>"I'm self-conscious about my unrealistically plastic pornstar tier bodytype."
No...
This trope doesn't work because you deprived yourself of it.
Every dev on F95Zone has forfeited that trope apart for a very tiny minority that went pretty hard in the opposite direction.
And this is despite it being a quintessential trope.
The mom has the typical hourglass, no midriff, tall milf clown car body type.
It's the most common of the only 3 body types that appear here.
It's not modest, so I'm not immersed, so I'm not into it.
And the trope makes no sense.
I'm also going to bet that if you place her next to her 18 year old daughters, they are about half a foot or more shorter than her.
And I'll probably be right because it's always this way.
The social interactions are often pretty good, though.
Much of the MC's thoughts, dialogue, and actions are the opposite of my own, so it's a bit alienating at times.
The images are also very good.
You added the NTR miasma.
However, you acknowledge it and address it through the MC: which is interesting.
The "NTR scene" isn't NTR.
It's a caricature of NTR with obligatory Jamal's 2 foot bong cock.
MC is having a nightmare about his mom due to the situation (miasma); but it isn't necessarily happening.
The miasma is NTR, but it doesn't seeeeem like you're following through with it.
But you are teasing, which is what the NTR miasma in a proper NTR game functionally does, so it does qualify as NTR.
The NTR miasma is what makes an NTR game with options still incompatible with non-NTR fans (excluding canon).
It causes flame wars here.
But you're not hiding it, which is important.
But you DID make her a former model who is in fashion (both being rare and having sexual connotation) going out in that dress that she made to be like that for... reasons.
And that she used to use her 'womanly charms'.
And was in nude photoshoots.
That's her and her history.
It's the wild past trope: which tends to explain away a mature character's physique or easiness.
You did that.
You didn't have to do that, but you did.
You didn't make her a waitress that works at a diner serving grandpappy Joe his tea: which is a much more common vocation.
She isn't even apparently designing normal clothing.
That's... how you wrote it, having absolute freedom about what to write.
You are NTR teasing.
But you're not hiding it.
But these decisions are a turn off for me, so it doesn't interest me.
Some of her behavior suggests prudence, though, which is a turn on for me.
I easily drop LIs who suggest that kind of trouble: which often translates to dropping the material.
>But you're just being weak, anon.
>Where's your determination?
No; I'm savvy.
Writers write things in certain ways; and psychological abuse is entirely possible.
So keep that in mind when an NTR miasma is present.
I'm not sure what the options are for.
Probably just the demo being incomplete?
I wouldn't have kissed that girl or thought those thoughts or fucked that other girl.
Harems and promiscuity turn me off, so this doesn't appeal to me.
Options do provide some kink as well as cater to the variation in people's interests.
So options are very useful, but they present some more workload.
Kinetic Novels are in much less demand, though.
The amount of content in this demo is pretty impressive.
That's a good amount of work.
Given what I'm seeing here:
Due to my tastes, I would not put this on my Watchlist.
You're capable of making something high quality, but it doesn't seem to be my style.
Most of the mother/son content in the industry isn't my style, either, though.
It's all so much of the same 'milfs must be improbable or anatomically inaccurate tall hourglasses, or 18 year old spinners, in order to be attractive'; and I'm rarely ever immersed by this or the writers' decisions.
>"I'm self-conscious about my body..."
No... please.
This trope only belongs to those who deserve it.
However, if I see this pop in the catalogue, I would have at least enough interest to investigate what's happening with it.
I don't think I'm your target.
It's impossible to make everyone your target.
You're the dev, so you're the executive.
Feedback or insight can be useful, but the way you make your game is ultimately your decision.
Good luck.
