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I'm not familiar with the text version of the game, but I really like what I see here.
I like MC, female characters and the dynamics of the relationship between them. I don't really like BDSM, so I'm glad that you give a choice in scenes and in dialogues with "Jenny" and the wife
Now, about what I did not like much.
- The game feels like a kinetic novel with the illusion of choice.
Are you honest with your daughter? Are you trying to control her or make her more confident? Are you being gentle with Jenny, or are you disciplining and humiliating her?
The only choice that seemed to matter was whether you were being honest with your wife or not.
- I didn't like the MC's naivety towards Gregory.
Throughout the game, the protagonist creates the impression of an intelligent, self-confident man who understands women and knows how to manage relationships.
But his blindness and naivety towards the director simply stands out against the general background.
His question to himself is "why do all young actresses so do not want to be near Gregory, and why is it so inconvenient for them to communicate and work with him? hmm mystery" practically forced me to smash my face with a facepalm.
Really, why does not attach your minor (?) daughter to this sweet and completely not creepy gentlemen? What could go wrong?
I understand that this is a plot solution, but, at least to me, it seems very unnatural.
And again, except for these moments, I really like the game, and I look forward to continuing.
EDIT: and a slight inconsistency in the dialogues.
If in the park you do not press on Jenny to tell about her sister and her master, she does not say that she swallowed.
But then, at the hotel, after the blowjob, MC speaks to her as if she mentioned it.
I like MC, female characters and the dynamics of the relationship between them. I don't really like BDSM, so I'm glad that you give a choice in scenes and in dialogues with "Jenny" and the wife
Now, about what I did not like much.
- The game feels like a kinetic novel with the illusion of choice.
Are you honest with your daughter? Are you trying to control her or make her more confident? Are you being gentle with Jenny, or are you disciplining and humiliating her?
The only choice that seemed to matter was whether you were being honest with your wife or not.
- I didn't like the MC's naivety towards Gregory.
Throughout the game, the protagonist creates the impression of an intelligent, self-confident man who understands women and knows how to manage relationships.
But his blindness and naivety towards the director simply stands out against the general background.
His question to himself is "why do all young actresses so do not want to be near Gregory, and why is it so inconvenient for them to communicate and work with him? hmm mystery" practically forced me to smash my face with a facepalm.
Really, why does not attach your minor (?) daughter to this sweet and completely not creepy gentlemen? What could go wrong?
I understand that this is a plot solution, but, at least to me, it seems very unnatural.
And again, except for these moments, I really like the game, and I look forward to continuing.
EDIT: and a slight inconsistency in the dialogues.
If in the park you do not press on Jenny to tell about her sister and her master, she does not say that she swallowed.
But then, at the hotel, after the blowjob, MC speaks to her as if she mentioned it.
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- Sep 3, 2018
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pleasantly surprised, did not expect this from same dev that normal just make bunch of lines and expect someone else to add images/animations.
will continue to watch this, hopefully you can avoid ntr and train the other girl your self in the future
will continue to watch this, hopefully you can avoid ntr and train the other girl your self in the future
I have never expected anyone to add images/animation! But is grateful that someone wanted to do that.
All I have done is write some stories and publish them for free on F95zone. I do not expect many people to like my stories either. But since I have spent so much time writing, and I thought that maybe some people would enjoy reading it, I chose to publish it for free on F95zone.
I do not understand why people who don't like text based stories or any other thing that my games are tagged with waste their time on my games or feel the need to share their thoughts in my threads. If this is not the kind of game/story that you like to play then please go and play something else!
And there has never been any ntr in any of my stories, I just put the tag in because that seemed to be the only way to stop a pointless ntr discussion that had started in one of my game-threads.
- Sep 12, 2021
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Not directly: Fugazi is the name of a prolific and very popular creator that sells assets for DAZ/Poser. Mostly props, rooms and sets, like the photo set used in the first pic.Looks interesting, let's give it a go.
PS: Is the lighting in the first pic a reference to the Band Fugazi?
View attachment 1490011 if not, you should check them out.
But maybe Fugazi's own name is a reference to the band Fugazi.
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I'm happy to see the dev managed to get scene renders for this. It has a chance of a good end product now. It's okay if they're a little more basic (character models are nice though) because the writing will carry this one. It's a unique intriguing setting. With characters that can almost pass as real people if you squint, more than enough for a porno. The taboo aspect is a good center focus for the story. Also I hope there will be more bizarre rituals by the society to add some more unique flavor.
If it seems too railroaded for some, more choices can be added later. User feedback can be an excellent guide.
There's one thing though that immediately pops out to me as a negative which is that the animations are terrible. Every single one needs to be tweaked to not look creepily unnatural. Real people just can't bend that way. Should not be a hard fix but it will take some effort.
If it seems too railroaded for some, more choices can be added later. User feedback can be an excellent guide.
There's one thing though that immediately pops out to me as a negative which is that the animations are terrible. Every single one needs to be tweaked to not look creepily unnatural. Real people just can't bend that way. Should not be a hard fix but it will take some effort.
Yes! More choices will be added later and even if the choices you have seen in day 1-4 feels insignificant there will choices later on that will have big impact on the story. It's absolutely possible to impact the story and some input from Patrons have already influenced the story. (We have reached day 11 in the text-based version)
Yes, we are aware of the fact that the animations is a little stiffy, but the artist and I decided that it was better than nothing.
- Apr 29, 2018
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I have gotten most of the gallery unlocked, but the second image on the bottom line is still greyed out. It looks like it should be found after you have the chance to punish Jenny or not, but I've tried what I thought was every option, but still can't unlock it. Does it have a trigger before the punishment scene or something? Or did I just miss something?
- Nov 12, 2017
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My congratulations to the creator of the game. Thank you.
The game creates pretty high expectations for me.
I will be pending of its development.
I don't want to play the text version because I don't want to spoil it.
I just hope it doesn't end up on the abandoned list.
PS: Are you planning a future patch with total incest (with the apprentice) and lolicon (choosing relationships of the characters and their age)?
The game creates pretty high expectations for me.
I will be pending of its development.
I don't want to play the text version because I don't want to spoil it.
I just hope it doesn't end up on the abandoned list.
PS: Are you planning a future patch with total incest (with the apprentice) and lolicon (choosing relationships of the characters and their age)?
I think it's just going to be one version. Incest will be a major part of this story so for those who gets uncomfortable with that should not play this . I do not mention the age of most of the girls in the story so it's whatever your mind allowes it to be (But I do start the game be writing that all characters are at least 18 )
- Jun 5, 2018
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i have a question, i noticed that there are no sharing tag in the planned but considering how the society behaved in your earlier game, i would like too know if you can keep the daughter for the mc, i must admit the more or less forced thing with the daughters friend in the last game was a bit too much for me and btw cheers for getting this illustrated good luck
If the MC is "doing his job" then he should be able to protect his daughter from any bad things. We of course know from the previous story that Angelina will become a member of THS, but the MC should be able to keep her for himself.i have a question, i noticed that there are no sharing tag in the planned but considering how the society behaved in your earlier game, i would like too know if you can keep the daughter for the mc, i must admit the more or less forced thing with the daughters friend in the last game was a bit too much for me and btw cheers for getting this illustrated good luck
- Jun 5, 2018
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by doing his job what what do you mean exatly, watching out for her or getting closer too her or what, or do you mean doing a good job for the society, i am a writer myself so i always liked your stories but before the changes you did in the old game there was definately elements that made me uncomfortable and gregory worry me a bit.
Yeah the first ending in 2nd Chance made some players uncomfortable so I had to create an alternate path that made it possible for the players to avoid that.
By doing his job, I of course mean protecting her and building a strong relationship with her. I don't want to go into more detail at this point, but it doesn't sound like an unlikely scenario that he at some point will need to choose between loyalty to his daughter and loyalty to THS.
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