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MisterMaya

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I am curious if in the future..

Can we be with Paige in the relationship?
I feel something that when she finds out about what her husband is planning and who he is working with, she will have to choose the sides.
Either be with that asshole or help the MC. She is Laura's best friend so she would probably be able to help somehow and would probably stay with MC and her best friend.

And when she chooses the side of MC and Laura, maybe she will feel something for the MC.

Of course, these are just my thoughts.. I might be wrong. But that's how it occurred to me, hah.


An interesting story is getting ready with Paige/Laura. :) Looking forward to the next update.
I can't spoil the game so I will use a joker on this one sorry :cool:
 

MisterMaya

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The story of the game is very good and all the main characters are lovely buut the sex scenes were so bad I don't know, all I see is MC's dick. And Lucy's gift scene, MC was less than happy, as if he had received a small gift from Lucy. If someone surprised me like Lucy, I'd probably cry with joy.
I really struggled to make those, I feel like I can only improve, I'll try different angles for the next updates, and hope I'll get better :)
 

Byczer

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Well in my definition of femdom it is not. But maybe that's just me. No problem still like your game very much well done
well this is very very light femdom xd Most people won't even take it as femdom, but this is a start.
 
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Tor7

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Just finished my first play through and gotta say I really enjoyed this VN. Here is my conspiracy theory prediction (followed by actual thoughts of the game)

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Now for the real thoughts... first, lady you met on the street... what happened with that? I sent her a text message asking her out for dinner and I know she didn't respond immediately, but a follow up saying that "Guess she wasn't interested" the next day or something along those lines would be give closure. I kept waiting to have dinner with her.

Second, why did you change Valentines hair?!?!? I was not interested in her until you changed her hair to brown. I have a thing for brunettes. Now she looks all cute and adorable. GRRRRR! Why are you making this harder?

Third, I really like your concept that you only get to have one girl. I know a lot of people like the harem thing (go play WVM for the most idealized harem you can ever experience.) I also hate it, but that's only because I'll have to make a choice. I was going back and forth between Alexa and Laura, until the change in Valentine, and then you made her more likeable. GRRRRR. Why did you do that?

Anyways, great game, the characterization is awesome. I am getting the feels for these characters. (OH! Idea, I'll send you a PM with it...) And some of your background action is funny too! I like it.

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Definitely a great start on this project.
 

randi99

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Thank you so much !

Well it's not so much a Harem kinda game, I mean yes, you will get involved with all those women, but in the end, you'll end up with one of them only !
The game is made so that through the two first updates you get close to the characters, and after that, every decesion you'll take will either raise or lower a score you have with each woman.
The one you end up with the most points will be the one MC is talking about in the first renders.

Can't say too much because I don't want to spoil it, but if you ended up having a certain ending with alexa in this 0.2, you already lost some points and it'll be harder to make her be the love of MC's life :)

Anyway, I'm really glad you liked it thank you for your comment.
Then pls remove harem tag because that is not a harem its confusing
im bit disappointed that there will not be harem ending because all the girls are good
 

lkta

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Now for the real thoughts... first, lady you met on the street... what happened with that? I sent her a text message asking her out for dinner and I know she didn't respond immediately, but a follow up saying that "Guess she wasn't interested" the next day or something along those lines would be give closure. I kept waiting to have dinner with her.
Send her a photo of your cock, She isn't interested in talking/dinner
 

Qmil679

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Now for the real thoughts... first, lady you met on the street... what happened with that? I sent her a text message asking her out for dinner and I know she didn't respond immediately, but a follow up saying that "Guess she wasn't interested" the next day or something along those lines would be give closure. I kept waiting to have dinner with her.
Spoiler: she doesn't want to form a relationship because she's still traveling and she doesn't have time for it.

Just send her a picture *wink* and she will be yours for.. one night. ;)
 
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MisterMaya

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Just finished my first play through and gotta say I really enjoyed this VN. Here is my conspiracy theory prediction (followed by actual thoughts of the game)

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Now for the real thoughts... first, lady you met on the street... what happened with that? I sent her a text message asking her out for dinner and I know she didn't respond immediately, but a follow up saying that "Guess she wasn't interested" the next day or something along those lines would be give closure. I kept waiting to have dinner with her.

Second, why did you change Valentines hair?!?!? I was not interested in her until you changed her hair to brown. I have a thing for brunettes. Now she looks all cute and adorable. GRRRRR! Why are you making this harder?

Third, I really like your concept that you only get to have one girl. I know a lot of people like the harem thing (go play WVM for the most idealized harem you can ever experience.) I also hate it, but that's only because I'll have to make a choice. I was going back and forth between Alexa and Laura, until the change in Valentine, and then you made her more likeable. GRRRRR. Why did you do that?

Anyways, great game, the characterization is awesome. I am getting the feels for these characters. (OH! Idea, I'll send you a PM with it...) And some of your background action is funny too! I like it.

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Definitely a great start on this project.
Thanks a lot for your review !

I try to avoid gramar spelling mistakes but it's not that easy... thanks for telling me !
Also, you're right I should have given closure when making the wrong decision.

I don't want my game to be one where choices don't matter and MC fucksevery girls he meets.
I'm glad people actually like that.

I fixed the bug about the missing image, andI will release a patch soon to correct the size of the project.
 

MisterMaya

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Point system is kinda confusing
It is for now, because I want to prevent sneaky people to figure out how it works :sneaky:
So you may look in the script files but you won't find a lot, the main thing is in my head for now, and will be added towards the last version. But don't worry, the choices you make now do matter.
 
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