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michelita

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Rebecca has been neglected ever since she was introduced, like Kathryn's mom and Luke's dad.
Wasn't Luke's father just introduced last update? How is he neglected? It actually felt forced to me. He's just a response to Luke having the option to go for her mom in the beginning chapters.
How do we know the game is only going for 13 eps btw? I'd agree that seems rather short
 

Filipis

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Wasn't Luke's father just introduced last update? How is he neglected? It actually felt forced to me. He's just a response to Luke having the option to go for her mom in the beginning chapters.
How do we know the game is only going for 13 eps btw? I'd agree that seems rather short
Well, neglected in the sense that he only just got introduced, and then has no scenes in 0.6 (I am guessing, I haven't played it) already - which is the halfway point of the game.

And yes, Bobbyboy mentioned in one his development progress reports on Patreon that he prolonged the game to 13 chapters, because he felt it was necessary. But still, it's time to stop adding characters and get to the good stuff - so that the narrative can close up satisfyingly.
 
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peperonni31

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I guess I'm the only one without access to the latest update.... Everyone here is talking about it and I'm here just getting spoiler left and right :(
 

michelita

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Well, neglected in the sense that he only just got introduced, and then has no scenes in 0.6 (I am guessing, I haven't played it) already - which is the halfway point of the game.

And yes, Bobbyboy mentioned in one his development progress reports on Patreon that he prolonged the game to 13 chapters, because he felt it was necessary. But still, it's time to stop adding characters and get to the good stuff - so that the narrative can close up satisfyingly.
He shouldn't get any scenes anytime soon if the mom storyline is any indication
I guess I'm the only one without access to the latest update.... Everyone here is talking about it and I'm here just getting spoiler left and right :(
I think most here haven't played it including myself. I'm talking about 0.5
 

Filipis

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He shouldn't get any scenes anytime soon if the mom storyline is any indication
And therein lies the problem. Why introduce a new character halfway through the story, only to sideline them in the very next update? Instead of the game reaching peak climax (hehe) at this point in time, we are still waiting for the other shoe to drop - and we all know that this can only lead to rushed endings and forgotten characters.

But no, I am the crazy one for suggesting that the dev tighten the plot and focus on advancing the story.
 

michelita

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And therein lies the problem. Why introduce a new character halfway through the story, only to sideline them in the very next update? Instead of the game reaching peak climax (hehe) at this point in time, we are still waiting for the other shoe to drop - and we all know that this can only lead to rushed endings and forgotten characters.

But no, I am the crazy one for suggesting that the dev tighten the plot and focus on advancing the story.
I didn't call you crazy. I said I'd agree that 13 episodes doesn't appear to be enough to close up the stories with each charachter already in the game. I'd say Santini looked like the main antagonist and he'd barely had any screentime either
 
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Bobbyboy48

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Yeah the drug storyline can push consent out of the window also as the person is under the influence so cannot consent. I think the dev needs to be careful with this as I believe it's also against Patreon's rules. To have content where someone is having sex with drunk or drugged, even if it is just art.

Consent

It is paramount that Adult/18+ creators demonstrate consent in all works (real or animated; photo, video, written, audio) between adult participants or characters; specifically, a freely given, specific, informed and unambiguous indication of consent by a statement or by a clear affirmative action. Additionally, participants and characters must be able to give consent (i.e. not be under the influence of alcohol, drugs, hypnosis, blackmail). “Consensual non-consent” works, in which participants or characters engage in simulated non-consensual encounters, are not permitted. Accompanying a work that features a non-consensual encounter with a statement claiming that the encounter was consensual is a violation of Patreon guidelines.


Yeah the cheating thing also doesn't make much sense there with Courtney either, it doesn't even go anywhere that we can see. There's no build up or anything, it just seems to come out of nowhere. My first thought was "Is this a trap?" like a Mom testing out her daughters boyfriend to see if he will stay faithful.
Clem isn't really attractive to me, so I'm not interested in her.
I talked to them about this already and outlined the whole story. The guy on the trust and safety team did an assessment of the game and they deemed it acceptable. I’m not going to spoil the story but not all is what it seems and things are learned later.
 

Itsuki_desu

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And therein lies the problem. Why introduce a new character halfway through the story, only to sideline them in the very next update? Instead of the game reaching peak climax (hehe) at this point in time, we are still waiting for the other shoe to drop - and we all know that this can only lead to rushed endings and forgotten characters.

But no, I am the crazy one for suggesting that the dev tighten the plot and focus on advancing the story.
Even though I'm here just to see Kathryn get stuffed with dicks, I can't help but agree with this assessment.
 
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mommysboiii

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I was hoping that we would get more of Courtney (Kat's Mom) especially since she says how she will probably need Luke's help with moving. But since the out of the blue blowjob the only time that we've seen her is at the hospital with Kat and Rebecca.

Flying under Patreon's radar is a dangerous strategy IMO. All of the time and effort making the game, spending time building up support could all be gone in the blink of an eye. Not to mention the money that people have paid to see the game finished, all be for nothing. If I were him I would think about removing or reworking those scenes with the drugs. As apart from those, everything else should be fine.
Dude stop change the story i love the plot:oops:
 

Tor90

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If I can remember there will be a whole scene in the next chapter for Rebecca. She can be very intressting in this story.
 

Dessolos

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You selfish faGGots who used the shared link and downloaded the update, I know you're here.

You know what they say; sharing is caring. Now upload that again so we can use it too :devilish:
how about no and be patient and restful towards the dev's wishes or pay for it yourself

I saw, then the developer said to give him a couple of days, it seems like a couple of days have passed
I think today is only the 3rd day I think the point was the dev wanted the leakers to wait till it got to the lower tiers at least if possible
 
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