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Ohvidente

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I'm almost buying the game just to criticize this dev on Steam, man, the guy launches the game without doing a review, because all the translations are bugged with the exception of English and Russian, I had to do a manual translation to play! Not to mention this MC with an ass face, without any expression. I get mad about something like this, the guy makes one model more beautiful than the other and in mc he does a ctrl c and ctrl v like other AVN. For me it's two things, laziness and lack of responsibility.

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Donnie Brasco

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I'm almost buying the game just to criticize this dev on Steam, man, the guy launches the game without doing a review, because all the translations are bugged with the exception of English and Russian, I had to do a manual translation to play! Not to mention this MC with an ass face, without any expression. I get mad about something like this, the guy makes one model more beautiful than the other and in mc he does a ctrl c and ctrl v like other AVN. For me it's two things, laziness and lack of responsibility.

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I haven't experienced any of that. I think I noticed once that it said he instead of she. And as for the game. You have the right to complain about what you bought. It seems that you haven't, since you write that you almost bought it. I don't see any problem there.
 
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Ohvidente

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I haven't experienced any of that. I think I noticed once that it said he instead of she. And as for the game. You have the right to complain about what you bought. It seems that you haven't, since you write that you almost bought it. I don't see any problem there.

If you played in English, no bugs actually appeared, I'm talking about other languages such as Portuguese, Italian...
 

Donnie Brasco

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I may or may not be on the right track. Until a week ago, I had never even heard of the game. But who can follow all that. So many different forms of occupation, and so little time. Anyway here's a lackluster attempt on my part to create Helen even though Haley is definitely my number one. There is a reason why Helen and not Haley then, but currently irrelevant for now. I didn't find an adequate hairstyle from the game, but that's why I chose one similar to the one in the side story. There are still lot of details to be refined, but what is there is. Attempt number 1.

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KGpride5

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I may or may not be on the right track. Until a week ago, I had never even heard of the game. But who can follow all that. So many different forms of occupation, and so little time. Anyway here's a lackluster attempt on my part to create Helen even though Haley is definitely my number one. There is a reason why Helen and not Haley then, but currently irrelevant for now. I didn't find an adequate hairstyle from the game, but that's why I chose one similar to the one in the side story. There are still lot of details to be refined, but what is there is. Attempt number 1.

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Great job!! This vn deserves a fan art thread.
 
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Crimsonfiend76

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Other than earning love points, does it make a difference in who we choose to be with at the end of chapter 4? If I pick one sister, will that essentially close the other's path?
 

rafa30

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TheGreys

8gb to download :oops:
you could convert the images to another format without losing quality and reducing the size of the game in gigabytes
Webp might be a good option
 

El Pene Del Diablo

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just getting into ep 5 it seems like entire sections of conversations are getting completely skipped. anyone else experience this?

for example: the meeting with White, you tell him you were with Hailey last night, then he asks you a a question, it flashes to you then right back to him sending you away. this happens in many other conversations.
 

Eonor

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Made a compressed Android port of The Grey Dream Episode 5 with Haley's Patch, colombeen's gallery unlocker and SteelyDan14's walkthrough mod.

Got some basic gestures loaded in: swipe up for save menu, swipe down to hide UI, swipe left to rollback and swipe right to skip. Save files are now stored in the Documents folder. This sometimes means that you may need to close and re-open the port after installing so the save folder is properly created.

Please let me know if you encounter any issues with the port and I'll see what I can do to get them sorted.

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Edit 19/08/24: Updated this port with SteelyDan14's walkthrough mod.
Updated my Android port to include SteelyDan14's mod
 
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deadh30775n

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I kind of feel the same. I always prefer a good story, but I have been struggling to get into this through the first 4 episodes. It just hasn't grabbed me. But I've persevered, because of the hot ladies and the potential. I've got my fingers crossed, when I get around to episode 5, it will drag me in. :)
Even most of the h scenes are with random girls you meet in parties and gym. And there's one scene in episode 5 with a main li that come out from nowhere...like wtf how can they give a scene with a main li without any progression.

I can ignore all that but they seriously need to work on the writing part. Everything else is okay to an extent. Atleast just change the writing for the h scenes. It must be the first time for me that I couldn't get it up during sex scenes.
 

deadh30775n

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The story isn't the best but I wouldn't call it atrocious.
Mm NO, story isn't atrocious, writing is...and that's what I said. Story is avg at best but definitely not the worst I've seen.
The fact that the MC isn't living with a landlady and her daughter automatically makes it above average for an AVN.
For you maybe.

For me there are tons of AVN's that are in the top of my list like LOML, ripples, OIAL, desert stalker and many more which do have a landlady/tenant storyline.
 

kagancy

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Mm NO, story isn't atrocious, writing is...and that's what I said. Story is avg at best but definitely not the worst I've seen.

For you maybe.

For me there are tons of AVN's that are in the top of my list like LOML, ripples, OIAL, desert stalker and many more which do have a landlady/tenant storyline.
I'm working on the rendering and some aspects of the story for our game, but I'm not involved in the writing process. I have a question for you. Please don't take this the wrong way—I don't believe our game is outstanding. However, when you mention that the writing needs improvement, it would be incredibly helpful if you could provide us with 3-4 specific examples. This way, we can better understand what you're referring to and make the necessary adjustments. As it stands, I’m struggling to grasp exactly what you mean when you say the writing is bad.
 
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