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playboydx

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Very good start for the most part. Hoping for more player choices (dialogue options) in the future, that's the one thing I felt was lacking.
 

MisterMaya

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Need quiz answers. Can't use walkthrough. Android user here
Can't understand why no skip option there. Pdf walkthrough not available too

There you have it :)

1 Chandler, Monica, Joey, Rachel, Ross, Pheobe
2 Because she's gay
3 Leslie, Frank Jr Jr and Chandler
4 He works in statistical analysis and data reconfiguration
5 Days of our lives
6 Judy and Jack
7 Brad Pitt
8 Unagi
9 French
10 Kappa Kappa Delta
 

lkta

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proofread script (unofficially)

extract .rar into \game folder

(hope i got all the grammar , spelling errors)
There is still a bunch of stuff from a very quick scan including missing words & spelling mistakes and a few others where it just doesn't read very well like the "what profession are you in" question which would probably be something more like "what do you do" when the other person has just mentioned their work . ( have only really looked upto the coffee shop and for a couple of other bits i noticed during my playthroughs, No real interest in going through the whole script as it is nothing really to do with me anyway)

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MisterMaya

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Just finished my first play through and gotta say I really enjoyed this VN. Here is my conspiracy theory prediction (followed by actual thoughts of the game)

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Now for the real thoughts... first, lady you met on the street... what happened with that? I sent her a text message asking her out for dinner and I know she didn't respond immediately, but a follow up saying that "Guess she wasn't interested" the next day or something along those lines would be give closure. I kept waiting to have dinner with her.

Second, why did you change Valentines hair?!?!? I was not interested in her until you changed her hair to brown. I have a thing for brunettes. Now she looks all cute and adorable. GRRRRR! Why are you making this harder?

Third, I really like your concept that you only get to have one girl. I know a lot of people like the harem thing (go play WVM for the most idealized harem you can ever experience.) I also hate it, but that's only because I'll have to make a choice. I was going back and forth between Alexa and Laura, until the change in Valentine, and then you made her more likeable. GRRRRR. Why did you do that?

Anyways, great game, the characterization is awesome. I am getting the feels for these characters. (OH! Idea, I'll send you a PM with it...) And some of your background action is funny too! I like it.

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Definitely a great start on this project.
Maybe I changed them especially for you :sneaky:

All kidding aside, it was because even though I liked her hair they were a pain in the ass to work with.
Feel free to send me a PM and thank you for your kind review !
 

Tor7

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YES! There's a couple that meet at the coffee shop and then go off together. Another scene where I believe it's a guy watching porn on his laptop at the coffee shop.

Either I've been woefully unobservant in the other games I've played, or this is the first game I've encountered that has done things like this. I love it.
 

Boehser Onkel

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YES! There's a couple that meet at the coffee shop and then go off together. Another scene where I believe it's a guy watching porn on his laptop at the coffee shop.

Either I've been woefully unobservant in the other games I've played, or this is the first game I've encountered that has done things like this. I love it.
a few have something like this -
i remember a priest in a game with 2 girls always on background doing weird things for example , to bad cant remember the name right now ...
 
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Boehser Onkel

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I've made a Walkthrough/gallery mod for this game

It adds a "gallery" button to the main menu allowing to replay scenes and highlights green/add hints to dialogue chocies

Download : MEGA
proofread script (unofficially)

extract .rar into \game folder

(hope i got all the grammar , spelling errors)

edit :: final from my side for this content
scrappy
 
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dolfe67

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a few have something like this -
i remember a priest in a game with 2 girls always on background doing weird things for example , to bad cant remember the name right now ...
Yeah not a lot of games have something like that in the background. BTW the name of the game is Banking on Bella

On another note, 3.28GB for a 0.2 is a lot. I bet images could be reduced by converting them to webp
 

Hildegardt

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Do you guys prefer winning or losing Valentine's quiz? I went with winning, but the questions the MC could ask her weren't that interesting imo. Maybe it opens up other options, but it seems like Valentine's arc is going in a very different direction shortly after.
 

Tor7

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Do you guys prefer winning or losing Valentine's quiz? I went with winning, but the questions the MC could ask her weren't that interesting imo. Maybe it opens up other options, but it seems like Valentine's arc is going in a very different direction shortly after.
I didn't try losing. I knew all but 1 question. I'll have to try it and see what happens.

However, if you are getting the questions, then you made the wrong choices earlier. The bet I got was a for a nude picture of her. Which she takes and shows it to the MC.
 

kartolas

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Really great stuff. After reading the overview, I downloaded it and just left it there not thinking much about it. What a surprise!
The only thing I have to point out is the MCs clothing being the same everyday and that's really a small thing, I just don't like the color. :D
I hope it doesn't go too dark with the crime/mafia stuff and that it won't become a big part of the story.
From what I've seen, congratulations are in order. Definitely a 5 star start as all reviews say.

Thank you and good luck.
 
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Aleksander K

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Well in my definition of femdom it is not. But maybe that's just me. No problem still like your game very much well done
Same. Calling this a femdom is a stretch for me. For some may be, but it's in very very lite form. So if this path won't be developed any further the tag should be dropped.
The game itself looks good.(y)
 

Avaron1974

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I guess i'm missing something about how some people think but this guy first meets a girl he's talking to about a house share and straight away starts talking about her divorce and calls it "appropriate"...

Yes, for someone that's known her for years, not for someone that only just met her.

Holy shit that's a big no no no. How did she not slap him and walk out?

Talk about getting too personal far too soon. Never talk about a girls relationship issues unless it's a date and she brings it up, it's none of your business.

I know it shouldn't be an issue but it makes me think the Mc is a bit of an idiot with absolutely no clue how to talk to people. I mean, if i'd have been in her place I would have walked out. That's way too personal for a first meeting.
 

FAP369ZONE

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Just finished playing the whole v0.2 update, and dayum this one is a real gem! I enjoyed every minute of it :giggle:.

I mean great story, great characters, great EGame overall tbh... if dev will optimize the images with more size friendlier format like WebP and a bit more meaningful choices, this one has huge potential! So much so that its rated quite high on my personal list even now but its too early talk about that...

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Also great to see so many "Easter eggs" and hints from other great EGames (its actually a great way to show respect imo)... i see you're a man of culture as well. :WeSmart:

Congratz, MisterMaya you have a great Erotic Game here, looking forward to future updates and good luck (y).
 
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Avaron1974

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Calls Exterminator - "I'll leave the keys on the counter so you can close up when you are done".....

"Here strange person I don't know, have the keys to my bar that you could totally copy to rob it later on because this is a totally logical and rational thing to do".
 
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