VN Ren'Py The Five Star Stories [v0.8.5] [The Narrator]

[th3n]

This is terrible, the MC is a cuck. He is encouraging his sister to suck another guy off, and gets hot when she talks about her boyfriend fingering her.

The mom does state offhandedly that she's a former whore, as well as a porn actress. MC's dad was apparently one of the porn actors mom worked with in the past, and that's how they met. The aunt states that she's sleeping with several men currently, and is talking to one on the phone when she arrives at her house. If you have an OnlyFans account with sexually explicit material, you are a sex worker. Solo or not, it's still prostitution, or at the very least they're actively doing porn.

In my head there is no chapter 3. I'm gonna call it done after chapter 2. Incest LIs should never be prostitutes. It's a very unpopular move, for good reason. By the end of chapter 2, sister got deflowered by her brother, and mom and sis hooked up. Hooker aunt didn't exist yet, and mom wasn't a prostitute. Chapter 3 did nothing for me but ruin 2 main LIs. It started out bad with aunt complaining that she's constantly taking random guy's tiny dicks, then escalated to her AND mom being full-on sex workers.

Dev, write the game you wanna write, but know that from chapter 3 on, you're chasing away the bulk of your target audience. Maybe make aunt and mom's prostitution optional via a choice at least? Let us choose if we're okay with that? It's not exactly relevant to the story at all. If you remove any mention of them being sex workers, the story doesn't change in the slightest. Rather, it just makes the characters more attractive and appealing. /rant

Well, what a waste. Good luck with your game dev, im out.

 

[John 13]

Interesting game

 

[The Narrator]

Interesting game

And you haven't seen the next part yet.

 

[King Slayer100]

The mom does state offhandedly that she's a former whore, as well as a porn actress. MC's dad was apparently one of the porn actors mom worked with in the past, and that's how they met. The aunt states that she's sleeping with several men currently, and is talking to one on the phone when she arrives at her house. If you have an OnlyFans account with sexually explicit material, you are a sex worker. Solo or not, it's still prostitution, or at the very least they're actively doing porn.

Daam looking at the tags and overview you never thought of this kind character background. And in Dev's note he said this is a good story,i don't want to imagine what a not good story would have looked liked .

Thanks for the warning though. I ain't playing any whore simulator .

 

[The Narrator]

Daam looking at the tags and overview you never thought of this kind character background. And in Dev's note he said this is a good story,i don't want to imagine what a not good story would have looked liked .

Thanks for the warning though. I ain't playing any whore simulator .

No problem. There are plenty of games to suit your tastes. Good luck!

 

[Burgh917]

Petite women are awesome, petite little sisters are the icing on the cake for me . Look forward to trying it.

 

[King Slayer100]

No problem. There are plenty of games to suit your tastes. Good luck!

Yeah . Maybe your next project will be my kind of game . Goodluck with this one

 

[DB Cooper]

It's very funny to me that this game is rated 4 stars.

 

[The Narrator]

Yeah . Maybe your next project will be my kind of game . Goodluck with this one

Yes, maybe. Thanks for your response!

 

[The Narrator]

It's very funny to me that this game is rated 4 stars.

Why?

 

[Daddy-S]

Hmmm, the version I have is larger and has a bonus gallery. Is the extra content just removed for this web site?

v0.4
- 167 + 68 (Extra Patch Content) New Renders
- 3 + 2 (Extra Patch Content) New animations
- New option:
- Change characters name in MOD
- New Background music
- Replay Galery
- Change songs directly from MOD
- Extra content

Edit: Seems to be some shota content with mc in the past probably not for this site but its out there if anyone is interested. Pretty sure this one is not for me just letting people know.

Spoiler: extra

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[kaczy091]

I suggest adding prostitution to the tags.

 

[The Narrator]

Yeah . Maybe your next project will be my kind of game . Goodluck with this one

I would like to mention that the girls in this game didn't fuck anyone other than your character. They just had a little business before and you just found out, that's all.
When I will add NTR content (I don't think Yuri is NTR), I will add a button to avoid it.
Also, in this version, you can choose your path so you don't have to watch unwanted content.

 

[Royco35]

Just an FYI - the file via the Workupload link may contain a virus. McAfee Total Protection quarantined it but the file downloaded via Mega seems okay.

Edit - appears to have been a false positive.

 

[Bloodguard]

Reads about the "patch" in the overview. Looks for a patch on the OP. Where is it?

 

[JokerOfTorment]

I would like to mention that the girls in this game didn't fuck anyone other than your character. They just had a little business before and you just found out, that's all.
When I will add NTR content (I don't think Yuri is NTR), I will add a button to avoid it.
Also, in this version, you can choose your path so you don't have to watch unwanted content.

Don't think adding in ntr with other males involved would be a good idea unless it's just all female stuff with mc involved at this point since the mom and aunt doing sex work is already a big turn-off for a lot of people it seems, and they are leaving it seems so probably don't want to chase off even more people.

 

[whity112]

Don't think adding in ntr with other males involved would be a good idea unless it's just all female stuff with mc involved at this point since the mom and aunt doing sex work is already a big turn-off for a lot of people it seems, and they are leaving it seems so probably don't want to chase off even more people.

seems it will have ntr he has a patreon poll it has 7 votes lol how stupid. its why we have planed tags

 

[MrBenny]

I would like to mention that the girls in this game didn't fuck anyone other than your character. They just had a little business before and you just found out, that's all.
When I will add NTR content (I don't think Yuri is NTR), I will add a button to avoid it.
Also, in this version, you can choose your path so you don't have to watch unwanted content.

Hmm...I would suggest you might consider adding future tags and more to your gene section (and maybe add how some content will be handled like the example included below (gene section...player avoided = never happens, skipped (community disliked) = acts happen, but off camera)...if your going to later add any NTR or the other controversial content to your project. (Controversial content = NTR, sharing, lesbian)

History has shown from many other new titles in the past, that fans have and will abandoned a project because NTR was suddenly added without players knowing it was going to be planned content (even if an avoidable switch is added, it can still cause head-aches for you...just some friendly advice so you can be aware of other dev's past mistakes).

And if your going to include an NTR switch (great idea) that will separate that content, try and ensure there will be no remnants of that content bleeding through your switched off content...or your title will take a huge hit in the forms (it will become a shit show), and could also cause a huge chunk of your potential fans dropping interest in your project. (The larger the fan base, the better chance for a dev to find financial backers from the said mentioned fan base pools.)

Here is an example of a well done gene section from a new dev's successful title (It's from a harem project... This type of format will be useful to answer many of the repeated questions constantly posted in the forms. )

Spoiler: Example of a good gene section...

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I also suggest in large yellow text on your main page, that the NTR content can be switched off (made avoidable, and not just skipped)...if and when you decide to add it to your project. This will benefit you big time. Like other titles use this method to say their work will never have NTR content, or other need to know important messages.

Best Regards.

 

[JokerOfTorment]

seems it will have ntr he has a patreon poll it has 7 votes lol how stupid. its why we have planed tags

If it does make it into the game then I'll just move on to other stuff since so far the only issue I have like a lot here is the sex working stuff but the ntr stuff will make things worse avoidable or not as I rather the development time be focused on other things rather than a path a small majority of want while the large majority don't want, and it's something I rather not even know a loved one is or might gunna be boning someone else when presented with the option to avoid it.

 

[DB Cooper]

Why?

>The Five Star Stories
>rated 4 stars

If you can't see the humor in that, I can't help you.