That delay between each section of text gets old fast.
Normally with transitions off then you'd instantly see the next line to read but here there's like a 1/2 second delay that must have been deliberately added or something but gets annoying very quickly as it's there after almost every line. At the start it kept tricking me into hitting space again because I thought there was just a random blank screen, which meant I then accidentally skipped the next line. It was almost too annoying to play, after a little bit I resorted to skipping forwards, rolling back, then rolling forwards as that'd actually produce the lines to read properly. Eventually I realised most of the time double tapping space lightning fast worked okay too (though rarely there isn't a pause and then you skip the line, haha).
That aside, it seems really decent, I like the setup and writing, it's well rendered etc. It was solid for a first release, but I really hope the dev gets rid of those pauses.