

The boss is so close to models from Mad World and Broken Dreamers that I find it difficult to really get into her. None of the other models brought me any type of immediate recognition to other games so that is quite pleasing.

Looking forward to seeing what the second part looks like.

 

[A.C.H.B.]

I honestly don't mind the stuff with Hailie. I mean, given what we already know about her it looks like I'll be avoiding her as an LI anyways. I don't mind the stuff with Lin as well as it's an obvious plot device that servers a purpose. Other than that, it's a decent start Lancastle . My only other issue is that the pace is a bit too fast for my liking, but I guess that's subjective as well. Looking forward to see how the story progresses but for now this game's a solid 7 out of 10 in my books.

 

[linkinn]

Hailie has done some porn in the past as some have seen. This will be addressed next interaction if you've seen this scene.

But why show it? You just set a precedent, everyone that dislikes this kind of content will have that in the back of their mind for the whole experience now "when is the next surprise", if that was the intention it's fine as it's your game.

I just don't get what's the point, a simple "Hey you want to know something? I was a porn actress." from her when drinking or wathever after they know each other a little better, it also opens the option to be cool or not about it... but eh your decision.

 

[Johnny Bravo.]

There is no plan for NTR. There will be threesomes available. If you feel that is NTR that's fine and just simply decline the offer.

Well threesome is not considered NTR if it involves MC with M/F/F that's just group sex, but that one scene with Hailie WOULD have been considered NTR however you said there will be some explanation on the next update so let's see what happens.

 

[Deleted member 2412505]

hmmm so MC is kinda (depending on choice) forced into mind control sex. since even if you try to avoid Lin you cant reject her. that was really annoying. decided to skip everything after that so i'll probably avoid this game since we have fake choices.


i found the MMF scene. it's a single render where MC finds the girl from the cafe shop(the girl wih the glasses in the banner.) sex tape. and it shows her with two dudes. you can avoid seeing it if you choose one of the other 2 girls. but yeah...she apparently gets around.

Where did you find it?

 

[Deleted member 624752]

Interesting little game you got going here.
Like other's have said, a bit too much on the magic dick... well I can't even say dick, no one's fucked him yet and all the girls are still be up on him like "DAYUM BOY... YOU THIIIICK, WHERE YOU BEEN AT BOIIII??" Obviously an exaggeration, but not by much. o.o;;


Is this going to be a dating sim where I can choose only 1 girl?
Or will I be able to build a harem with the right choices?
Are there correct choice or should I be trying to balance points?

I like Sasha's personality even if I'm not a fan of her updo.
The redhead is the clear winner in terms of looks, though the clear runner up is the brunette coworker who stands you up.
I like Hailey's look too and what we see of her personality but the DP scene of her porno is absolutely a turnoff.
(Sure we all watch porn, but not alot of guys would actually want to date a former pornstar. Not a fan of riding the town bike.) Which is a shame, she had potential.

Also, its unclear on if the MC could see the pixie or not. We see her, see her talk, but MC just never mentions her... can he see her? Is it not weird that the boss has a fucking fairy?? No? Just me? lol. That could stand to be cleared up.

Otherwise good job with what you've got so far Lancastle.
Hopefully we see less other dicks in future updates.

 

[HogRocket]

Interesting little game you got going here.
Like other's have said, a bit too much on the magic dick... well I can't even say dick, no one's fucked him yet and all the girls are still be up on him like "DAYUM BOY... YOU THIIIICK, WHERE YOU BEEN AT BOIIII??" Obviously an exaggeration, but not by much. o.o;;


Is this going to be a dating sim where I can choose only 1 girl?
Or will I be able to build a harem with the right choices?
Are there correct choice or should I be trying to balance points?

I like Sasha's personality even if I'm not a fan of her updo.
The redhead is the clear winner in terms of looks, though the clear runner up is the brunette coworker who stands you up.
I like Hailey's look too and what we see of her personality but the DP scene of her porno is absolutely a turnoff.
(Sure we all watch porn, but not alot of guys would actually want to date a former pornstar. Not a fan of riding the town bike.)
Which is a shame, she had potential.

Also, its unclear on if the MC could see the pixie or not. We see her, see her talk, but MC just never mentions her... can he see her? Is it not weird that the boss has a fucking fairy?? No? Just me? lol. That could stand to be cleared up.

Otherwise good job with what you've got so far Lancastle.
Hopefully we see less other dicks in future updates.

yeah, after seeing the porn scene Hailey went from a solid "top contender" to hard "NOPE" with a penicillin booster shot.
I think if that scene stays canon, she'll get kicked to the curb by a large majority of people. Might consider "reshooting that scene"

 

[bruce555]

WTF I don't want a LI to have made porn movies, filled in every orifice. The maximum degradation for a LI, who wants such a thing.

 

[Look-see]

Where did you find it?

ignore/reject the two girls at the end. should pop up. before the game ends.