Thank you all so much for the feedback.
The first alpha version of the game had bugs that we will definitely fix in the next version which will be released in the fall, this is our first experience in creating such games, programming, rendering etc, and with time we hope to get to a higher level and improve our skills a lot. The next version of the game will have more story, more characters and locations. Of course at the moment this novel is hardly playable, but I think that will change in a few updates.
Do you have any idea when a new release will come out?