VN Ren'Py Abandoned The Fog [v1.1.0] [-Taz-]

[Beast Within]

thanks !
What's wrong with eyes ?
I'm using Cycles.

eyelids, eyebrows and the eyes themselves.

hopefully I dont seem judgmental or anything, its not my intention.

the eyes themselves seem to lack, "life" for lack of a beter word. perhaps the lighting, I cant be sure. also I am not sure if the model itself is custom you created in blender or someother figure from softwares like daz for example.

daz usually, with the official bridge or the diffeomorphic addon, offers all the texture maps you will need and you can achieve pretty good results with, again, a bit of tweecking.

for example, this is your render compared to my attempt with a transfered daz character.

Spoiler: example

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

 

[Sir Anal]

Your impression is probably spot-on, given that I’ve written several novels in the past. That said, another player found the prologue too short.

My vision might differ from most VNs I’ve played. I truly want to prioritize the story; the adult content is a bonus I’ll include as often as possible, but only when it feels organic.

I’ve noted your remark about the language switching—I’ll fix that, sorry about that. Ren’Py is simple yet tricky; I’m still getting familiar with the code and learning as I go.

I create all my renders in Blender. That’s where I’ve modeled the entire environment. I use a few other (free) software tools to help with character modeling, then finalize details in Blender—but I don’t use MakeHuman. I handle clothing and textures entirely myself.

Thank you for your encouraging feedback—it genuinely means a lot! I hope you’ll stick around; I believe it’ll be worth your time, and it’s not overly long.

(je crois qu'il est interdit de parler dans une autre langue que l'anglais ici)

I've finished the prologue.
Yes, it's really well written. It's just that ‘intéressante comme vision’ seems a bit odd, I'd have put ‘c'est une vision des choses intéressante’ or something along those lines, seems more French to me... But, ofc, you're the writer!
As for languages, according to the rules here, you can write in any language you like, you just have to provide the English translation. But it depends on the Mod, I've already been banned some years ago, because I put French before English (the picth must have been too long and English too far away, I suppose).
Yes, the language problem needs to be corrected ASAP, because it leads to a lot of error messages afterwards, such as

Spoiler: Error

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Anyway, good luck and all the best to you.

 

[thefattestcat]

I’m carefully considering all the feedback. I’m exploring the idea of introducing a new character—his brother—who could naturally replace the current protagonist. You’d play as him later in the story, and he’d bring a fresh dynamic with his more cheerful and responsible personality. I actually finished modeling him this morning.

I’ve noticed several people are put off by the current protagonist’s design, even though I’ve seen plenty of popular games with unconventional-looking main characters. Still, I truly appreciate you taking the time to share your thoughts.

now i feel bad for poking fun

since the game is so early in development, why not just replace current MC model? consider his design a prototype.

 

[SR388]

Mc model is fine, for me it's just the lips and skin that are too smooth i guess ? That applied to the girl too. Maybe just more texture to give it relief ?
As french myself i like the tone and humor of the game, keep up the good work.

 

[vs2011xyz]

The Fog [v1.0] [-Taz-] - Android Port

Android Port
- Added LNmod for ease of use.
- Touch Gestures Available
- Game Save Location is Mod-Friendly!

Save or Mod Location: Documents/LustyNovel/lustynovel.thefog.apk

PIXELDRAIN - WORKUPLOAD - DRIVE

This unofficial port/version is not released by the developer, download at your own risk.
You can join my

You must be registered to see the links

server for more games and other content.

Spoiler: LNmod

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Spoiler: Touch gestures

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Spoiler: Compress Quality

You don't have permission to view the spoiler content. Log in or register now.

Thanks

 

[Hebnec]

Alright, review time. Finnished the prologue and it seems exciting. I was quite annoyed with the long whistling, but so was she. Definately want to see this finnished

 

[Titablue]

Thank for sharing

 

[Titablue]

Wow, your game is impressive. I really like all the possible choices, especially between the two characters. I've tried all the paths and I feel like it's going to be a very good game. I really like your writing; it's both intriguing and funny (the main character made me laugh more than once). I can't wait to play the next update. There are a lot of animations; I wasn't expecting that. It's really cool and exciting We get to the sex scenes quickly, without it being unrealistic. The characters and the environment are great too. Honestly, I don't see any flaws except that I'll have to wait for the sequel.
Thank you so much for this prologue!

 

[-Taz-]

Wow, your game is impressive. I really like all the possible choices, especially between the two characters. I've tried all the paths and I feel like it's going to be a very good game. I really like your writing; it's both intriguing and funny (the main character made me laugh more than once). I can't wait to play the next update. There are a lot of animations; I wasn't expecting that. It's really cool and exciting We get to the sex scenes quickly, without it being unrealistic. The characters and the environment are great too. Honestly, I don't see any flaws except that I'll have to wait for the sequel.
Thank you so much for this prologue!

Welcome and thanks !
Don't hesitate to join my discord if you want news on the game's progress.

 

[Hawkeye3d]

I promise you there is no treachery.
This is my first game and unlike many developers, I model and texture my own characters. I did my best but I'm sorry if you find it "weird".
He may be ugly to you, but he's got money. And that's more important than looks.

"There seems to be a failure of communication here"
JK
Weird is not bad in all western and a lot of far eastern societies. In fact is a lot it is a compliment.
By way, I would like to give you for your first attempt. Just really build thick skin and you will be great at this.
Good luck

 

[Bayadend]

Imma gonna try it.

 

[Wolfn]

Good job - nice animation

 

[-Taz-]

Good job - nice animation

Thank you very much for testing my game

If you want to see the progress, you can join us on Discord. I'm not done creating everything yet; it's taking a long time, but I've already finished the first animation for the next update, and I'm about to start rendering. Once everything is modeled and textured, everything will go faster.
Have a great day!

 

[Takkertje]

Thank you very much for testing my game

If you want to see the progress, you can join us on Discord. I'm not done creating everything yet; it's taking a long time, but I've already finished the first animation for the next update, and I'm about to start rendering. Once everything is modeled and textured, everything will go faster.
Have a great day!

How are things hangin'?

 

[Nimbus Commando]

So will this come with the ending of blowing are own brains out. lol

 

[Ragnar]

Interesting, let's hope payment processors don't see the rape content

 

[SPAR97AUNfsgytb]

Associations with the book of Stephen King - "The Mist".

 

[jgelling]

I'm sure the reference is to "The Mist", but my mind when right to "The Secret World" MMO (an unappreciated classic) here.

 

[resgar]

Aand, no. I dont like when somebody present me that kind of choice. Too much "irony". Deleted after this. I wont even go into quality of ai slop here and first meeted blurred ugly trap. 1/10

 

[lenny007]

At first, I didnt want to download this game - too small, too early.I dont like to waste time on small demo projects. But then I saw a "rape" tag and changed my mind