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ironically well you may feel different. But I feel for NTS , NTR and Love path the best choice is to allow Kathryn to go to the dance with Pat alone. ( The choice come up in Ch 7) That way Luke and Path never get into a fight and Kat doesn't choose to stay with Pat and not chase after Luke. You still go to the motel but at least this way getting there doesn't feel as bad to me and you can still say no to NTR / cheating.I agree with this part of CutieLvr's comment. It does take writing skill to cause such emotions and feedback but that's not the issue. Be skillful yes, be deceptive no. Why put in all the choices up to the "dance night" that let you avoid all the NTR type of behavior then throw it all away for a plot point. Raising emotions IS good writing but this is lazy writing. Bad writing. You sacrifice all the work you've done before to make your title accessible to folks with multiple and different desires. Lazy writing that slams the door in the face of readers like me. Once again this is just one person's perspective.