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The new Fast and the Furious? Which wrestler will appear in this episode? I would rather be for Ronda Rousey than John Cena
It's so nice to have "normal" models in this game... Women who have curves but are not hentai milf fantasy/morbidly obese.
The story is interesting, but has several opportunities for improvement. I would highly recommend the dev consider this...
- Have a Native English speaker revise the dialogue. There are many typos and mis-used words.
- Break apart the 4-line long lines of dialogue. Filling the screen may seem fine, but some readers don't like more than 2 lines at a time.
- Render more of the racing action. This is a game based around racing and having multiple instances of blackscreen descriptions takes away from the premise.
- Time-skips could be filled in better with more relationship-building scenes, especially with the women MC has sex with.
- There was at least 1 instance where someone called the protagonist "MC" instead of having the name tag code in that spot.
- Animations would help this game to the n-th degree. Sex animations, racing animations, instead of slideshows and still renders.
- 3+ renders of MC has his nipple clipping through the shirt he's wearing. Or something flesh colored on his chest and in his armpit. Photoshop or re-renders would be QOL improvements.
- Add a slider to settings to make the dialogue box visibility customizable. More often than not, the renders of nudity are obscured by the black box gradient.
I'm intrigued with how this game will continue. Hoping these minor fixes won't detract or distract you from advancing the story.
The only real moment I found hilarious was when the best friend mentions that a car battery is inexpensive... Especially one to run the computerized engine monitoring system... We're talking easily $175-$300 for that battery, which is very expensive to most people.
The story is interesting, but has several opportunities for improvement. I would highly recommend the dev consider this...
- Have a Native English speaker revise the dialogue. There are many typos and mis-used words.
- Break apart the 4-line long lines of dialogue. Filling the screen may seem fine, but some readers don't like more than 2 lines at a time.
- Render more of the racing action. This is a game based around racing and having multiple instances of blackscreen descriptions takes away from the premise.
- Time-skips could be filled in better with more relationship-building scenes, especially with the women MC has sex with.
- There was at least 1 instance where someone called the protagonist "MC" instead of having the name tag code in that spot.
- Animations would help this game to the n-th degree. Sex animations, racing animations, instead of slideshows and still renders.
- 3+ renders of MC has his nipple clipping through the shirt he's wearing. Or something flesh colored on his chest and in his armpit. Photoshop or re-renders would be QOL improvements.
- Add a slider to settings to make the dialogue box visibility customizable. More often than not, the renders of nudity are obscured by the black box gradient.
I'm intrigued with how this game will continue. Hoping these minor fixes won't detract or distract you from advancing the story.
The only real moment I found hilarious was when the best friend mentions that a car battery is inexpensive... Especially one to run the computerized engine monitoring system... We're talking easily $175-$300 for that battery, which is very expensive to most people.
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Dem thicc girls need luv, too! Jus' Sayin'
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Sure, the more body types the better. It was just a joke, I prefer thicc girlsDem thicc girls need luv, too! Jus' Sayin'
CyberTurul do you plan to keep this kinetic mainly ask because you have the lesbian tag planed which i personally dont like game looks interesting but if that kind of thing will be unavoidable then i probably wouldnt try it
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THX 4 the share.
Tell me the Firenova is in the game. You gotta have a big back seat for funtime, am I right?
Tell me the Firenova is in the game. You gotta have a big back seat for funtime, am I right?
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A Kinetic novel as a first project is not a bad choice.
The girls look great and the racing setting, although a bit overused lately, is infinitely better than the trite college cliché.
Good luck with the game, dev! Sok szerencsét!
The girls look great and the racing setting, although a bit overused lately, is infinitely better than the trite college cliché.
Good luck with the game, dev! Sok szerencsét!
yeah if you actually have a story to tell, kinetic is a good choice. and why nobody mentions music? I am pleasantly surprised by opening track, great selection
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For reference: A HKS turbo kit for a JZA80 is around 7k USD. A Bride bucket seat around 1.2K USD on sale.
So yeah, I'd say it 200 USDs for a battery are nothing when properly looking into making your car street-illegal.
Looking at this, NFS Underground needs a remaster instead of TES Oblivion.
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The next best thing is 2025 Tokyo Xtreme Racer for PC of the Shutokō / Kaido Battle game series.
The older ones with playstation and Sega consoles might remeber.
Ah the Supra...reminds of Smokey's Trust/GReddy 1001HP Supra.
I like when devs pays attention to little details like changing the people in the blurred background of renders to make it more real and less static. Shows love and dedication.
.... problem is .... most renpy defs only think, they had a story to tell ... at least this one is the sports car category - sometimes there's even sex scenes and most likely the girls look hot in such category. But the best is: nobody thinks street racing and night doesn't fit together .... while yesterday we had 2 or god only knows how many vampire renpys. Somehow vampire defs think day and vampires fit together lol... The one I tried (no vampire tags, but hot girls previews) ... "... vampires are real ... for decades these live among us .... " 1GB, no sex, one blowjob by the servant with the ugly hair ... well I realize competion is hard... especially if same day (also yesterday) one finds a renpy on a platform for pirated video games that is called: The.Bible.Build.14535264 ... and surprise surprise ... it's the bibel in different versions. I tell you one thing - if defs would do, what they can do best - erotic scans and follow what 3d comix does and real porn - we had a lot good visual novels here. So actually I downloaded these 3.5 GBs because from school, I remembered there might be some interesting stories in there. I wouldn't have done that, if lots of defs stayed away from things they're not capable of and simply go with the porn. So skipping the dialogs is the basic action, we read that all the time ... the only ones, that don't read are the defs, they only look at the five stars. So that's mostly true since we hardly have ultra super games here ... lol ... what's so difficult in writing : ... Baby I wanna suck your dick ... lick my pussy ... or what ever .... I'm positive about this one here : The Harem Garage [v0.18] [CyberTurul] probably a bit of skipping, hot girls and maybe they're even horny like hell ... I'm up to it ---- porn is not to bore the people --- bored people consume porn ...
good day&night for everybody.
good day&night for everybody.
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CyberTurul A few questions, if I may:
Will the Mc be the only person shown on screen having sex? And are characters going to talk about their past sexual experience or can we head cannon that they are not sexual active/experienced?
Also, will this be a true harem story? Or is it just a "Mc gets to fuck girls but still ends up with a single chick?" Or something else?
Is lesbian sex avoidable, and/or does it only happen in the presence of the MC and not behind his back? Lesbian is something in certain context I enjoy, but in others (and far more often) turns me off entirely.
Finally, is there any chance for incest in this (either official or via a patch)? If not, it's cool, it is one of my favorite tags but isn't required for me to enjoy a story as long as you don't tease (or worse like have them banging others) family members by having like a hot sister or something, just wondering.
Will the Mc be the only person shown on screen having sex? And are characters going to talk about their past sexual experience or can we head cannon that they are not sexual active/experienced?
Also, will this be a true harem story? Or is it just a "Mc gets to fuck girls but still ends up with a single chick?" Or something else?
Is lesbian sex avoidable, and/or does it only happen in the presence of the MC and not behind his back? Lesbian is something in certain context I enjoy, but in others (and far more often) turns me off entirely.
Finally, is there any chance for incest in this (either official or via a patch)? If not, it's cool, it is one of my favorite tags but isn't required for me to enjoy a story as long as you don't tease (or worse like have them banging others) family members by having like a hot sister or something, just wondering.
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