NOTAVPfan

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Thanks, GlitchDoll for the response! Sorry if it seemed like I was overtly critical or rude, just airing my opinions of the game. Sorry for the block of text!
Again, the UI you created is wonder and I can tell you spend a long time perfecting it! Hands down leagues above most games, let alone HTML games. Having to juggle multiple playstyles, pathways, sexualities, and player bodies seems like an extremely large effort, so kudos to your work!
There should be a tag for NTR, as well as also a warning in summary/starting page that the main LI is sleeping around if you keep Mellissa having a boyfriend/lovers in the game.
Onto the NTR, I and a lot of the Internet believe that if the LI of a PC is already in a relationship or is sleeping around, irrelevant on whether it is before the PC tries to start the relationship with the LI/during the relationship/ or after the relationship (bragging about new lover), then it is NTR. If you see a LI have sex with someone else, or if it is talked about, then it is NTR. While its understandable to try and flesh out the lore of the world by having LIs with past or current relationships, there should be at least some LIs that don't have experience, or at least their experience shouldn't be heavily referenced. At least give the option for loyal LIs that don't have a record of sleeping around. Preferably a way to turn off that content altogether unless it breaks continuity; i.e. no mention of Melissa dating anyone ever and preferably an option if not eh status que for the mother being divorced and thus a romance option instead of trying to make her cheat on her husband (I don't like how the husband sexually harasses the PC with no way to stop it!). In this game, it's just especially galling that ALL of the LIs are sleeping around, and seemingly everyone in town as well, so humiliation, voyeur, and NTR aren't avoidable at all.
As to how unrealistic it is for the player to have a PC with options to sleep with everyone and expect their lover(s) to remain faithful, with the game not mentioning the LIs sleeping around as well: its a game, its not realistic. The majority of humanity is hypocritical in that they get upset when hearing about their lovers sleeping around and cheating yet they themselves fantasize about being able to have harems. A game is meant as escapism and if the player hates a kink, and the game says it provides multiple playstyles, then the player should be able to say no to it, as well as the usual of this genre of work: "I'm going to still sleep around but I don't want the LIs to do that too." Again, really scummy and unrealistic behavior, but its a smut game!

I am personally interested in Casey without NTR and raceplay while kinder to PC, the mother if she's kinder, Melissa if no NTR or heavy mentioning of past relations, the woman who was with you when signing the consent form, and Bailey (preferred no NTR, and while I hate tattoos and piercings she is seemingly the only feminine character with a dick). In looks only, as 90% of characters are assholes to the MC! I am not at all interested in masculine characters, rude or hateful characters, characters who sleep around, or prostitutes; nor am I interested in having in NTR, raceplay, mentions of LIs sleeping with others, or any form of Voyeuristics at all! Will there be a way to have loyal LIs, and a way to not have scenes of others characters having sex forced upon the player; i.e. pictures without having clicked on an option to show said picture (raceplay gangbang scene at hostel)?

Another question I have is what differentiates the Feminization and Sissification within the game? To me more often then not those terms are interchangeable. Sissy leaning more to hyper-femininity characters with usually no breasts and rarely have breasts and are usually Subs with chastity while Feminization characters can be any body-type and can be Subs/Doms/Switch.

How much control over the bodily transformation does the player have, or will all male PCs are feminized get breasts?
What is a sissy considered in-game? There are sissys that are into feminine people and not males.
For example, I want to play as a feminine male that wears feminine clothes (i.e. a crossdresser/femboy/trap, not a character with breasts/shemale/transgender) and romances feminine characters. It seems like the male PC must either be transgender or a sissy in the current build, and that those PCs, as well as Sub PCs, are automatically forced into Humiliation, NTR/Cuckoldry, and Voyeur. As I hate those three kinks, that to me is a problem. Will those be forced on specific paths (sub/fem/sissy) or can those kinks be turned off and not forced? In all honesty, Fem content is the only reason I tried this game, and if the NTR tag was on the main page I wouldn't have even looked twice at this game.
The options in the questionnaire do lean to MxM, even with female boss as at least one sissy answer has the PC bring two men into the bath room to "relieve them" as compensation for the boss's mistake. Options in the questionnaire for pure crossdressing points would be appreciated, as well as reworking the sissy answers to be less subservient. The dream sequence is also problematic, as it forces the male PC, irrelevant of any choices made previously, into a sub woman. I believe that it should be reworked.

Again, I can tell you put a lot of work in this and its going to be an amazing game! Its just at the time of me writing this from the various content in the game as well as the conversations in this forum, it seems like this game may not be for me. Not everything has to be likeable for everyone, but its a shame that I may not be able to experience your hard work and quality content! My nitpicks aren't meant are rude or demanding, just my views on how the game could be change to allow for a wider audience, myself included hint hint lol, to enjoy your work. Sorry for another wall of text, lol!
 

AlliebuttDK

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Thanks, GlitchDoll for the response! Sorry if it seemed like I was overtly critical or rude, just airing my opinions of the game. Sorry for the block of text!
Again, the UI you created is wonder and I can tell you spend a long time perfecting it! Hands down leagues above most games, let alone HTML games. Having to juggle multiple playstyles, pathways, sexualities, and player bodies seems like an extremely large effort, so kudos to your work!
There should be a tag for NTR, as well as also a warning in summary/starting page that the main LI is sleeping around if you keep Mellissa having a boyfriend/lovers in the game.
Onto the NTR, I and a lot of the Internet believe that if the LI of a PC is already in a relationship or is sleeping around, irrelevant on whether it is before the PC tries to start the relationship with the LI/during the relationship/ or after the relationship (bragging about new lover), then it is NTR. If you see a LI have sex with someone else, or if it is talked about, then it is NTR. While its understandable to try and flesh out the lore of the world by having LIs with past or current relationships, there should be at least some LIs that don't have experience, or at least their experience shouldn't be heavily referenced. At least give the option for loyal LIs that don't have a record of sleeping around. Preferably a way to turn off that content altogether unless it breaks continuity; i.e. no mention of Melissa dating anyone ever and preferably an option if not eh status que for the mother being divorced and thus a romance option instead of trying to make her cheat on her husband (I don't like how the husband sexually harasses the PC with no way to stop it!). In this game, it's just especially galling that ALL of the LIs are sleeping around, and seemingly everyone in town as well, so humiliation, voyeur, and NTR aren't avoidable at all.
As to how unrealistic it is for the player to have a PC with options to sleep with everyone and expect their lover(s) to remain faithful, with the game not mentioning the LIs sleeping around as well: its a game, its not realistic. The majority of humanity is hypocritical in that they get upset when hearing about their lovers sleeping around and cheating yet they themselves fantasize about being able to have harems. A game is meant as escapism and if the player hates a kink, and the game says it provides multiple playstyles, then the player should be able to say no to it, as well as the usual of this genre of work: "I'm going to still sleep around but I don't want the LIs to do that too." Again, really scummy and unrealistic behavior, but its a smut game!

I am personally interested in Casey without NTR and raceplay while kinder to PC, the mother if she's kinder, Melissa if no NTR or heavy mentioning of past relations, the woman who was with you when signing the consent form, and Bailey (preferred no NTR, and while I hate tattoos and piercings she is seemingly the only feminine character with a dick). In looks only, as 90% of characters are assholes to the MC! I am not at all interested in masculine characters, rude or hateful characters, characters who sleep around, or prostitutes; nor am I interested in having in NTR, raceplay, mentions of LIs sleeping with others, or any form of Voyeuristics at all! Will there be a way to have loyal LIs, and a way to not have scenes of others characters having sex forced upon the player; i.e. pictures without having clicked on an option to show said picture (raceplay gangbang scene at hostel)?

Another question I have is what differentiates the Feminization and Sissification within the game? To me more often then not those terms are interchangeable. Sissy leaning more to hyper-femininity characters with usually no breasts and rarely have breasts and are usually Subs with chastity while Feminization characters can be any body-type and can be Subs/Doms/Switch.

How much control over the bodily transformation does the player have, or will all male PCs are feminized get breasts?
What is a sissy considered in-game? There are sissys that are into feminine people and not males.
For example, I want to play as a feminine male that wears feminine clothes (i.e. a crossdresser/femboy/trap, not a character with breasts/shemale/transgender) and romances feminine characters. It seems like the male PC must either be transgender or a sissy in the current build, and that those PCs, as well as Sub PCs, are automatically forced into Humiliation, NTR/Cuckoldry, and Voyeur. As I hate those three kinks, that to me is a problem. Will those be forced on specific paths (sub/fem/sissy) or can those kinks be turned off and not forced? In all honesty, Fem content is the only reason I tried this game, and if the NTR tag was on the main page I wouldn't have even looked twice at this game.
The options in the questionnaire do lean to MxM, even with female boss as at least one sissy answer has the PC bring two men into the bath room to "relieve them" as compensation for the boss's mistake. Options in the questionnaire for pure crossdressing points would be appreciated, as well as reworking the sissy answers to be less subservient. The dream sequence is also problematic, as it forces the male PC, irrelevant of any choices made previously, into a sub woman. I believe that it should be reworked.

Again, I can tell you put a lot of work in this and its going to be an amazing game! Its just at the time of me writing this from the various content in the game as well as the conversations in this forum, it seems like this game may not be for me. Not everything has to be likeable for everyone, but its a shame that I may not be able to experience your hard work and quality content! My nitpicks aren't meant are rude or demanding, just my views on how the game could be change to allow for a wider audience, myself included hint hint lol, to enjoy your work. Sorry for another wall of text, lol!
Most of the things you don't want, are clearly a part of the game by default. The dev even said that humiliation and cuckoldry is one unavoidable aspect of the game, while not being the main thing, it will still be a part of the game as it is intended. So honestly, if those things don't get your wheel greased, then I honestly suggest you find another game. It's obvious how big a role these will play based on what's already released, so asking for those things to be removed would essentially be the equivalent of you asking the dev to make a totally new game. And I don't blame the dev for when they shoot that idea down. As it is this is already an incredibly ambitious game, so to make a complete alternative reality of the game on top of that, would basically doom the project to get abandoned before it even had a chance to breathe.
 

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I hope that the sissy/crossdressing parts are only optional, because for some reason, it seems like most the games with the intriguing plots involve the fetishes I'm not into.
 

AlliebuttDK

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I hope that the sissy/crossdressing parts are only optional, because for some reason, it seems like most the games with the intriguing plots involve the fetishes I'm not into.
The dev has mentioned that there will be a little feminization that the MC is unaware of, but fully committing to those paths are a choice that the player has to actively choose with the choices they make in the game.
 

TheFamilyDog

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Will it just be pictures or will there be videos as well
I for one like the lack of videos in this game, why indeed force one's self to write the game around the vid instead of the other way around. One of my fav transformation games does seem to have scenes like that. In other places, the video just comes close which is kinda jarring when combined with the text.

As for our girl Melissa, she does come across to me as really caring for the MC. I mean the $100 she give him for a hotel seals the deal for me, because it wasn't something she had to do. Now not too fond of the morning kitchen scene with finding her with a guy and hearing about another but it's not her fault for our MC for wishing for them to have a different type of relationship. And having been on both sides of that in the past, not going to blame either side for their blindness.

On the other hand as a female MO, you can almost steal Melissa's guy away that morning too. As a sub/sissy MC, I thought it would be neat to fix the elder sister's broken heart. Sucker for a happy ending!

Yet I should add, once the game was near completion I did think some video for the large non-sex scenes could add some nice polish to the game. Like for scenery or the car stuff, just to add a little extra.
 

Godogma

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She definitely didn't come across as caring to me; they're kicking the MC out of the house knowing he has no other options and his car just burnt down so he doesn't even have the option of sleeping in the car.

No idea on other paths but definitely didn't come across as someone that I'd say cared for me if I was in the MC's place.
 
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TheFamilyDog

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The mother (my guess) didn't wish the MC to be in a house full of Melissa and her friends (all young and oversexed). Melissa gives him $100 dollars to help with the cost of a hotel, besides defending him when he was dropping her off and even giving him a ride to the mall with her friends (all Mean Girls I'm telling you!). Our girl even came into his room when he was having that terrible nightmare. I got no complaints with Melissa being our MC BFF even if both are a little clueless to what the other wants out of the relationship.

Now the youngest sister, not too sure what is going on with her (besides the intrigue with the lab). But I could be a little weird since right now I would think my own personal best ending would be sissy/sub for the oldest sister (and marrying her), becoming true BFF with Melissa and with her help get little sis back while burning a certain lab to the ground.

... and a new car, definitely a new car!
 
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GlitchDoll said:
As you might know, there are a lot of image galleries of Melissa Moore and Riley Reid together and a good few are POV with a male. I have a question however, if both Riley and Melissa were having sex with you is it counted as an incest tag.

Having been through HRT in my life I am a fan of showing slow and gradual changes but this is a porn game where evil science is done. As another Dev once said to me, reality has to be fast tracked for transformations.

Transitioning is important in this game so there will be crossover. When I said I wanted to keep male and female paths seperate it was more that I have worked hard so that when you play a Female MC it does not feel like you are just playing the Male character's story.
Ah, right. I had forgotten. Patreon and it's dreaded murder death kill to fictional incest and fantasy, truly a resident evil.
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Regarding the swiftness of physical alternations and schenaningans, gotcha, it makes sense for the games setting. Which explains neatly why potential crossover to the female path would work; I wasn't sure how deeply or enthusiastically the changes would manifest.

Should be a lot of fun seeing how such an event shapes up and alters the families dynamic.

And thanks for taking the time to wether the storm of constant, silly questions. Signed up on your Patreon, looking forward to watching this story grow and expand over time. Best of luck!
 
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NOTAVPfan

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Most of the things you don't want, are clearly a part of the game by default. The dev even said that humiliation and cuckoldry is one unavoidable aspect of the game, while not being the main thing, it will still be a part of the game as it is intended. So honestly, if those things don't get your wheel greased, then I honestly suggest you find another game. It's obvious how big a role these will play based on what's already released, so asking for those things to be removed would essentially be the equivalent of you asking the dev to make a totally new game. And I don't blame the dev for when they shoot that idea down. As it is this is already an incredibly ambitious game, so to make a complete alternative reality of the game on top of that, would basically doom the project to get abandoned before it even had a chance to breathe.
I completely understand your logic; however, I disagree with some of your points. Neither humiliation or NTR were tagged as of this post and they weren't mentioned in the summary of the game at the start screen and weren't mentions in this forum (not in tags, genre, or summary). To me, it felt like a bait and switch and dishonest, especially when the summary explicitly states: "Your choices will shape the course of your game." Why say that when your choices don't matter? After skimming though this forum, I didn't see anything about humiliation and NTR being unavoidable, and it is almost always warned in every other game on this site, otherwise people get pissed about being subjected to content that they find distasteful or offensive. If they are unavoidable, why state that choices matter in the summary? At the very least it should be clearly marked and probably should have a way for the player to not at all interact with it. Not mentioning NTR when it is heavily divisive on this site alone, let alone viewed as offensive by most people, is not something you should do. It like giving a person a DVD and saying its a PG-13 romance movie but it only has five minutes of romance in the beginning of the story then it switches to a horror zombie movie with gratuitous gore and violence with occasional flirting between the main cast.
I do agree that asking to make an extra storyline was sorta entitled on my part (though not completely out of left field with dev's promise for multiple paths); however, I stand by me asking for extra ways to completely disable content, like most other very successful games out there. If asking for the ability to skip content that most people find offensive, let alone uncomfortable, even reading let alone seeing while at the same time promising multiple paths with multiple choices and lots of content is to much to ask for then I guess this game really isn't for me.
 

Godogma

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The mother (my guess) didn't wish the MC to be in a house full of Melissa and her friends (all young and oversexed). Melissa gives him $100 dollars to help with the cost of a hotel, besides defending him when he was dropping her off and even giving him a ride to the mall with her friends (all Mean Girls I'm telling you!). Our girl even came into his room when he was having that terrible nightmare. I got no complaints with Melissa being our MC BFF even if both are a little clueless to what the other wants out of the relationship.
Considering the dev is currently rewriting her I'm probably closer than you are to the facts.

Now the youngest sister, not too sure what is going on with her (besides the intrigue with the lab). But I could be a little weird since right now I would think my own personal best ending would be sissy/sub for the oldest sister (and marrying her), becoming true BFF with Melissa and with her help get little sis back while burning a certain lab to the ground.

... and a new car, definitely a new car!
And now I know you definitely didn't play the same path I did, and don't have remotely the same mentality.
 

TheFamilyDog

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And now I know you definitely didn't play the same path I did, and don't have remotely the same mentality.
I think I played every path last night trying to find all the scenes, both male and female. But will admit I sped thru some stuff that may been different in the last hour or two when I was trying to max out stuff. So having "the same mentality" won't had work trying to find all the scenes. I give my "best ending" simply because there was a lot of quests I never could finish (not blaming here).
 

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Considering the dev is currently rewriting her I'm probably closer than you are to the facts.

And now I know you definitely didn't play the same path I did, and don't have remotely the same mentality.
TheFamilyDog is the closest to what I was trying to achieve with Melissa and Riley.

I did in fact want her to be caring which is why she gives him the $100. She shows concern about him not having a car and concern about not having a place to sleep.

You are correct however that her she does not come over that way because her scenes are incosistant on whether she cares. I think I missed the mark somewhere with her (a lot because of the slutty atmosphere I think) and need to emphasise that she actually cares but is asking the MC to stay out of the house.
 

TheFamilyDog

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Its not hard to spin getting kicked-out of the house over the weekend isn't a good thing. Melissa's friends are not nice people, and with our MO's bad luck (car just broke down), it could had gotten pretty brutal. Of the two choices, trusting her friends or getting you out of the house... I think Melissa made the right choice.

As to Riley, I don't think you missed the mark by that much GlitchDoll. Sure she's mean at times, but I always thought the MO had something special with her.
 
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GlitchDoll

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Its not hard to spin getting kicked-out of the house over the weekend isn't a good thing. Melissa's friends are not nice people, and with our MO's bad luck (car just broke down), it could had gotten pretty brutal. Of the two choices, trusting her friends or getting you out of the house... I think Melissa made the right choice.

As to Riley, I don't think you missed the mark by that much GlitchDoll. Sure she's mean at times, but I always thought the MO had something special with her.
Yeah the MC is not having a great weekend.

I want the MC to be unsure why Riley acts the way that she does. Her being slutty is part of the plot and I do want her to be closer to the MC. I have been trying to increase that protective feeling the MC should have for her without losing the fact that her teasing annoys or angers him/her.

I think Melissa can be fixed by having her state that the reason the male MC can't stay here is that if Ava found out that he was there then she might ask him to leave. I am hoping I have established that Ava is not a fan of men around her daughters, let alone in a sexual enviroment like a party.
 
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S.H.O.D.A.N.

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I'm really liking the UI, as others have mentioned before, but the writing is even more interesting. In many text based games, my eyes just glaze over when there's too much text to work through on a given page. In this game, it's nicely broken up by images and paragraphs. Kudos to you, GlitchDoll!

I'm also in favor of adding an option that allows you to enable spoilerish tags below each chosen candidate and route when playing, so the player can plan for or avoid certain fetishes they may or may not be interested in.

There's also a faint hope that we'll perhaps for the first time in history (hyperbole ofc), we'll get to see a MtF trans MC that isn't a doormat. Being female does not mean you're required to be submissive, but many games treat this as the default for any trans character. I'd love more top and/or dominant behavior even when transitioning. Better yet, give them the initiative to actively seek feminization/transition as a way to improve themselves.

Also, can the female MC meet Bailey Jay in the hostel? I was so let down that we instead get some random dude. More power to lesbians who love trans!

P.S.: Just remembered another game I played, A Guide to being Assertive, where the MC is transitioning and becoming more confident as a result, not less. Clearly it has been done before!
 
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GlitchDoll

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Thanks, GlitchDoll for the response! Sorry if it seemed like I was overtly critical or rude, just airing my opinions of the game. Sorry for the block of text!
Again, the UI you created is wonder and I can tell you spend a long time perfecting it! Hands down leagues above most games, let alone HTML games. Having to juggle multiple playstyles, pathways, sexualities, and player bodies seems like an extremely large effort, so kudos to your work!
There should be a tag for NTR, as well as also a warning in summary/starting page that the main LI is sleeping around if you keep Mellissa having a boyfriend/lovers in the game.
Onto the NTR, I and a lot of the Internet believe that if the LI of a PC is already in a relationship or is sleeping around, irrelevant on whether it is before the PC tries to start the relationship with the LI/during the relationship/ or after the relationship (bragging about new lover), then it is NTR. If you see a LI have sex with someone else, or if it is talked about, then it is NTR. While its understandable to try and flesh out the lore of the world by having LIs with past or current relationships, there should be at least some LIs that don't have experience, or at least their experience shouldn't be heavily referenced. At least give the option for loyal LIs that don't have a record of sleeping around. Preferably a way to turn off that content altogether unless it breaks continuity; i.e. no mention of Melissa dating anyone ever and preferably an option if not eh status que for the mother being divorced and thus a romance option instead of trying to make her cheat on her husband (I don't like how the husband sexually harasses the PC with no way to stop it!). In this game, it's just especially galling that ALL of the LIs are sleeping around, and seemingly everyone in town as well, so humiliation, voyeur, and NTR aren't avoidable at all.
As to how unrealistic it is for the player to have a PC with options to sleep with everyone and expect their lover(s) to remain faithful, with the game not mentioning the LIs sleeping around as well: its a game, its not realistic. The majority of humanity is hypocritical in that they get upset when hearing about their lovers sleeping around and cheating yet they themselves fantasize about being able to have harems. A game is meant as escapism and if the player hates a kink, and the game says it provides multiple playstyles, then the player should be able to say no to it, as well as the usual of this genre of work: "I'm going to still sleep around but I don't want the LIs to do that too." Again, really scummy and unrealistic behavior, but its a smut game!

I am personally interested in Casey without NTR and raceplay while kinder to PC, the mother if she's kinder, Melissa if no NTR or heavy mentioning of past relations, the woman who was with you when signing the consent form, and Bailey (preferred no NTR, and while I hate tattoos and piercings she is seemingly the only feminine character with a dick). In looks only, as 90% of characters are assholes to the MC! I am not at all interested in masculine characters, rude or hateful characters, characters who sleep around, or prostitutes; nor am I interested in having in NTR, raceplay, mentions of LIs sleeping with others, or any form of Voyeuristics at all! Will there be a way to have loyal LIs, and a way to not have scenes of others characters having sex forced upon the player; i.e. pictures without having clicked on an option to show said picture (raceplay gangbang scene at hostel)?

Another question I have is what differentiates the Feminization and Sissification within the game? To me more often then not those terms are interchangeable. Sissy leaning more to hyper-femininity characters with usually no breasts and rarely have breasts and are usually Subs with chastity while Feminization characters can be any body-type and can be Subs/Doms/Switch.

How much control over the bodily transformation does the player have, or will all male PCs are feminized get breasts?
What is a sissy considered in-game? There are sissys that are into feminine people and not males.
For example, I want to play as a feminine male that wears feminine clothes (i.e. a crossdresser/femboy/trap, not a character with breasts/shemale/transgender) and romances feminine characters. It seems like the male PC must either be transgender or a sissy in the current build, and that those PCs, as well as Sub PCs, are automatically forced into Humiliation, NTR/Cuckoldry, and Voyeur. As I hate those three kinks, that to me is a problem. Will those be forced on specific paths (sub/fem/sissy) or can those kinks be turned off and not forced? In all honesty, Fem content is the only reason I tried this game, and if the NTR tag was on the main page I wouldn't have even looked twice at this game.
The options in the questionnaire do lean to MxM, even with female boss as at least one sissy answer has the PC bring two men into the bath room to "relieve them" as compensation for the boss's mistake. Options in the questionnaire for pure crossdressing points would be appreciated, as well as reworking the sissy answers to be less subservient. The dream sequence is also problematic, as it forces the male PC, irrelevant of any choices made previously, into a sub woman. I believe that it should be reworked.

Again, I can tell you put a lot of work in this and its going to be an amazing game! Its just at the time of me writing this from the various content in the game as well as the conversations in this forum, it seems like this game may not be for me. Not everything has to be likeable for everyone, but its a shame that I may not be able to experience your hard work and quality content! My nitpicks aren't meant are rude or demanding, just my views on how the game could be change to allow for a wider audience, myself included hint hint lol, to enjoy your work. Sorry for another wall of text, lol!
Most of the things you don't want, are clearly a part of the game by default. The dev even said that humiliation and cuckoldry is one unavoidable aspect of the game, while not being the main thing, it will still be a part of the game as it is intended. So honestly, if those things don't get your wheel greased, then I honestly suggest you find another game. It's obvious how big a role these will play based on what's already released, so asking for those things to be removed would essentially be the equivalent of you asking the dev to make a totally new game. And I don't blame the dev for when they shoot that idea down. As it is this is already an incredibly ambitious game, so to make a complete alternative reality of the game on top of that, would basically doom the project to get abandoned before it even had a chance to breathe.
I did not think that you were rude or overly critical NOTAVPfan, and I do not mind long messages to explain a point or to show your thinking. In fact, I actually like reading problems when they are given context, as I can't address the problem if I have no idea why a person dislikes something I have done.

I am trying to branch the story but I know that there will be scenes that are unavoidable. Even if I remove Riley as a sexual interest the story is too based around Voyeur scenes so that the player learns information. Half the town is so corrupt that prostitution is everywhere in the poor neighbourhoods and I am writing that it can't be avoided.
It also has a fair bit of NTR (now that I understand it better).

AllieButtDK is 100% right when she says that to truly fix it I would be just writing another game.

You were right NOTAVPfan when you said that I have promissed multiple paths and did not note that there was NTR content.

To clarify what I meant with the questionaire. I know it does contain MxM content, but the purpose that I was refering to is that the Questionaire and the Ember Institute is not there to make the MC like men or force that content. The answers were meant to represent that the test is for women, not sissies.
I thought up the dream to make the MC uncomfortable so that it would trigger the nightmare, unless they are sub enough to submit to it.

Sissy and transgender paths are different as the one is more related to crossdressing while the other is wanting to physically be female. Feminization effects the player and the more feminine the more he is able to unlock body transformations to become physically more female.

Sissy is often about humiliation and is seperate from crossdressing in that regard but both are about wearing female clothes and acting female without needing to change their body. A Sissy can change their body type but does not need to.

On the issue of setting tags to avoid content. While I can fix what I have and put up warnings, I can't avoid like NTR and Voyeur and still tell the story I want to tell. Their will be content that players will have a problem with.

I might lose players but it is too ambitious to try to build a game that everyone will like. I care about the game and do not want to burn myself out. I hope that I will not get a lot of hate for this decision.
 

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I'm really liking the UI, as others have mentioned before, but the writing is even more interesting. In many text based games, my eyes just glaze over when there's too much text to work through on a given page. In this game, it's nicely broken up by images and paragraphs. Kudos to you, GlitchDoll!

I'm also in favor of adding an option that allows you to enable spoilerish tags below each chosen candidate and route when playing, so the player can plan for or avoid certain fetishes they may or may not be interested in.

There's also a faint hope that we'll perhaps for the first time in history (hyperbole ofc), we'll get to see a MtF trans MC that isn't a doormat. Being female does not mean you're required to be submissive, but many games treat this as the default for any trans character. I'd love more top and/or dominant behavior even when transitioning. Better yet, give them the initiative to actively seek feminization/transition as a way to improve themselves.

Also, can the female MC meet Bailey Jay in the hostel? I was so let down that we instead get some random dude. More power to lesbians who love trans!

P.S.: Just remembered another game I played, A Guide to being Assertive, where the MC is transitioning and becoming more confident as a result, not less. Clearly it has been done before!
100% agree. Being female or transgender does not equal being a doormat and is the reason I added the Dom paths.

I like an Alpha Male in a game, and I like having a character that is an arogant prick. They make interesting characters. But I do not want Female players to naturally be submissive to them just because they are female.

I am a sub and will admit that while I have experience as a Dom it clearly doesn't come naturally to me and the Dom content suffers. But it is important to me as I like the choice between play styles. I played The Company several times because I had the option of being a different type of player.

For transgender players, I want the MC to have a fear when transitioning but going through that also should make the MC more confident and assertive. It has to, to make the player go out in public and not be timid around others. One of the reasons confidence and dominance are seperate is that one does not equal the other.

You will meet Bailey Jay but not at the Hostel. She is there to guide a Transgender player where as the Rupert is there for a different reason.

Also Thank you ever so much for the kind comment :D :D :D
 
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Godogma

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TheFamilyDog is the closest to what I was trying to achieve with Melissa and Riley.
Then I'm sorry, but you failed.

I did in fact want her to be caring which is why she gives him the $100. She shows concern about him not having a car and concern about not having a place to sleep.
She then drags you out "shopping" and abandons you without another word edgewise.

You are correct however that her she does not come over that way because her scenes are incosistant on whether she cares. I think I missed the mark somewhere with her (a lot because of the slutty atmosphere I think) and need to emphasise that she actually cares but is asking the MC to stay out of the house.
She definitely needs work to get a better reaction from me; I couldn't see why the MC wasn't just living in the damn hostel and scraping money together.

I want the MC to be unsure why Riley acts the way that she does. Her being slutty is part of the plot and I do want her to be closer to the MC. I have been trying to increase that protective feeling the MC should have for her without losing the fact that her teasing annoys or angers him/her.
Since she doesn't seem to want to put out for the MC but fucks around with everyone else - not going to get very far without some revision. 'Oh it's fine teasing you, you don't matter' is exactly how she comes across (to me at least).

I think Melissa can be fixed by having her state that the reason the male MC can't stay here is that if Ava found out that he was there then she might ask him to leave. I am hoping I have established that Ava is not a fan of men around her daughters, let alone in a sexual enviroment like a party.
It's going to take more than that I'm afraid; in my playthrough I didn't actually feel inclined to be around ANY of the characters that were supposed to be prospective love interests. They were either total bitches and fucking around or just fucking around and didn't seem to give a shit.

I won't even go into Ava because frankly I just wanted to tell her to go get fucked; I can't see redeeming her in my eyes (at least without a lot of work and some effort on her part at actually being a sympathetic character) as it currently sits she comes across a major bitch not a sympathetic character and if she behaves like that to her husband I can see why he sleeps around.

You say he was put in as an explanation for her behavior... Unfortunately two sides to every story and since she isn't sympathetic? I'm more inclined to say he has a reason to look elsewhere for affection and probably stays married to her for the kids sake.

I am a sub and will admit that while I have experience as a Dom it clearly doesn't come naturally to me and the Dom content suffers. But it is important to me as I like the choice between play styles. I played The Company several times because I had the option of being a different type of player.
I'd recommend bringing in someone to help with it if I were you; I only played the one path and found myself questioning why I bothered before I reminded myself that the game is in a very early state and the UI is quite good.

I played the game because the blurb said choice matters, but I haven't seen a whole lot of that on the Dom Male path... but it also seems to be the path with the least content so I can't say much about the rest of the game.

That and characterization is the main failing right now.

The game other than that doesn't have much to attract a player that isn't there for crossdressing/sissification and humiliation - those I was constantly bombarded with.

Sorry to be so critical, I can definitely see a good foundation for a game under everything and the UI is quite good but I'll have to see several more updates to know whether it's for me or not.

On a completely different topic -

My deepest sympathies about your mom (fuck cancer - I've had an uncle and two aunts die to various forms of it and definitely didn't feel right liking the earlier post about it). Things do get better though, try to remember the good times and not focus on the bad ones.
 
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100% agree. Being female or transgender does not equal being a doormat and is the reason I added the Dom paths.

I like an Alpha Male in a game, and I like having a character that is an arogant prick. They make interesting characters. But I do not want Female players to naturally be submissive to them just because they are female.

I am a sub and will admit that while I have experience as a Dom it clearly doesn't come naturally to me and the Dom content suffers. But it is important to me as I like the choice between play styles. I played The Company several times because I had the option of being a different type of player.

For transgender players, I want the MC to have a fear when transitioning but going through that also should make the MC more confident and assertive. It has to, to make the player go out in public and not be timid around others. One of the reasons confidence and dominance are seperate is that one does not equal the other.

You will meet Bailey Jay but not at the Hostel. She is there to guide a Transgender player where as the Rupert is there for a different reason.

Also Thank you ever so much for the kind comment :D :D :D
Of course, the best writing advice I've ever received was to write what you know. And if you don't know, make that experience yourself (if possible). Or go into speculative fiction :D

At any rate, I'm looking forward to how the story progresses, what is available so far is very heartening. Bon courage!
 

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I just played the game a bit. As I understand things like sissification and ntr are optional. It's very good that you do this in games of this type. The pictures are pretty good quality, the story seems good too. I wish you good luck. I look forward to it.
 
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